What a sad ending to a great chapter. Angel is a hrrible father!! You've made Melanie such a sweet little girl and it's just appalling the way her own father treats her. I loved how you had Willam go right over to her to comfort her. It really shows that he's not in this relationship just for Buffy . It was a wonderful gesture. I hope to see more soon.
Killing Angel? Yes, that would be one solution. What does he think he does? To such a small child?
*sigh* Spike is a better father for Melanie that Angel.
Loz
11/20/2004 - 07:51 am
25: part 25
Anonymous
great chapter... but dont leave it hanging so long next time- im soooo addicted to thsi story!
hollowtear
11/20/2004 - 04:57 am
25: part 25
Anonymous
That bastard!!! can't wait for an update. Hopefully soon???
Angel is such an ASS! I hope he gets what coming to him soon. I can't wait for the up coming Disneyland trip. Please UPDATE ASAP! :-)
blondiebear
11/19/2004 - 10:54 pm
25: part 25
Anonymous
GREAT CHAPTER!!! ANGEL SUCKS!!! MAKE HIM PAY. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!
Enchantress
11/19/2004 - 10:47 pm
25: part 25
Anonymous
Angel is awful! I hope Spike DOES kill him. But otherwise it was a very sweet Spuffy chapter & I'm very very happy for the update
willowmouse
11/19/2004 - 09:26 pm
25: part 25
Anonymous
so very glad to see more of this story!! :) I cant wait to see what William does to Angel ;)
Isabel
11/19/2004 - 09:01 pm
25: part 25
Anonymous
What an ass! What and ASS!!! I can't believe that jer? I'm already not Angel's number one fan, so I kinda enjoy that you made him into such a jackass. lol I haven't commented all that much on this story even though I've been following it since you started it. Sorry. But I do love it. Spike's relationship with Buffy and Melanie is so sweet. And Angel's attitude makes him look even better lol.
mer
11/19/2004 - 08:50 pm
25: part 25
Anonymous
Awesome but I would love quicker updates!!!
Caroline
11/19/2004 - 08:45 pm
25: part 25
Anonymous
well, if william isn't going to kill angel, then i am! who leaves their own CHILD with a secretary?! but, it's a wonderful story, please continue!!
Elanor
11/19/2004 - 07:17 pm
25: part 25
Anonymous
I KNEW it! I just KNEW it!!! I knew he wouldn't be able to last the wholw night. I hope Buffy kicks his ass. I also liked how you had William scoop Melanie up -- perfect. My heart is breaking for Melanie. I can't wait until they escape it all and go to Disneyland. Update soon! I wanna see Angel killed :)
Dee
11/19/2004 - 06:32 pm
25: part 25
Anonymous
i'm so glad you updated, i have been following this story on adultfanfic but its been awhile since a new chapter has been added. i have literally been stalking your postings here waiting for an update. thanks, i think you made my month. if you want to make my year you can update again soon. :)
I absolutely love this story. I love all your stories and am glad you are adding them to this great website. Another awesome chapter. This Spike is one of my favorite Spikes, and I just love Melanie. Angel definitely could do with some harm. ;-)
Peta
11/19/2004 - 11:31 am
25: part 25
Anonymous
Pattyanne, I just can't get enough of this story. I completely love this William. And Melanie...what a sweetie, and can I just say how flattered I am from your review that youa re reading my story? Thank you...for reading and writing. You're a marvel.
spuffy
11/19/2004 - 11:20 am
25: part 25
Anonymous
i dont care!!!! kill angel just update s-o-o-n!!!!! and great chapter
spikeslovebite
11/19/2004 - 11:06 am
25: part 25
Anonymous
AARGH!! killing is too good for him...too quick and painles...let's torture him first!! mwahahahahahah!!
hotlipedjen
11/19/2004 - 11:06 am
25: part 25
Anonymous
I can't wait for the 'fit to hit the san'! This is TOO good!
This is the most gorgeous, precious story ever. I just read the last few chapters you've updated and I need more! I love William's relationship with Melanie, and of course with Buffy as well. Please, more soon! :-)