Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed
Date: 11/19/2004 - 08:51 pm
Title: Coming Clean
Phew! Hope it will stay good. Now all is laid open, all secrets (or?)
Hope the divorse will get through quickly
Reviewer: FRANCHESCA
Anonymous
Date: 11/19/2004 - 05:17 pm
Title: Coming Clean
I STARTED THIS ON ANOTHER SITE AND THEN FORGOT WHERE I READ IT. I AM SO GLAD I FOUND IT AGAIN. THIS STORY IS GREAT. VERY DARK... VERY GOOD AND EXTREMELY GOOD SEX SCENES.
Reviewer: txjmfan
Anonymous
Date: 11/19/2004 - 02:34 am
Title: Coming Clean
WOW! Excellent chapter. Very intense and passionate, from the figh to them making love in the rain. Best chapter yet.
Author's Response: Hey thanks...I was drained from all the drama...it was time for some loving
Reviewer: SoulNyte
Anonymous
Date: 11/18/2004 - 09:03 pm
Title: Coming Clean
I really liked this chapter. It had raw emotion and passion that I've never ead in a fic before. Great job. Also this fic kind of reminded me of the song Coming Clean by Hilary Duff. Is that where the inspiration for this chapter came from?
Author's Response: Its funny you should mention that. I was trying to think of a title for the chapter. I was in a store and I heard the song and the word Coming Clean got stuck in my head. I'm gald the emotion came through for you. I was hoping they both were pissed off enough. Thanks for the review always nice to hear from you.
Reviewer: demona424 Signed
Date: 11/18/2004 - 05:18 pm
Title: Coming Clean
Another awesome chapter! I love the make-up sex in the rain. I'm not sure if you meant for it to be symbolic but it was very fitting.
Author's Response: Thank you and absolutely...good observation...now they can move on wiothout the drama or can they?
Reviewer: Camille Signed
Date: 11/18/2004 - 02:49 pm
Title: Coming Clean
That was great. The pain, the drama and then the fucking in the rain. Amazing chapter!
Author's Response: Slippery when wet...you gotta love it...thanks for the feedback...looking forward to a new story from you
Reviewer: Beth
Anonymous
Date: 11/18/2004 - 04:53 am
Title: Coming Clean
well it's kind of hard for them to get married or engaged if she's already married...can't wait to see what you do with it.
Author's Response: Elizabeth is working on that. i say she has about four months to go before signing the final papers to declare Riley dead and divorce him...that is if nothing happens
Reviewer: Starshine
Anonymous
Date: 11/18/2004 - 04:02 am
Title: Coming Clean
I needed a cigarette after that one! That was SOOOOO hot great job as usual Tahmoe! Totally love the rain effect. I was so afraid William would not forgive her. Can't wait to see what happens next!
