Reciprocity03/30/2005 - 11:27 pm13: 13Anonymous
I liked it, but im a little confused/ so the baby wasn't Giles and Olivias and is magically now biologically Buffy and Spikes? Or she jsut chose them as surrogates? I jsut want to know so i don't get behind plotwise....I'm easily confused, but regardless im enjoying the story, and i understand why you're afraid about losing readers, but people likely won't get disturbed (I'm not a mom, but even i know that all these situations minus the vampire thing are normal, i mena babies are sort of oblivious..) Anyway loving it so far, take care


Loz03/30/2005 - 11:22 pm13: 13Anonymous
okay, i kinda skimmed through that one coz it did kinda wierd me out, but i'm still loving the story! just a thought- at the start of the next chapter could you maybe put a summary of what happened here (just the important parts about the bonding etc) so that everyone is up to speed? Thanks!


pj03/30/2005 - 11:02 pm13: 13Signed
I was confused at first because I didn't know that the baby had some demon in her or that Lia could choose her parents (and I thought it was Spike who was sucking on her), but then it all came clear. Nice story direction! Didn't expect it, but it was very interesting and not disturbing like I thought it might be. In fact, I think it's more erotic in the way that they have now bonded together in a family fashion ;)


Brunettepet03/30/2005 - 10:55 pm13: 13Signed
I can understand Buffy being confused and wigged, but she got in the swing of things quickly. I hope you explain Lia's origins and how she was able to "choose" Buffy and make her lactate. The family bonding is going to be hard to explain to Giles, but I'll bet it will be an entertaining explanation for your readers.!


s.p. hudson03/30/2005 - 10:37 pm13: 13Anonymous
Is it over *whimper* It can't be over. I love this story! Plus, Giles hasn't gotten back yet and we don't know what Olivia has to say for herself and, and..I can't think of anything else right now, but I'm sure there's more..It has to be...please?


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