Oh I like this Buffy..Ms. in charge girl.. No flames from me sweetie.. So far I love the story..keep going and update often! :-)
klylu
12/08/2005 - 07:24 pm
1: Chapter One
Anonymous
the beginning is quite captivating... hope to read more soon!
kim
12/08/2005 - 06:19 pm
1: Chapter One
Anonymous
I like it so far. I can't wait to read more.
Mariana
12/08/2005 - 05:58 pm
1: Chapter One
Anonymous
this was very good for a first fic.. very good...period... though one small thing, it's Xander with an X not Zander... that's all ;) interesting story!! hope we hear from you again...thanx!
luxferi
12/08/2005 - 05:37 pm
1: Chapter One
Anonymous
I like the idea of Buffy as a crime scene investigator... hehe... my favourite show CSI and favourite couple Buffy and Spike together....mmm... heady cocktail.
Anyway, I know this is your first fic (as you've mentioned) and you did well, but I just have to say that your style of writing is a bit formal... I don't know how to explain it. Just a bit clipped here and there. That, and Buffy gets referred to as "sir"?
But other than that, I wanna see how this turns out, so keep them chappies coming! ;)
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm really not that conservative, but she's an officer and believe it or not they do talk like that. I'm an officer and my dad was a CSI for 23 years, so the police jargon might be a little strong at first, but Buffy will lighten up once she and Spike start to get to know each other.
Thanks for the review, I really appreciate it!