

Date: 04/08/2008 - 10:37 pm Title: Prologue and Chapter One
Just read the entire story! loved it from start to finish!! awesome job! now i'm working on another one of you're stories!

Date: 11/29/2006 - 11:04 am Title: Prologue and Chapter One
um...Not sure what to write but it was a good start...

Date: 10/16/2006 - 10:23 pm Title: Prologue and Chapter One
OHH what a great story i really enjoyed reading this good job!

Date: 10/08/2006 - 01:58 pm Title: Prologue and Chapter One
:)
I like!

Date: 09/30/2006 - 02:01 pm Title: Prologue and Chapter One
This is excellent! very hot and very well done...can't wait to read more!

Date: 09/12/2006 - 02:27 pm Title: Prologue and Chapter One
I really like where this is going :D Great story idea!

Date: 07/30/2006 - 08:14 am Title: Prologue and Chapter One
One reviewer said they didn't think Buffy would tell Joyce all of this stuff like that, and in a way I agree that that is a logical thing to think. But I recall my brother a few years ago stayed out late (he was seventeen) and my mom waited up for him to come home which happened at almost three am. He was really drunk and he'd been driving and would have been yelled at except he was really drunk and my mom decided to save the yelling and punishment til next day when he'd understand it better. But my brother was really really loopy with the drink and decided that it would be a good idea to tell my mom everything he did, everything he thought, the whole thing, And when she'd try to get him to go to bed so they could sleep and discuss it fully in the morning he wouldn't do it, he said he needed to get it all out now, while he wanted to say it and just told her EVERYthing. It was funny really and he regretted it the next day. But he'd been loopy and just decided to do a full confessional while loopy. Which is a lot of words to say that the stuff in her system still and the stress of the situation could cause Buffy to suddenly decide to confess things that she wouldn't otherwise even though she might not be so brave under other circumstances. I was sorry Joyce reacted a little more negatively than I would have liked at some points, but I guess she was pretty shocked. If I had a kid who had just tried suicide (and sadly I have one who started at age eleven, long story) I wouldn't have reacted negatively in any way to absolutely anything they told me right afterward, when they were trying so hard to get it out in the open and were looking for understanding and support. So I thought Joyce was a little harsh in places. That's not a criticism, because that's what you wanted Joyce to do so that's just her character and you wrote her the way you wanted her. I was just sorry she did that. As for the hold, I am not aware of any twenty four hour hold in California law, just the 72 hour one. And although I'm dealing with med social work it's mostly with industrial patients and work comp is exempt from HiPPA privacy laws for the most part so that's why I'm not dealing with HIPPA as much as others might so I'll defer to the other posters who are working in general mental health in California for the latest actual practice issues. Like I said, I'm not gonna complain about what you do as long as you don't go on a complete flight of fancy and ignore reality entirely, which you have not at all. I really like your story and I'm following you where you wanna go. It will be interesting to see what happens next -- now that Joyce knows. And will she tell Giles - if I were Buffy I'd prefer to have Joyce tell Giles as at least I wouldn't have to look in the eyes of a man I love like a father and have to tell him all that extremely embarrassing info. Bad enough if he must know, but please let someone else tell it and spare me that is my thinking. Please update soon -- I'm can't wait to see where you go next. Thanks. Mac 1. :-)

Date: 07/29/2006 - 01:11 pm Title: Prologue and Chapter One
That should have read 'be glad you're NOT dealinig with federal wlefare...' I hate these tiny review boxes. :-)

Date: 07/02/2006 - 04:09 am Title: Prologue and Chapter One
whoo!  Hot chapter.  :)

Date: 06/27/2006 - 09:39 pm Title: Prologue and Chapter One
Harmony and Riley *shudder*
I'm liking this story so far, and I really can't wait to see where you develop. You have so much room and you've laid down a lot of interesting possible plot points. Can't wait for the next update!

Date: 05/27/2006 - 11:35 am Title: Prologue and Chapter One
OMG. GUH!!!!!!! And also awwww!!!! I really really love this, honey! You've done an amazing job and I can't wait to read more! DID I MENTION I LOVE YOU?!!!! I do. Absolutely wonderfully written, and extremely hot! *fangirls*

Date: 05/20/2006 - 05:44 pm Title: Prologue and Chapter One
Hey Suzee, Kitty told me about this story. I read the first chapters (hadn´t have time yet for the newest ones) and now i can understand why kitty loves your story so much :)
Please keep up the great writing, I´m looking forward ro reading more! *hugs*, Marisol

Date: 03/14/2006 - 04:29 pm Title: Prologue and Chapter One
Holy hell girl! You weren't kidding when you said there would be smut in this one. That was an unbelievable start to a story. I loved it!

Date: 03/11/2006 - 01:04 pm Title: Prologue and Chapter One
My god .this has started out with a bang.Got to read the next chapter. wow!'

Date: 03/10/2006 - 11:16 pm Title: Prologue and Chapter One
Dam I love this story!

Date: 03/09/2006 - 08:29 pm Title: Prologue and Chapter One
AHHH CONTINUE PLEASE!!
you cant just leave a person hanging like that~
...love the story :D

Date: 03/09/2006 - 07:39 pm Title: Prologue and Chapter One
that was great! more sooon please!!!!!

Date: 03/09/2006 - 08:16 am Title: Prologue and Chapter One
great chapter

Date: 03/08/2006 - 04:09 pm Title: Prologue and Chapter One
Wow! That was hot. Can't wait for more. :D

Date: 03/08/2006 - 03:52 pm Title: Prologue and Chapter One
Wow.. Dru was very bad. Spike can be glad he wasn't married to her yet. No wonder he's so broken though. ~ But he would never have 'met' Buffy otherwise so it's a good thing... even if it must have cost him a lot of money to do so ;-) Love how they attracted to one another and yet don't dare to try to really met :) Looking forward to more next week. I wonder how long it will take them to recognize themselves when they meet. ;-)

Date: 03/08/2006 - 03:25 pm Title: Prologue and Chapter One
Great chapter! Please update soon!

Date: 03/08/2006 - 02:17 pm Title: Prologue and Chapter One
Echo everything that Nikilicious said, you are an amazing writer with fantastic flare to capture the characters. i love every story that yuo have written and each one jsut gets better and better well done !!!!!!!!!!!!!! n keep it up

Date: 03/08/2006 - 11:12 am Title: Prologue and Chapter One
Hey darling. This is amazing. It is remarkable to see how far you have come on since you first started writing.
You are an amazing writer darling, and deserve every second of praise that you get.
You have managed to capulate these characters so perfectly to their original form, yet while still retaining an air of orginallity thats all you.
You have wrote the beginning of what I am sure is going to be an amazing story and honestly I can't wait to read more.
You have done amazingly and you should feel so proud honey!
please post more soon.
Nikki xx

Date: 03/08/2006 - 03:39 am Title: Prologue and Chapter One
hot in here or is it just me? that was hot! i can't wait to read more, especially when buffy finds out who "spike" really is!update soon?

Date: 03/08/2006 - 12:57 am Title: Prologue and Chapter One
Got my curiosity piqued! That was very hot-- Can't wait for the update!