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Just a girl who loves fic.
I also post at Beyond Twilight and Spuffy Online. My LJ name is "impertinence", so if I ever go MIA over here, that's where to check for fic updates/excuses for why there haven't been any fic updates. ;)
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Categories: NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Violence, Adult Language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8004
Date: 05/15/2005 Title: Chapter 6: A moment of true hapiness
yep, caught it...nice touch w/ adding little bits from the show...plus a slightly edited version of Spike's wonderful speech, lol. So wonderful that Spike's treating her how she deserves... =)
Date: 05/15/2005 Title: Chapter 7: Smiles
*sniffle* oh my gosh, that was so cute!!!!!! I loved this whole story, it's absolutely adorable how he proposes to her after singing her that song...and nice touch with the white picket fence. AWESOME story!!!! =)
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0
Date: 06/03/2005 Title: None
Nice friendship between Spike and Illyria--it is just friendship, right? Loved the bit that Whistler and Eve are related, and maybe it's just awful selfish bitchiness, but I'm rather glad Angel's dead. I'm also glad you brought Conner and Lorne back into the story. And the "Blue and Anya" line had me cracking up, too =D
Author's Response: It was slo long ago I wrote this chapter I had to re read it....and I to cracked up on the Anya Blue line......and yes, they are only going to end up good friends.....
Date: 06/03/2005 Title: None
The whole Andrew thing--LOL. I really, really hope Buffy finds out that Spike's undead and kicking soon...and that she dumps the Immortal on his ass, since he's evil and all =D I don't usually read post-NFA fics, but I'm really liking this one. Now....update?
Author's Response: Buffy as to leave Rome I'm a couple chapters away fo getting her ass on a plane out back to US of A........
Categories: General Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Violence, Adult Language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 58928
Date: 05/22/2005 Title: Chapter 1: 1
wow...extremely interesting start...poor, poor Buffy! I'm glad to see that even though her life more than sucks, you've still got her being strong and surviving...can't wait to see when Spike comes into the picture =)
Date: 05/22/2005 Title: Chapter 2: 2
well, well, well =) now I really can't wait to see what happens next! great chapter, your description of the bar made me cringe (but in a good, poor-Buffy kinda way)
Date: 05/22/2005 Title: Chapter 3: 3
lol no I sorta guessed it would be his kid...hmm...you know, I'd love to write a glowing review listing all the things I loved about this chapter, starting with their less-than-auspicious meeting, but I've gotta go on to the next chap, because honestly, I'm dying to find out what happens next =)
Date: 05/22/2005 Title: Chapter 4: 4
nice little reconciliation thing at the end...very cute how they're starting to treat each other better. I loved Spike's nickname for the baby =)
Date: 05/22/2005 Title: Chapter 5: 5
yeah, it is...Costa Rica, huh? Interesting place...I wonder if they'll ever go back to Sunnydale? I'd love to see how Giles reacts to Buffy having a baby with Spike *evil grin* Great chapter, good way to move things along =)
Categories: General Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Action, Angst
Warnings: Adult Language
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19458
Date: 05/14/2005 Title: Chapter 1: Free
I like. Very much. Is Rayne part of the creepy plan stuff? 'Cuz I really don't like the guy... =) Gonna go read the other chaps now...
Author's Response: Thank you :) Yes he is but i have plans for him, i hate him too lol so they wont be pretty! Thanx for the review, made me smile :)
Date: 05/14/2005 Title: Chapter 2: A/N
computers suck ass =)
Author's Response: Well, mine does at least lol :)
Date: 05/14/2005 Title: Chapter 3: I'm a woman, hear me roar!
Heh. Nice touch w/ Passions. It must rock to have a loaded dad...The whole First Slayer thing: so life is her gift??? Who is she gonna give life to??? Spike??? That'd be cool...*scratches head* see now you got me all confused =)...wait. is the rescuer Giles? I mean, duh, the guy at the end is Spike, but...ARG! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE this story, PLEASE update as much as possible! =) oh and BTW, I wrote this kinda while I was reading, 'cuz I wanted to get all the reactions and stuff in, hence the kinda schizo style of the review...hope it helps!
Author's Response: Well the loaded part must be wicked but the deadbeet not so much. Passions just pooped into my head as an afterthought so thanx :) She wont give life to spike though she does give him something in a way.....cant say more then that yet, dont wanna spoil any chaps lol. the schizo is actually a great style to read and always humorous lol, I'll give you this much :it is Giles at the end. Thanx for all the great reviews and i hope youll like the next chap!
Luv Linz xxx
Author's Response: HAHAHA i wrote pooped instead of popped, lol. My bad but at least it was a funny kind of bad!
Date: 05/15/2005 Title: Chapter 4: Chosen
huh. so Angel's and Spike's roles are sort of reversed...interesting. Stupid Angel, can you make Spike kick his ass? lol kidding the plot twists you're coming up with are brilliant, I'm dying to know what happens since Buffy's future was changed. Speaking of Buffy, way to make her strong instead of some wimpy little girl. She didn't freak out at all when Giles told her about her being a vampire slayer and all that. *frustrated sigh* I really wanna know what happens next...this is what happens when I read really good WIPs =) pleeeeease update fast--I'm dying to know how things are going to play out!
Author's Response: Oh dont worry, Angel will get whats coming to him lol! Sorry the update took so long but i confused myself lol, hopefully the next chap starightens some things up. This was such a great review, thank you so much and i hpe you like the next chap. Love Linz :)
Date: 05/17/2005 Title: Chapter 5: A look into the past
OH MY GOD I love this fic!!!! Seriously the plot twists you just explained were worthy of the great Joss himself!!!!!! And this chapter does NOT suck! How can you say that???? Poor Spike, thinking Buffy's dead...very funny thing w/ "Pike", made me crack up. The Dr. Phil part, too =) It's so awesome how you made Spike and Angel's destinies change. I don't see how you can possibly think this chapter is awful! I'm practically dying from impatience...I want you to update NOW! lol in other words you did a kick-ass job! =)
Author's Response: OMG what an awesome compliment, thank you so, so much. The Pike thing is just funny to me because it was the first b/f we where shown in her life via the movie and Spike was kinda the last in the show. I thought my writing was less then par in this chap because i got pissed that i confused my self lol and i figured it showed in my writings. Thank you for thinking otherwise, ill be posting the next tonight :)
Date: 05/18/2005 Title: Chapter 6: It just doesnt beat
lol loved the part w/ how he must be evil b/c of his accent =) great job keeping spike's entrance the same! loved the ending, too =)
Author's Response: lol thanx i liked that part too! Thanx for noticing the entrnace as well, love hearing from you!!! I hope you like the next!
Date: 05/20/2005 Title: Chapter 7: The last six years....
very very cute =) loved the part about Giles' scary glare!
Author's Response: lol thanx so much and thanx for reviewing so much, love ya :)
Date: 05/20/2005 Title: Chapter 8: Sitting here with you
WOW, fast Spuffy--not that I'm complaining, or anything =) great chapter!
Author's Response: Yup but theres a reason for it that ill spill later on. :)
Date: 05/20/2005 Title: Chapter 9: Hypocrites
yay for Buffy, standing up to her friends! you know, I love Xander to death, but I couldn't stand how judgemental he was sometimes towards Buffy on the show. liked the bit with the pouty lip =)
Author's Response: thanx so much, i couldnt stand that about him either, he was wit a vengeance demon for christs sake!!! Glad you liked it :)
Date: 05/20/2005 Title: Chapter 10: "Once more with Feeling" Linz style!
liked the edited versions of the songs, although I have to say, your version of "Going Through the Motions" REALLY cracked me up =) all in all, awesome job...and looks like there'll be Spuffy in the next chapter. Yay =)
Author's Response: Thanx so much and i also cracked up with Going through the motions, it was supposed to be funny so yay me lol. My fave was Spikes new version of rest in peace. Thanx again and ill try to post later tonight! xxx
Date: 05/26/2005 Title: Chapter 12: Bloody Fucken Hell
bloody fucken hell sounds like a good way to describe it =)Love the way Giles passed out, it was very...Giles-like. So Spike has a soul, huh? Wonder how he's gonna react to that? I'm glad you gave him one...the whole "But I can't love a vampire with a soul!" thing is nice and all, but a bit worn out in terms of using it in fic plots. Love the last bit about sleeping together, too. Great job!
Author's Response: thanx :) It was the only way i could describe it lol! Well with or without a soul she would have loved him in this story, the soul adding was just the first step to my plan....:) Hope you like the next chapter:)
xxx
Linz
Date: 05/27/2005 Title: Chapter 13: Tonight part 1
LOL you had me practically rolling on the floor laughing with the whole Spike/Giles kissing thing!!!!! You're not gonna make Spike die cuz of the amulet, though, are you? Cuz, I was one of the people looking to hire a hit man by the end of Chosen =) But, i have every faith that you'll give us a happy ending. Great chapter!
Date: 05/27/2005 Title: Chapter 14: The real you
bunnies. hehe =) great job making the old woman non-corny, and also I liked the bit with her being Spike's mom. Can't wai for the showdown, so I'm going there now...
Date: 05/27/2005 Title: Chapter 15: The Battle
ok would love to comment on the chapter but have to go to the next one RIGHT NOW so great job =)
Date: 05/27/2005 Title: Chapter 16: Unlife was good/ THE END
very very cute. loved the part w/ 147 days and naming the baby Dawn. *gets up and dances around* yay! Spike's human! hehe. Looking forward to reading your next fic, till then =) ~~Panta_Rei
Categories: General Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1266
Date: 05/22/2005 Title: Chapter 1: Don't Leave
aww...very sweet ending without being too Hollywood cliche...I think we'd all love a sequel...*hopeful look* =) great job!