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Reviewer: Nemo Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/08/2006 - 02:18 pm Title: Chapter 1

I would really like to read you fic, but without any paragraphs this text is hurting my eyes :P if you change that, I promise I will give it another shot and leave another review. Good luck, and keep writing!

Author's Response: OK, thanks! I will break it up. I noticed that it was heard to read after I entered it.

Reviewer: Niamh Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/08/2006 - 02:08 pm Title: Chapter 1

Interesting start, but I think you should get yourself a beta.. Check your spacing and paragraphs and such.

Author's Response: Thank you. I will look into getting a beta.

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