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Reviews For Lost Then Found
Jenny B05/04/2010 - 07:24 pm1: Chapter 1: HidingAnonymous
Your story's not too bad, but you could do better.
It's too simply written, everything happens too fast ,Spike and Buffy are often out of character and the way they speak is too different from canon.





cordykitten01/27/2009 - 06:46 pm1: Chapter 1: HidingSigned
Oh you already posted several chapters! I have to hurry to catch up again :)

Author's Response: Yea I usually post a few chapters at a time. I have someone reading them so as they return them I post them. Won't be updating tonight though, sorry. Perhaps tomorrow. :)

spuffy chick01/27/2009 - 03:26 am1: Chapter 1: HidingSigned
yay! a new story!

poor buffy...she's feeling so desolate.

Author's Response: Yea killing someone you love must be hard. Thanks for the review and hope you enjoy it! i got another story coming soon to after it's read!

Emma01/26/2009 - 11:28 pm1: Chapter 1: HidingAnonymous
I read the first two lines and my only comment to you is get a Beta reader who knows about grammar. You need to beef up your writing as well. Instead of just matter of factly stating what happened, you need to weave an actual concept and plot so that we can begin to care what happens. It sounds like you have a good idea, but your writing is not up to par.

Author's Response: Well Chapter one is now beta-ed but I'm still not sure you will like it. She moved a lot of things and redid a few things but the plot is still the same. Hopefully the results of the betaing helps!

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