Membership status: Member
Bio:
Not much to say really. I don't write much Buffy, but what there is I wanted to share with the wider audience.
Categories: NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Action
Warnings: Violence, Adult Language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 151827
Date: 01/03/2007 Title: Chapter 21: 21
Wow, you know I don't think I breathed for the entire chapter. Majorly hot. And kinda sweet.
Date: 01/03/2007 Title: Chapter 25: 25
That was fantastic. Hilary's explanation of Spike's 'condition' and most of all how Buffy mellows more and more by the minute. And yes I can't wait for the next chapter. ;)
Date: 01/03/2007 Title: Chapter 26: 26
Oh my, hot doesn't even come close as an adjective. Volcanic is more like it.
Date: 01/03/2007 Title: Chapter 42: 42
that is the best view, when babies fall asleep on top of hunky men. Sigh
And it is amazing how you manage to bring in teen Dawn's tendencies to make herself known even though she is a mere babe. Very funny. Great story.
Date: 01/03/2007 Title: Chapter 44: 44
From your author's notes I gather that this has been a real odyssee for you. Real life things happen - good and bad - and time just slips by. So I have to quiet selfishly say that i am glad I only caught this when it was done. The epilogue doesn't feel rushed, mainly because at that point the story is over. I like how you include hints to what happened on the show.
So yeah, finished this in one go and it too me all day, but it was well worth it. Definitely one of my favourites.
Categories: General NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Adult Language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 21798
Date: 07/04/2006 Title: Chapter 8: part 8
Very very hot and kudos for Spike for showing self control above and beyond the call of duty. Deserves an award for that i should think.
As I said, very good and I like the fact that you build hte whole alternate thing in just a couple of sentences in the first chapters.
Categories: General Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15386
Date: 06/17/2006 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8
This is nice and sweet but I think what I like best is the last line.
Author's Response: Thank you. Glad you liked.
Categories: NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: Adult Language
Series: None
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115299
Date: 06/13/2006 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 11: 'It's Hard to be a Female'
I can't believe you have no reviews for this. Then again I could have been writing one for every chapter, but I was too busy finding out what happens next, so i hope you'll forgive me.
Right to the story, the good and the okay. I really like this story, it's well written and thought out, that much is obvious. The characters are very close to character and yet not, which is fitting seeing as this is AU and plays in a different time period.
I absolutely adore your little descriptions that hint at the show itself. My favourite would have to be when Buffy describes Spike as a demon in human form. Very cool.
My only problem with this is that I don't find teh Riley situation believable. It doesn't seem quite feasible that Buffy would string him along even though she thinnks he is boring and a hypocrite. But seeing as I have a string suspicion that he and the reverend will turn out to be the robbers I can see why you would have him around in a bigger capacity for a while longer.
Plus this is written so well that I can deal with the odd jarring note.
If I could rate this in stars it would get four out of five, cause writing the characters believably in a different time period is one of the hardest things you can do. Check out Lost in Time for another story that does that really well.
Date: 06/13/2006 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 12: Part I 'Elizabeth'
You know it's weird. When I first read that the doctor was called Wilkins, I was a bit weirded out, cause you know huge demon thing. BUT having said that, it actually makes sense. When you take away the monster thingy he was a really nice man, the nicest enemy ever. And he was so family orientated that I could see this happening.
Good job.
Author's Response: Thank you.
I didn't even realize that anyone was still reading this one!
It's one of my faves because it's dear to my heart.
Yes, things are heating up in Wyoming and I hope you stick with this.
Thanks again,
spuf
Date: 06/14/2006 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 28 & Epilogue: '1939'
My mistake. You, of course have loads of reviews. In my defense whenever I looked up I happened to be at a chapter in which there were none.
Anyway, moving on. I really liked this story, altough I found the jumping about in the last few chapters a bit strange. Especially the two that are back to front. In one Rupert is already dead and in the next he dies. Bit confusing, but no big deal.
Here's another thing, even though we all know these characters, you do exposition so well that if you changed the names, you could sell this on the open market.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your interest in my little drama.
I missed my faux pas about Rupert!
I have to admit, I've thought about publishing this before using other characters as this is somewhat based on my mother's family history.
My mother is elderly and is very proud of her family (for the most part! LOL!)
I originally posted this story on BS Central without benefit of spell check or beta and was not particularly happy with it.
I did like the input I got from both sites and am very happy and proud of this story.
Thank you again,
spuf
Categories: General NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Action, Angst
Warnings: None
Series: I Know You verse
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 67013
Date: 06/09/2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One
Oh, she is an idiot and Dawn once again called it the way she saw it. That Willow just never learns her lessons does she? Tabula Rasa anyone? Anyway just wanted to say that I really like this story. Good start and the little touches like Kennedy being a cow fit in nicely without distracting.
Author's Response: Thanks. I hope you continue to enjoy it.
Categories: General NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Action
Warnings: Adult Language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 322050
Date: 06/11/2006 Title: Chapter 54: Reveal not every secret
Cool. And I can't wait to see Jenner and Faith interact. Gonna be interesting.
Date: 06/21/2006 Title: Chapter 55: The shadow of power
And the tension mounts. Very cool. I like the fact that you let Faith hold herself back. Shows she's grown somewhat.
Keep up the good work, definetley one of my favourites.
Date: 10/11/2006 Title: Chapter 65: Wild Justice
Wow!
Talk about exciting. Was on the edge of my seat the entire chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next. And how they get Connor back. They do get Connor back, right?
Date: 04/19/2007 Title: Chapter 76: First step home
Love it, love it love it. Hadn't been getting my alerts for a while, so I had some chapters to catch up on. More happiness for me. Love the story.
Connor all grown up, or at least more grown. And can't wait to find out what will happen to Willow. Where and maybe when she will show up.
Date: 05/31/2007 Title: Chapter 78: Just like heaven
Aaaaaahhhhhhhhh!!!!!! TWINS!
happa dance happy dance happy dance
I just love this. And yes, uhm, seriously hot
Categories: Serial Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Adult Language
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29775
Date: 06/11/2006 Title: Chapter 15: Surprises
Oh, Gunn is such an idiot. Doesn't he know that the path to hell is paved with good intentions. And he doesn't even have that. He just likes the fact that all the big cats, who just ignored him as a streetrat are now in his power to an extent. It's going to end in tears, I just know it.
I really like your description of how empty Buffy feels and that not even demons are called ot her, as if her despair was an illness they could catch.
Categories: General Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Action, Angst
Warnings: Violence, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 109 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 335000
Date: 07/03/2006 Title: Chapter 27: The Surprise
You know, I have to force myself to slow down and actually write a review, cause I am just too curious to see what happens next.
You know, your Buffy is genuinely terrifying in a bad way - veiny Willow times ten way. And the sad truth of the matter is that she is right. The others don't really care about Spike.
And I hope Xander is punched - cause he is just a git.
Date: 07/03/2006 Title: Chapter 39: Tell It Like It Is
You know I don't know where to start. You perfectly out into words things that have been bugging me about seasons four onwards ever since I saw them for the first time.
I hope Joyce tears them all a new one and maybe slaps Xander cause I just know he's going to put his foot in it. And god Willow, on the dark path so soon. They should all be horsewhipped.
Date: 07/04/2006 Title: Chapter 53: Becoming Me
Oh dear, they really are in trouble...
Categories: General Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Action, Horror
Warnings: Violence, Adult Language
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 70385
Date: 06/14/2006 Title: Chapter 9: Likeminded
Oh dear, Spike on a rampage, The guards wont know what hit them.
Author's Response: Best way I can think of to blow off some steam. Thanks for reviewing!
Categories: General NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Adult Language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 135370
Date: 07/05/2006 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Well, at least we know the grapevine works. That was hilarious. I almost fell off my chair laughing.
Date: 07/13/2006 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
Denial - not just a river in Egypt then. You know I have been trying to picture the following scenes and I just can't quite decide which one is going to be more amusing. Spike's face when he finds ut he claimed Buffy by mistake or Angel's face when he finds out where Spike claimed Buffy by mistake.
Then of course there is Buffy who is going to be all kinds of hurt and probably goes off on a bender how nobody would want her unless it was fabicated. And accidental claiming? way to make a girl feel special. He has some serious grovelling in front of him.
Date: 08/01/2006 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35
Okay, I am going to play a visual picture here, Buffy goes to school wearing Spike's red shirt and his jeans, and bumps into Angel on the way, who apart from having a great sense of smell is not really that stupid. It's is going to go down like a house on fire - lots of people screaming and calling the police and the fire brigade.
Seriously I really like this series and I can not wait to find out what Spike is going to say when he finds out what exactly is happening to his slayer and also when he sees the bite mark.
Date: 08/06/2006 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38
What an absolute slimy evil little - okay BIG - git. So as long as everything goes his way, Angel will let you have free will, but if he doesn't like the results then it is sayonara, do my will, minion, I know what's best. In some ways I think I prefer soulless Angel, at least he is upfront about manipulating people.
I really like this story, and I can not wait to see what Spike is going to do to Angel if he finds out that one hair on Buffy's was harmed.