Reviewer: cordykitten
Anonymous
Date: 01/21/2007 - 11:46 am
Title: Unexpected Help
Though I now some books about Stanislaski I don't know Lisa Kleypas'. Hehe.. the prince was called Angelovsky in her book *grins* And it has time travel... the original one. ~ Whatever you changed or are using from the original one, the summary sounds interesting :)
And I like the start. Joyce told Spike her opinion of his fool mood *g*. ~ And love that survived thousands of years the sounds like reincarnation ... But Joyce didn't see the face of the woman, huh? Little does she know but she noticed something off later.
William got Buffy a tiger? That's a big cat... ~ And at last Joyce saw that Buffy is meant to be with Spike. But she tries to put this to a stop before it starts. I wonder why...
I guess we'll get a little of Joyce's story (what Spike did to her) later. I guess that's "Midnight Angel" or? *on to the next chapter*
Reviewer: daydreamer
Anonymous
Date: 01/17/2007 - 10:30 pm
Title: Unexpected Help
wow, great start, can't wait for more :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! More to come soon, I promise!
Reviewer: leelu
Anonymous
Date: 01/17/2007 - 10:10 pm
Title: Unexpected Help
Ooo err I say - oh yeah, a BIG ooo err LOL. Really liking the period setting and the ever so feisty Joyce that you've created. Hank seems well devoted to her which makes a change from how he's often portrayed. Can't wait to find out what the dynamic between our leads will be like when Buffy is twenty (how old is William btw?) And will Manny still be around by then too? Here's hoping so (me loves me some tiger cubs). More soon please.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I think I am going to have Spike be about 28... The second chapter is almost done!
Reviewer: synonumous
Anonymous
Date: 01/17/2007 - 09:40 pm
Title: Unexpected Help
oooooooooh me likes it me likes it. :) please update soon it was good
Author's Response: Thank you! I'll have another chapter up soon, I promise!
Reviewer: Suzee Signed
Date: 01/17/2007 - 09:22 pm
Title: Unexpected Help
That was a really good first chapter :) And I can see Buffy trying to keep a tiger in her closet ;) I hope that you'll be able to update this story soon...I really want to read more of it!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I had to giggle when I wrote about Buffy trying to keep Manny in her closet... so Buffy... LOL Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: Just Another Reviewer
Anonymous
Date: 01/17/2007 - 09:17 pm
Title: Unexpected Help
Great!!! Love the plot! And I like the way you lined up all the problems that they'll be having later in the story, without making it too obvious. It's giving people a really good idea of whats going to happen later on, without telling too much. I'll be reading!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I was trying not too give too much away in the first chapter. Thanks for reading!
