Penname: MarzBar [Contact] Real name: Margaret Longstreth-Smith
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Beta reader here. In lust with Spike and other notable hunks. Now living in OZ with a rotten dial-up connection. Teehee!! I just got broadband although I'm still working on setting up the mail.
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Someone Blue by Dorians Kitten Rated: NC-17 Liked [Reviews - 24]
Summary: Set immediately following Willow's Will be Done spell during Something Blue (season four) and going AU from there. Free will has been returned, everyone's feeling's should be their own and yet Spike is left feeling the pain of a broken engagement. His wounded heart is no secret, but the Scoobies are at a loss to figure out why. Can they find a way to break the spell or will Buffy be stuck with a lovesick vampire sidekick?
Categories: General Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Adult Language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8447
[Report This] Published: 08/06/2011 Updated: 09/23/2011
Reviewer: MarzBar Signed Liked
Date: 08/06/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue & The Beginning

I'm so happy to see a new story from you!! Tyvm.

Summary: My own version of the Villain (Season 6 Episode 20) of Buffy the Vampire Slayer where Spike left and Buffy came to his pad to ask to take care of Dawn.

My version: Spike was there, he didn't leave (but planning to later on) but he doesn't wanna do anything to Buffy and the gang anymore.
Categories: General Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Buffy/Other, Rape, Spike/Other
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 891
[Report This] Published: 08/11/2011 Updated: 08/13/2011
Reviewer: MarzBar Signed Liked
Date: 08/11/2011 Title: Chapter 1: 6x20 Revision of Spuffy moment

Will You actually continue this? I like the fact that Spike is not cutting Buffy any slack. BTW, what rape??

Author's Response: It is where Riley came back with a wife and he caught buffy sleeping with spike. after buffy told spike she doesn\'t wanna sleep with him anymore he raped her in the bathroom.

Summary: Drusilla tests Spike and he fails spectacularly. What will he do now that he has nothing left but his obsession with the slayer?


Begins during the summer between seasons three and four. Turns into a complete season four rewrite with little resemblance to the events in the series. Finally Finished!!!!







Winner At the Sunnydale Memorial Fanfiction Awards for best Angst, best original character and best original character pairing. Thanks to all who voted!!!



Categories: NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Adult Language, Character Death, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 96592
[Report This] Published: 09/05/2011 Updated: 05/16/2012
Reviewer: MarzBar Signed Liked
Date: 10/24/2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

This story is really hotting up now. I'm loving it and looking forward to more soon.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: MarzBar Signed Liked
Date: 11/16/2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

OMG!! I love this. I just spent most of my day reading from chap 3 or so and can hardly wait for more. Please let Spuffy maim Walsh soon.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Out of Reach by Noelle Rated: NC-17 Liked [Reviews - 25]
Summary: Goes AU from “Wrecked”. After an explosion, Buffy is left with no long-term memory. Until her memory comes back, she needs to learn what it is to be a slayer, and why she feels so drawn to the blond vampire.
Categories: General Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25006
[Report This] Published: 10/03/2011 Updated: 01/12/2013
Reviewer: MarzBar Signed Liked
Date: 11/25/2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Six

I am loving this tale. I think Spike needs to make love to Buffy (maybe even bite her) and her memories will come back. More soon please, even if you don't like my pervy ideas.

Author's Response: Haha that\'s a thought! Thanks for the review :)

Summary: Alternate Season 5 Of Angel.



What might have happened if Buffy didn't leave Spike at the end of Season 7 of Buffy and went into the amulet with him.



What will Angel Investigations do when they land in Angel's Office together in Los Angelos?







What will happen to Buffy and Spike?



Will they finally be together?



Will Spike be the same person who went into the amulet or would he have changed?



Starts right at the end of Buffy Season 7 in the cave.









This is a completely up to date one, and i plan to finish it, let me know over the next couple of weeks if you have an ideas for the next few chapters.





Much Love as Always





xX Lilly Xx
Categories: General Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5334
[Report This] Published: 10/12/2011 Updated: 11/19/2011
Reviewer: MarzBar Signed Liked
Date: 10/25/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The End... Or is it?

Are you going to give us more of this soon?? Are they ghosty or are they solid and can they maim Angelass?

Author's Response: You won\'t have to wait long :) i\'m hopefully putting more up today xD and I\'m not going to tell you, you\'ll have to read to see what happens :) x

Summary: What if there was more to the Shanshu than what Angel found? What if it not only was about a vampire with a soul, but was also about time travel and a slayer? What if the Council of watchers knew more than anyone could ever have thought? Well let’s see what happens.

In this story, Angel season 5 never happened.

Categories: General Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Romance
Warnings: Character Death, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 22774
[Report This] Published: 11/03/2011 Updated: 12/25/2011
Reviewer: MarzBar Signed Liked
Date: 11/05/2011 Title: Chapter 2: Complete Rewrite

HooYah!! This is a good beginning. We need more please.

Assist Me by iivyy13 Rated: NC-17 Liked [Reviews - 77]
Summary: Buffy Summers has her career all sorted, she's personal assistant to one of Hollywood's sexiest actors, Spike Byrne. Of course all jobs come with a downside, hers just happens to be that she's in love with her boss. Can her crazy sister's wedding and Willow's drunken influences be enough to get her feelings out in the open or will her insecurities get the better of her.
Categories: NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Adult Language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12842
[Report This] Published: 12/19/2011 Updated: 07/04/2012
Reviewer: MarzBar Signed Liked
Date: 03/11/2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I'm liking this story a lot; even though it's AH. More soon please.

Author's Response: I\'m glad you\'re enjoying it, AH is what I write best I think so it\'s good I\'m doing it well :-) will try update soon. Thankyou for the review!

Meant to Be by wolffan200 Rated: NC-17 Liked [Reviews - 48]
Summary: Fred discovers yet another detail about Spike the ATS crew were unaware of and she wants answers. A well timed phone call (depending on your perspective) adds to the drama and spurs a visit from some familiar faces.
Categories: NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Adult Language, Sexual Situations, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 56750
[Report This] Published: 01/26/2012 Updated: 10/04/2012
Reviewer: MarzBar Signed Liked
Date: 02/06/2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Have I told you how much I love this fairy tale? It's fab and I wait with bated breath for the new chapters.

Author's Response: Hmm, I\'m not sure, but I could stand to hear it some more ;) Bated breath, well don\'t turn blue it might take a week. Although it is an incentive to get writing the next chapter quickly. Thanks MarzBar.

No Harm by Slaymesoftly Rated: 18 Liked [Reviews - 9]
Summary: What if Spike and Buffy had gotten carried away in Something Blue? And what if the spell broke while they were in the middle of being carried away?
Categories: General Fics
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5064
[Report This] Published: 02/21/2012 Updated: 02/21/2012
Reviewer: MarzBar Signed Liked
Date: 02/22/2012 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot

OMG!! I loved tthis and, as usual, it made me want more, more, more!

Author's Response: LOL Glad you liked it.

Summary: In Season Three’s episode “Lover’s Walk,” Buffy and Spike fall victim to a binding spell that was accidentally triggered during the fight at the Magic Box.

How will two sworn enemies react when their utmost desire to bring about the other’s death is now replaced with bizarre primal urges and lusty cravings? Then add a dash of telepathy, Angel as The Brooding Wonder, the Scoobies, and Giles’ frequent spectacle cleaning, and you have the makings of one helluva ride. Written for VioletRoze88’s challenge on EF of the same title

Runner-Up at Sunnydale Memorial Fanfiction Awards Round 26 for Best Unfinished, and Runner Up for Best Characterization: Spike---Many Thanks!!!!

*AS OF 8/9/12, THIS STORY IS ON HIATUS. THERE IS AN EXPLANATION AFTER CHAPTER 12, TITLED SIMPLY HIATUS.*

Categories: General Fics
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: Adult Language, Sexual Situations, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 24553
[Report This] Published: 03/26/2012 Updated: 08/09/2012
Reviewer: MarzBar Signed
Date: 06/22/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OMG!! Just a little licking and blood; is it enough to set Spike free?? More (much sooner) please!!

Author's Response: More will be posted soon, MarzBar! I love to know whatcha think!

Vitality After Death by kitkat Rated: NC-17 Liked [Reviews - 35]
Summary: When Angelus viciously raped and murdered their favorite daughter, the gypsies’ vengeance knew no bounds. Over a hundred years later, a group arrives in Sunnydale seeking the Slayers help. Why have they come? What do they want? Will their presence and story change what Buffy and the Scoobies believe about demons, souls, the fight between good and evil… even themselves?
Categories: General Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Romance
Warnings: Adult Language, Sexual Situations, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13768
[Report This] Published: 05/29/2012 Updated: 06/19/2012
Reviewer: MarzBar Signed Liked
Date: 06/13/2012 Title: Chapter 3: Story, part II

Typical Buffy; Queen of DeNile. More soon please.

Reviewer: MarzBar Signed Liked
Date: 06/10/2012 Title: Chapter 2: Story, part I

I just read this and am panting for more soon!!

Summary: A future fic (no comics references to speak of) that takes place in an anonymous American city that contains a minor hellmouth and the accompanying assortment of vampires and demons. The Council has provided a fair-sized squad of slayers to live there and keep things under control. Buffy is visiting to see if she can help out with a problem that has arisen. While Buffy is clueless for a while, I suspect readers will figure things out pretty quickly. :)
Categories: Ficlets/Song Fics, General Fics
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 42875
[Report This] Published: 08/11/2012 Updated: 10/05/2012
Reviewer: MarzBar Signed
Date: 08/14/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OMG!! Yummy Spike. I hope bitchy Buffy gets off her high horse and donates some blood to him for healing.

Author's Response: Bitchy Buffy? Um - that would be the girl who is in tears because he won\'t talk to her? I think they both have some work to do here. :) Thanks for reading!

Author's Response: Oops! Just realized you were reviewing Chapter One - Sorry! :)

Summary: In the middle of the night our two heroes are captured and tortured. Then suddenly the lights go out and they are running--they don't know who from or where to, but a battered slayer and a half broken vampire cling to each other, biding their time. Slayers are not meant to cower and this Slayer is never on her own.



Disclaimer: All rights belong to Joss Whedon I'm just kidnapping them and putting them through an awful, terrible ordeal.
Categories: General Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Action
Warnings: Child Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 167560
[Report This] Published: 12/05/2012 Updated: 12/02/2015
Reviewer: MarzBar Signed
Date: 02/05/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Flee Response

Wowee!! I just read the first five chapters and I am stoked! Great to have Wesley with them; he is so gorgeous, smart and reasonable. Morre soon please.