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Keep Holding On by TammyAsh666 Rated: NC-17 Liked [Reviews - 234]
Summary: Spike Rayne is the most popular guy in school. Buffy Summers is the new girl that gets under his skin. When she shows no interest in him, he's willing to do anything to get her attention. How will Spike react when he finds out something about her that he never would have expected? Will it bring them closer together, or tear them even further apart? Nominated at the Cradle of Humanity Awards.
Categories: NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: Adult Language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22511
[Report This] Published: 12/18/2007 Updated: 01/22/2008
Reviewer: PrettyGirlBPD Signed Liked
Date: 12/29/2007 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

These two are so cute! Love the verbally challenged Willow! OK, so we know that Spike has been a jerk b/c he has a lousy father but what is going on with Buffy? Going on to the next chapter...

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Date: 12/29/2007 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Of course a jealous Harmony is gonna go cause trouble that Buffy doesn't need. And poor Buffy, she's clearly very ill and it doesn't seem like they've had much luck with treatment yet. I'm really hating Parker too.

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Date: 12/31/2007 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Stupid Spike, doesn't he know the girl always finds out? It's nice to see him thinking differently about her and considering changing his ways. For Buffy's sake I hope she doesn't regret this!

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Date: 01/02/2008 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

This just screams all kinds of bad! It's like everything is good, Spike is learning to love and Buffy is letting him in. But I just can't enjoy it b/c I'm waiting for the other shoe to drop. Hoping for quick updates to put me out of my misery!

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Date: 01/04/2008 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Ok, so that was really adorable and a little bit hot! For a while I actually forgot about everything else going on in this story and could just enjoy the Spuffy goodness! Awaiting the aftermath...

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Date: 01/06/2008 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

There is no universe, real or imagined, in which I will ever not despise Parker! He has a knack for hurting Buffy when she's most vulnerable. Really hope Spike finds a way to fix this!

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Date: 01/08/2008 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Wow, you're really piling on the problems for these two! Glad Spike has so many advocates and has made it clear to everyone (except Buffy) how important she is to him. Worried about what's coming up next but hoping for an eventual happy ending!

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Date: 01/12/2008 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Glad things are better between them especially since she's going into surgery soon! I like this story but the timeline feels a bit rushed. Then again, that's how love works in high school!

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Date: 01/12/2008 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I'm so glad Buffy's surgery went well. I'm also proud of Spike for finally getting away from his sperm donor since you certainly can't call him a father. I hope these two have a bright future ahead of them, but I suspect they'll have more trials ahead because it can never be that easy!

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Date: 01/16/2008 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Okay, since Parker just mentioned he had sex with Harm I'm gonna go with hoping it's Parker's problem and Harmony just wants it to be Spike's. I'm sure now that I've put it out there there's no chance of that being the case but still gonna hope. Love all the cute teenage couples, especially Riley and Fred!

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Date: 01/17/2008 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

You can always trust Harmony to keep the drama going! Glad I was right about the baby. More happy couples please?!

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Date: 01/19/2008 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Awww, cute Buffy/Giles moment! Love Spike protecting his girl! And threatening Parker into helping Harmony! Is he trying to win some kind of knight in shining armor award?

Reviewer: PrettyGirlBPD Signed Liked
Date: 01/21/2008 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

These two are just too cute for words! I was surprised that Ethan left town, I was expecting a much more tragic ending to that relationship. Know it can't stay all rainbows and sunshine forever so bring on the angst, I'm prepared for it!

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Date: 01/23/2008 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Perfect! That was the right place and a great way to end this fic. I agree that more angst would have taken something away from the story. There was just the right amount of angst and more than enough good to make up for it! Great story!

Unseen by Marisol Rated: U Liked [Reviews - 21]
Summary: When William was a little boy, he had an invisible friend that he called Buffy. His mother and a child psychologist convinced him that his little girlfriend was just a product of his fantasy. But now, twenty years later, something happens that make hin wonder whether Buffy is really only a phantasm...
Categories: General Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4472
[Report This] Published: 12/21/2007 Updated: 03/17/2008
Reviewer: PrettyGirlBPD Signed Liked
Date: 12/22/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Invisible friend

Wow, interesting idea! I'm a little surprised his mother reacted so strongly to an "imaginary" friend since it's so normal for kids, especially when the go through big changes, but I suppose it was a necessary part of the back story. Really want to know why Buffy needs help and how he's going to react to it!

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Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0
[Report This] Published: 01/01/1970 Updated: 01/01/1970
Reviewer: PrettyGirlBPD Signed Liked
Date: 12/22/2007 Title: None

They're so cute! Love Angel as the older brother although, aside from the brooding, he seems a but more like Angelus. And that wedding was hilarious! Can't wait to see what comes out of this visit.

The One by chosen Rated: NC-17 Liked [Reviews - 65]
Summary: Five years ago, there was a battle and Buffy joined hands with a dying Spike. And now there's a new evil. Something bigger than they've ever faced before... But Spike gave Buffy a gift. And now she's stronger, faster and deadlier...
Categories: General Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Action, Angst
Warnings: Violence, Adult Language, Sexual Situations, Spike/Other, Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 26300
[Report This] Published: 12/24/2007 Updated: 01/18/2008
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Date: 01/12/2008 Title: Chapter 9: I Think Therefore I Am

Loving this story! I have a little bit of trouble believing that Spike's demon would treat Buffy so horribly. It seems to be feeding off of Buffy's already present guilt and making her suffer for causing Spike to be less than the demon he once was. I can't help but wonder if perhaps the absence of his demon is the cause for his amnesia. Hope things start looking up soon!

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Date: 01/13/2008 Title: Chapter 10: Soul Searching

Well that was a disappointing development! Glad to know it's The First being so cruel to Buffy rather than Spike's demon. But they can't restore his memories? Hopefully they can give him back his demon!

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Date: 01/16/2008 Title: Chapter 11: My World Upside Down

This is bad, so very bad! I'm wondering why Willow and Giles don't seem to be doing anything especially since the First has been trying to drive Buffy insane, and it's clearly killing her. Know there are dire consequences ahead due to this unknown spell and this witch who practices black magic, just can't wait to see them!

Reviewer: PrettyGirlBPD Signed Liked
Date: 01/19/2008 Title: Chapter 12: Memories

What exactly did this spell do? I know there were important consequences if Spike got back his memories this way but this seems like more than just the return of his memories. William was right about not having what made Spike Spike,Buffy has that! Hope everything gets figured out soon!

Author's Response: And I dearly hope for your sake that it gets figured out soon :) The spell was dessignated to return Spike's essence to him - which in turn would lead to Buffy being fully exposed to the First. Dundadun... Thx for all the wonderful reviews - they inspire me to keep this up. xoxo

Haven by Xela Rated: 18 Liked [Reviews - 30]
Summary: Post-Chose, Spike is pulled from the rubble of Sunnydale by a mysterious group of people. They want him healthy and whole, but for what purpose? And who is the beautiful blonde woman who haunts his dreams?
Categories: General Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: Violence, Adult Language
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 26326
[Report This] Published: 12/25/2007 Updated: 04/03/2008
Reviewer: PrettyGirlBPD Signed Liked
Date: 01/09/2008 Title: Chapter 2: Exposition

I've read most of your other stories, but I was really unsure about this after the prologue. You reeled me in with this chapter! Love the annoying Buffy in Spike's head! It was mostly the mutually shared dream that did it though. Excited for the next chapter now that Spike's awake!

Author's Response: I'm glad you gave this a chance; it's turning out to be a bit more...epic...than I originally envisioned. I'm hoping I can pull it off; I'm trying to break Spike and put him back together again, which isn't as easy as it sounds. We'll see. Thanks for sticking with me so far :) Your feedback? Totally appreciated! (And no worries, this is totally Spuffy, even if it takes me a while to get them together.)

Reviewer: PrettyGirlBPD Signed Liked
Date: 01/28/2008 Title: Chapter 3: Rebirth

Interesting! Like the idea of Haven and I think it's a great place for Spike to recuperate. Suppose he'll have lots of questions when he can stay awake long enough to ask them.

Author's Response: Or he could be inundated with lots and lots of information. We'll see ;)

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Date: 02/09/2008 Title: Chapter 4: Choices

Dumb girl! If she knew anything about Spike she would know that the need to go to Buffy will only make him work harder to get well enough to do so. Plus, he's already starting to get those feelings like he's forgetting something important. Alanna seems a little too attached to Spike considering he just woke up. I suspect that's going to become more important as this fic progresses!

Author's Response: Alanna's coming from the idea that he's going to go period, even if he can't walk. That Spike wouldn't stick around long enough to actually get better. And all will be revealed in time (cue mystical music.)

Summary: Buffy and Spike have been best friends through high school. He has plans to move to LA after graduation and she plans to attend UC Sunnydale. The night of graduation they share one night of passion, forever changing their friendship. Spike can’t bear the thought of asking her for more when all she wanted was a way to say goodbye to him before he left. And she doesn't want to be the one thing holding him back from his dream of LA...

Chapter 1 summary: 3 weeks after graduation, Buffy feels queasy after breakfast and begins to think she could be pregnant. She flashes back to graduation and the night she said goodbye to William.
Categories: NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74612
[Report This] Published: 12/25/2007 Updated: 05/26/2009
Reviewer: PrettyGirlBPD Signed
Date: 12/25/2007 Title: Chapter 1: A Parting Gift

I really liked the whole scene between Buffy and Will. You could see the unspoken feelings through their actions even without the knowledge that they felt that way. The pregnancy was expected after all the clues in the chapter, but I'd like to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, the morning sickness was the big clue... and the chapter title. :) I'm still thinking about how to proceed from here, but I will continue with it. Hugs ~ Duchess

Reviewer: PrettyGirlBPD Signed Liked
Date: 01/12/2008 Title: Chapter 2: Making the Call

Let me guess, Harmony? Ick! Poor Buffy, doing this alone when we all know that's not how William/Spike would want it. I hope they find each other before the baby is born because those Buffy-and-child-make-it-alone-until-they-one-day-run-in-to-Spike stories break my heart.

Author's Response: Oh, it is Harmony & yes I agree with Ick! But it's more for Spike and Buffy to work through. There's more excitement in the coming chapters! :) I hope you like it. Thanks for reading & reviewing!