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Categories: Orphan
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Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
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Date: 08/27/2006 Title: None
Poor Buffy, willing to follow Spike because he's at least the lesser of two evils. I feel such sympathy for her.
This is becomming something beautiful
Author's Response: hehe I know (about the lesser of two evils thing.)
Date: 08/27/2006 Title: None
I love this Spike. Little bit evil, but totally nobel and stuff. This is really sad, but I feel the direction it's taking and I believe there will be happiness at the end of a long, hard road.
Beautiful my dear :)
Author's Response: heh thanks. Yeah spike HAS to be a bit evil for awhile cause it's freaking season one and he just mET the slayer hehe. Otherwise you totally wouldn't buy it. ;)
Date: 09/04/2006 Title: None
Woah; nice twist! This is so good it gives me goose-bumps. I'm glad that you haven't written Spike 'instantly good' and Buffy 'instantly trusting'- you're right, it's a lot more believable to have it all happen slowly.
This is fantastic work :)
Author's Response: heh and even this is kinda fast, but hell i HAVE to get the plot moving, lots more to tell. ;)
Stay tuned...more surprises coming. :)
Date: 09/04/2006 Title: None
Very beautiful chapter. First there was Spike buying a house for Buffy and himself; indicating a future of togetherness. Then there was the ever-loved Clem [love to see him in fics!] and it was hillarious that you presented him as the demon-cable-guy! Then Buffy's reaction to saying what she thought to be the wrong thing- and Spike's reassurance [ending in tears of his own] was truly the highlight of the chapter.
Like I said: Beautiful.
Author's Response: thank you so much! Hearing specifically what people like or even don't like about a story means a lot. I'm such a review whore, I swear...when people go: "Oh i like it." I just wanna go: "which part? huh? huh?" but I restrain myself cause that's annoying. hehe :)
Date: 09/04/2006 Title: None
Oh no! Angel's back and I'm pretty sure Buffy's going to be too terrified to fight. I'm glad Tara noticed the lies in his aura- at least that means she might recognise the honesty and love in Spike's. My hearts beating all fast now- I just want to get on and read the next chapter!!
Author's Response: hehe. Glad you are liking it! :) and yeah even Human, Angel scares the shit out of her now.
Date: 09/04/2006 Title: None
Oh God, the goose bumps are back. This chapter was even more beautiful than the previous- with Buffy realising her feelings and trust in Spike, just as she was ripped away from him. Lovely but heart-breaking! This is superb in every way.
Plus, kudos for more Clem!
Author's Response: thanks! heh. I had to get spike some minions, and I thought...hey! clem! :) ;)
Date: 09/04/2006 Title: None
Yay! What an awesome ending to such a scary chapter! Poop Buffy, trapped in her own home and unable to invite Spike in! But look at me- I knew Tara would be the key to solving it all! Hooray!
I see a light at the end of the tunnel!!
Author's Response: The tunnel is a bit longer than you think ;)
But not necessarily for the spuffy loving...
It's probably going to be about 30 chapters. :)
Date: 09/06/2006 Title: None
Wonderful :) I'm really glad to hear that this story will be about 30chapters long
Author's Response: :) And I want to get it written. Don't want to rush it and screw it up, but I have an idea for another story that I think could really be good and I'm gonna write it next. (I have too many ideas..gah! ) I know I have a ton of unfinished WIPs but some of them will have to be completely overhauled. I've been rereading some of my earlier fics and god I can tell I really rushed some of them the writing is horrible. ugh. So I'll probably have to overhaul them. :)
Categories: NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Adult Language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 33488
Date: 11/19/2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter one: Ok I'll do it
Squee!! Nice openning!
Loved! xx
Date: 11/19/2006 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Till tomorrow pet
Brilliant!
A great flavour to both personalities- and the initial distaste they feel for each other is intriguing!!
xx
Date: 11/19/2006 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Nice space suit
Oooh. Lovely. And the image of Spike in a tight silverness = oh-so-scrummy!!
Date: 11/19/2006 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4- You Are a Hell of a lot More Than That
I love Buffy's vulnerability at this point- it's gorgeous. And Spike is so already falling!
xx
Date: 11/19/2006 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5- You Played That One Well
Hee hee! Can't wait to see our favourite couple hiding under baseball caps, coming out of a supermarket!
Another great chapter- Spike is so gallant =)
Date: 11/19/2006 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6- I Think They Saw Us
Bless them, both in denial. Can't wait to see the fireworks which I'm sure are on their way!! xx
Date: 11/19/2006 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Flawless
Beautiful chapter. And I love the depth you've added to Buffy's character- it's so endearing.
Date: 11/19/2006 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - We Are Spuffy
Ooooh- fantastic twist- poor Buffy though, I wonder how she'll handle it...
Actually, wait! Not poor Buffy- lucky Buffy, very very lucky!
Date: 11/19/2006 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9- “In LA, It’s Called Acting”
Hee hee, Buffy and alcohol are unmixy things, as we all well know.
I wonder how this phone call will progress!
Date: 11/19/2006 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10- I Like That
Oh, she blurted. But he was cute and adorable. How could he not love her? The silly little drunken fool! xx
Date: 11/19/2006 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter eleven: You make me want to be nice
Oh, my heart is all fluttery. Poor Buffy, she needs to learn her worth- she really is a lovely character. Come on Spike- let her know!! x
Date: 11/19/2006 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Are we Friends?
Lovely chapter- I'm glad they made up and Spike was able to put the game face away. Nice imagery too =)
Date: 11/19/2006 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Rehearsal
Oh no, I think a rehearsal is a great idea- tee hee hee!! Great chapter. You portray Buffy's nerves so perfectly that it's just sweet!
Date: 11/19/2006 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: What's my scene
Squee! That was lovely- just lovely!! I can't believe Spike has gone to so much trouble, it's so adorable! And to think that, on first impressions, they really disliked each other!!
This fic gives me tinglies! xx
Date: 11/19/2006 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Lights, Camera, Action
Beautiful. Loved it immensley- it was great to see them getting so lost together. I really did adore this chapter! xx
Date: 11/19/2006 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: What have you done?
Oh no! And just like that it all goes wrong =[ I can't believe Giles was so mean- though it was a perfect twist to the plot. Poor little Buffy, she must be feeling so crestfallen now.
Make it better Spike, please? *whimper*
Date: 11/19/2006 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Just be discreet
Ooh, interesting twist and it's hello parker! Like to see how Spike'll handle this. At least he's on Buffy's side =)