Penname: kudagirl [Contact] Real name: Sharon
Member Since: 05/09/2008
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I write BTVS and Angel drabbles that I post on Live Journal.
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Summary: Hank Summers is the head of the Summers Mafia which is based in L.A. William “Spike” Giles is the co-leader for his family’s mafia branch in L.A. as well while his dad, Rupert Giles is at the head base in England. Hank and Spike need to alliance against the other two main mafias. Spike takes an interest in Hank’s oldest daughter Elizabeth Summers a.k.a. Buffy. In exchange for loyalty between the two men Spike demands for Buffy to be his mistress maybe even possible wife and Hank agrees. What will Buffy do when she is forced over to a man she thinks is just as horrible as her father and she is left to lead the life of a mafia leader’s mistress. Spike is intrigued by her innocence with mix of her stubborn streak and a mouth that seems to always put him in his place. Will Spike be able to tame her and get her to live with the life he leads or will she just shun him for the rest of their lives?
Categories: NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Adult Language, Sexual Situations, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 172480
[Report This] Published: 04/06/2006 Updated: 07/14/2013
Reviewer: kudagirl Signed Liked
Date: 07/27/2010 Title: Chapter 30: Her World

Wonderful update. I've missed this story. I wish I was a beta because I would love to be part of your work even in a minor way. I just don't have the chops to be a beta. Still, I love your work and hope to see more of it soon.

Hold the Line by wattie Rated: NC-17 Liked [Reviews - 314]
Summary: Left broken-hearted at the alter by her unfaithful fiancé Riley, Buffy boards a plane and flies to New York in an attempt to put the scandal behind her. With the support of her brother Angel she hopes to build a new life. Her brother is more than happy to have stay with him, unfortunately his roommate, Spike, is not.
Categories: NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25688
[Report This] Published: 01/17/2007 Updated: 01/28/2011
Reviewer: kudagirl Signed Liked
Date: 04/27/2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Moving out

I thought about this story the other day and wondered if it would be update. So happy to see this update. Buffy is running scared. Spike is angry. Lorne was amused, but now he knows. Too bad Buffy and Spike can't admit the truth to each other as well.

Summary: Rumours are flying around the Hellmouth and Buffy decides to keep an eye on Spike - is he the villian of the piece or the potential victim? A scrambled season five written for 10yearsofBTVS LJ.
Categories: General Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 64076
[Report This] Published: 11/14/2007 Updated: 04/28/2011
Reviewer: kudagirl Signed Liked
Date: 10/20/2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

The Joyce talking through the door was so funny. Loved it. She is trying to see Buffy as an adult. It's embarrassing Buffy no end. Hee!

The Truce by Eternal_red Rated: NC-17 Liked [Reviews - 442]
Summary: Once in a galaxy, far, far...oh, that’s been done. Right then. Humankind has been at war with the Aurelians for decades. When the two sides finally reach the point where negotiation is better than annihilation, a truce is called and a treaty negotiated on the planet currently under dispute. The peace treaty is cemented symbolically by the joining in marriage of the two youngest soldiers present, thereby throwing Buffy and Spike into a relationship that they really, really, don’t want. Although not a traditional Vampire versus Slayer scenario, it is close enough to be familiar.
Categories: Fantasy/AU
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Action
Warnings: Violence, Adult Language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 61133
[Report This] Published: 01/13/2008 Updated: 06/14/2010
Reviewer: kudagirl Signed Liked
Date: 08/07/2008 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Love the twist in the story. Fun figuring out who is who with the names being changed from the regular characters.

Author's Response: Glad you like kudagirl. Hard to keep spelling the names wrong but hopefully not confusing too many people. Thank you.

Reviewer: kudagirl Signed Liked
Date: 09/15/2008 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Buffy isn't going to sit and wait for Spike. She has trained and wants to fight. She isn't the meek little woman that some believe. Love that Anjell got a show of strength.

Author's Response: She'll have to prove herself in the coming campaign, but Spike is as yet the only one who really has an inkling about her strength ( and possibly now Anjell). That's half the fun of writing this. Thank you.

Reviewer: kudagirl Signed Liked
Date: 09/30/2008 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

So secrets were kept. Never a good thing with Buffy. She has to prove herself now. Spike is going to have a hard time watching and not being able to be with her. Might be good for him.

Author's Response: Yep, definitely time for some proper adventures for our girl. Don't worry there'll be plenty of opportunities to sneak under Anjell's radar - once they get over their own stubbornness.

Reviewer: kudagirl Signed Liked
Date: 11/28/2008 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

For some reason I didn't get a notice there were updates to this story. I just read chapters 12 and 13. Like how Buffy got into an adventure on her own. Tipsy Buffy is fun. Ennico was taking a huge chance messing with her. At least she told him to keep his hands to himself. He's lucky Spike didn't go after him. Spike is a goner. Hope Buffy realizes soon she feels the same way.

Author's Response: Hope the update thingy is working for you this time. Glad you enjoyed tipsy Buffy and you're right, Ennico should watch out for Spike. Our heroes will be spending more time together soon I promise.

Reviewer: kudagirl Signed Liked
Date: 02/01/2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Delighted to see an update of this fic. Missed it greatly.

So finally they are reaching The point of finding out what is expected of them. Now they will have to trust each other to survive.

Summary:
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You know what it means... whatever can go wrong, will go wrong. ‘Murphy’s Law’ comes into play from the moment our two favorite blonds meet despite any initial attraction to one another. What’s the result when a womanizing genius and a prudish workaholic are forced together in every way with no choice but to deal with each other 24/7? Tons of UST! Will it ever get resolved, or will they kill each other first? .... “Tell me somethin’, pet. Wha’s the real reason for your knickers bein’ in a twist aside from the possibility you put your plug in sideways?” …. “The fact you’re still breathing is number one on a very long list of reasons and oh-my-God... crude much?” Romance, comedy and mild angst.
Awards won, readers&judges choice: best author at Spark and Burn. Indigo Crypt – best author-runner up and Chosen Awards judges choice. Cradle of humanity: Winner - best wip, runner up – happy workers award. Nominated at Spark and burn for best wip/best fantasy - at Serenity on the Hellmouth Awards round 5 for best Spike fic and best Buffy fic - at Spuffy Awards round 15 for Best Buffy Characterization, best fanatasy angst and outstanding fanatasy fic and at Cradle of Humanity Awards for best story and best romance .
Categories: NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Adult Language, Sexual Situations, Buffy/Other, Spike/Other
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 145086
[Report This] Published: 01/29/2008 Updated: 09/01/2008
Reviewer: kudagirl Signed Liked
Date: 05/11/2008 Title: Chapter 17: Turning Point

Wow, they put it out in the open and still didn't get together. Are they waiting for some sort of bright star in the North Sky? A new chapter on Thursday would be a gift. You better not be teasing us. Really, please could we have a new chapter before the weekend? Pretty please with a naked Spike on it.

Author's Response: Hahahahhaah - call them clueless and scared, but they'll get there, I promise - it's spuffy after all. ooooo - naked spike on top - oh yes, you'll get your update this thursday, I promise - thanks for the fab review darling - snuggles.

Reviewer: kudagirl Signed Liked
Date: 05/18/2008 Title: Chapter 19: Domestic Bliss

Happy ending? Wasn't he surprised by her low key reaction when he asked about it? It was clear she didn't know what he meant by happy ending. LOL. Never understood why men think Happy Ending isn't real sex.

Then ego much? He couldn't believe why she couldn't see he was the best for her?

Now the whole slap fest-I had one of those with my ex, but it was with fists. It went on for awhile till we started laughing at each other. Have to say he never hit me again. Always had a bit of fighter in me myself.

Guess a big old wall will be built between them for awhile.

Author's Response: Giggles - she was as clusless as they come and he just didn't get it. Men sometimes... shakes head. And yeah, HUGE ego, but he adores her despite it coming out wrong, giggles - again.... men, shakes head. Oh god, sorry you had to go thru that with your ex, not a good thing. Been thru a relationship like that once - and once was all it took for me to learn my lesson and leave thank god... defintetly don't condone it and it comes from first hand experience unfortunetely. Well, as for a wall, I think you'll be surprised by next chapter, *winks*. I'm so glad you liked the chapter hon and thanks so much for the fab review. Kisses.

Reviewer: kudagirl Signed Liked
Date: 05/25/2008 Title: Chapter 20: Breaking Up and Making Up

So sorry to hear of the illness of your loved ones. Had to take care of my mom toward the end. Difficult, but wouldn't trade those moments for anything.

Love you story. Wondered if Riley was going to turn out to be the painful memory that messed with Buffy's head and heart. Spike and Buffy need to really talk. Surpised they didn't let this drift on too long, but a good surprise.

Author's Response: I know what you mean, My family took care of my mom and her dad towards the end as well.... never easy but so glad I could be there. Glad you enjoed the chapter and as far as Riley... oh yeah, he has a lot to do with why she's so messed up. But I can't do the reveal on it until a certain time frame - sorry... but it will make sense once I get there darling. Thanks again hon - kisses.

Reviewer: kudagirl Signed Liked
Date: 06/21/2008 Title: Chapter 22: Needing You

This must have been a difficult chapter for you to write due to death.

So good of William to step in and take care of Buffy this way. Being in her home town may open up some of her issues so that he will get to understand her a bit better. Small town America is so different than a big city or for a person raised in England. Small town America and small town in England are very different. Not so much the people, but the way of life. Different pace and local ways.

Author's Response: It really was - and funny enough, I'd written most of it before my m-i-l was given her diagnosis. But of course I wanted to plug ahead with it anyway because it does serve an important purpose in the fic. And indeed small town anywhere is different than cities. I hope you'll like the next chapter as they do bond some more sweety - thanks so much for the wonderful review. Hugs.

Reviewer: kudagirl Signed Liked
Date: 06/28/2008 Title: Chapter 23: When Love and Death Embrace

Death brings all kinds of emotions out and forces a person to take hard looks at their life. This must have been a difficult chapter to write. It was lovely.

Author's Response: Indeed it does, it' very powerful thing that brings a person to their knees about the real issues that matter in life. I admit it was a difficult chapter to write, but in a way, it gave me a chance to purge my own sadness as well. Thanks you for such a lovely review my friend - hugs you tight.

Reviewer: kudagirl Signed Liked
Date: 07/06/2008 Title: Chapter 24: Conversations

Lovely update. They are finally getting somewhere. Sweet Cordy is giving them the shove they both needed. Any chance Willie will be in Cordy's future? The photo of them is so sweet and cute.

Author's Response: ol - leave it to Cordy to intervene with her own brand of wisdom. But yes, they are definitely on the path now. As for a Willy/Cordy futuenjoyed the update sweety, thanks for the fab review - snuggles.re.... well, have a surprise up my sleeve on that one - that's all I can say, *winks*.I'm so happy you liked the pic and

Reviewer: kudagirl Signed Liked
Date: 07/14/2008 Title: Chapter 25: Explicit Intentions

First off thanks for Willy and Cordy. Love them together, but now wonder who Willy thinks would be better for Cordy.

Angel's a jerk , period.

The manip is beautiful. Love it.

Hope Buffy doesn't let Angel cause too much angst.

Author's Response: Hahahhaahha, glad you liked the chappy and pic, and of course that I wrote angleus evil enough for you to hate. It means I did my job well, giggles. Thanks for the fab review boo - smooches to you.

Reviewer: kudagirl Signed Liked
Date: 08/11/2008 Title: Chapter 27: There’s a First Time for Everything: Part 1

I had wondered if Buffy was still a virgin. She was so innocent about certain things like "happy ending". So William will be really emotional about being her first.

Writing or reading takes us away from our problems. It's a gift we share with each other. Thanks for sharing your world with us.

Author's Response: Ah, very god to have had that inkling before the news came out. I did try and leave clues along the way, lol. And yes, writing does take away troubles even if only for a little while - now i just have to get the muse to come out and play more often and i'll feel better - thank you boo, for everything - huggles.

Reviewer: kudagirl Signed Liked
Date: 09/04/2008 Title: Chapter 28: There’s a First Time for Everything: Part 2

Dang, now I need a smoke. That was, well, just hot. If this is what happens when your muse isn't working, I can't wait till he opens up.

Crystal by Vanilla Rated: NC-17 Liked [Reviews - 468]
Summary: A beautiful blonde is undercover for the FBI in Los Angeles. She is working as a computer hacker for one of the country’s richest, dirtiest, and most handsome businessmen, who just happens to have a few secrets of his own. Sparks fly, because don’t they always?
Winner at the Spuffy Awards! Reader's choice for Best Spike Characterization and Best Fantasty Saga, Judge's Choice for Best Fantasty 'We Missed The Bed, Again', and Judge's Pick. Nominated at the Cradle of Humanity Awards for the Happy Worker Award.

Categories: NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Action, Angst
Warnings: Violence, Adult Language, Sexual Situations, Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 61064
[Report This] Published: 02/08/2008 Updated: 03/18/2008
Reviewer: kudagirl Signed Liked
Date: 05/25/2008 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three

Love Buffy being partnered with Gunn. Fred being with Xander. Interesting choices. Wonder if Xander really does know Buffy from somewhere. I just love Spike in every way. Giles being all fussy about not being in control is funny. Can't wait for Lorne to be around.

Reviewer: kudagirl Signed Liked
Date: 05/25/2008 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Eight

Hot. Just hot. Now I am fanning myself.

Reviewer: kudagirl Signed Liked
Date: 05/25/2008 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter Nine

I think you have made my tummy flipflop and churn. So Liam is the bad arse in this. Spike must be really afraid if he just stood by and let this happen. You really went for the angst in this chapter. I'm so wigged out I can't even enjoy the moment between Buffy and Spike. Damn you are good.

Reviewer: kudagirl Signed Liked
Date: 05/25/2008 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter Ten

I understand Fred and Buffy talking about Spike, Liam and Dru because it furthers the story, but Spike was so firm about his privacy when he originally talked to Buffy it was odd. Odd in that Fred would talk about Spike's private business. Otherwise I understand how it move the plot along.

Reviewer: kudagirl Signed Liked
Date: 05/25/2008 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven

Love how the limo became part of a threesome. Nothing like hot sex in the back of car. Whoa baby!

Reviewer: kudagirl Signed Liked
Date: 05/25/2008 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter Twelve

Hate? Never. Had to have a little Dru drama didn't we? Dru may have married Liam, but that doesn't mean she will let Spike have a life with any happiness that isn't about her. Evil thing, Drusilla.

Reviewer: kudagirl Signed Liked
Date: 05/25/2008 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter Thirteen

To Dru Liam is Daddy and Spike is Boy. Somethings never change do they?

Just love Gunn and Buffy together. Makes for fun jealousy in Spike.

Bad Spike for taking it out on Buffy. Means he will have to be extra nice to her later. More fun for us.

Reviewer: kudagirl Signed Liked
Date: 05/25/2008 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter Fourteen

Love how you wove the lines from Buffy TVS into your story. That is always a treat when it is done well. Rejection doesn't sit well with Spike I bet. Going to be Hell to pay soon.