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Reviewer: Kate Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2012 - 08:19 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

It is incredibly frustrating that you can't keep your facts straight from one chapter to the next - you say one thing and then completely contradict it right after! Not to mention the ridiculousness of some of your 'facts' - 911 does not say "oh we'll be there in 20 to 30 minutes, that's the best we can do"... Wtf?! The average response time is 7 to 10 minutes and they are ALWAYS working on making it less. And Doctor's CANNOT legally choose to withhold information like blood alcohol levels. I wanted to finish it, but at this point I give up.

Reviewer: spikes mrs Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/01/2006 - 02:37 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

I know that swimming ploy too...

Reviewer: turnedbyspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/01/2006 - 02:36 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

Ooh...sexy pool scene...gotta love it :-)

Reviewer: flibble Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/17/2006 - 05:34 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

Argh! I think I'm being a really good girl taking the time to review this chapter. Cause you know it's slowing me down from getting to the next one. hehe. Can't wait.

Reviewer: Nemo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/06/2006 - 04:53 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

Hee! Loved the pool scene! "Looking like that's just plain dangerous" I just love your Spike! :D

Great chap!

Reviewer: Edgehead Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/06/2006 - 03:22 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

Very nice chapter...now i wait for the fun :)

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/04/2006 - 11:53 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

I don't know what Buffy has planned, but an almost naked Spike in a pool? Who wouldn't try to set that up? Lovely chapter. They seem to be on good terms at the moment. Can't wait to see what's gonna happen. ; )

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/04/2006 - 10:53 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

great chapter

Reviewer: Renee' Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2006 - 09:26 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

I like your story, and I really like the chapter. (please take this as constructive ONLY, but maybe a little more detail on things?) good chapter and I can't wait to see what William does when Buffy tries to play *her* way.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2006 - 03:27 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

Buffy has a plan, doing some fun things? Ah, pool fun :) Water games *gg* We'll see next time; I'm at the end of the chapter. *sigh* Till next one! Btw: Send you a message. If you don't get it, beep me. :)

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/02/2006 - 09:34 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

i really hope that buffy and spike get together and are happy. i love this story so much and am so happy u updated. i really hope that buffy relaizes that he likes her and that hes hust not using her for sex. also i hope that they work out there past problem and are happy together. please update as soon as u can, i cant wait to read more. thanx

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/02/2006 - 08:18 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

She's such a tease, lol! Good chapter! =)

Reviewer: McChick Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/02/2006 - 06:25 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

To leave the story like that was cruel... hahaha what a cliffhanger!!!! I want some wet Spikey goodness!!! hahahha great chapter... can not WAIT for the next one ;) yay!!

-Ashley-

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/02/2006 - 06:23 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

loved it and cant wait to see the fun that they are gonna have

Reviewer: Jess Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/02/2006 - 06:16 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

Great story, still enjoying it, big fan of your work.

Reviewer: Vo6 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/02/2006 - 04:41 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

Ack!!!! Evil pool cliff hanger! Must add more and soon!!!

Reviewer: Alyxandria Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/02/2006 - 04:20 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

"...feeling a little too naked in it. So, of course, that was the one she chose."
I love it! That's just great.

"Could kill a bloke that way too."
And this line - I laughed out loud. Too cute.

Wonderful update. Can't wait to see what sort of "fun" they plan to have with the 'rents home.

-Alyx

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/02/2006 - 03:37 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

Good update! Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: SpaceLord Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/02/2006 - 03:05 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

Well this smutty story is coming along nicely.....just wondering when Buffy will crack, she is the champion of swimming in the Nile :)

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/02/2006 - 03:04 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

Great chapter!

Reviewer: Heidi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/02/2006 - 02:15 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

Too short chapter! :D
Buffy doesn't seem so hard to get after all. :D
Can't wait for more

Reviewer: Gotkona Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/02/2006 - 02:12 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

You can't leave it there. Plus I want to hear more about what they are wearing.

Reviewer: Irishwoman39 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/02/2006 - 02:00 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

You cut this way to shooooorrrrrt.Way to short.

Reviewer: spuffette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/02/2006 - 12:39 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

For someone playing hard to get; Buffy is being a little obvious, hmmmm.
Anyway, I hope Spike gets through to her soon!
spuf

Reviewer: Cla Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/02/2006 - 12:32 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

Yeahh, I'm the first to leave you a review for this beautiful chapter! Great work as always, I'm really loving this story!!!

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