

Date: 08/02/2006 - 09:29 am Title: Awkward Moments
i really really really like this story but you have to update more im all edgy waiting for the next part of this
awesome story
Author's Response: Thanks for reading. I"ll be updating soonish. I was away for the summer

Date: 06/22/2006 - 01:53 am Title: Awkward Moments
Evil. Pure Evil and i love it!!!!!!!
interesting to bring Graham in but i always liked him. (way more than riley as he at least seemed real)
Author's Response: Thanks for reading!

Date: 06/20/2006 - 01:04 pm Title: Awkward Moments
Because of Graham's involvement with the Initiative I'm not sure if I can trust him but he was concerned for Willow. *reads on* I'm still not sure.. he seems to be very fond of Dawn yet she's too young for him at the moment -> 'jailbait'... well and how he'll react to Spike (H.17?)... ~ Looking forward to the answers and the next chapter :)
Author's Response: Thanks for reading!

Date: 06/20/2006 - 06:58 am Title: Awkward Moments
Oh uh, indeed! What an exciting ending to the chapter. Should be interesting to see how Spike and Buffy handle the Dawn/Graham situation. Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks!

Date: 06/20/2006 - 06:24 am Title: Awkward Moments
I really think Grahams a perv, he hardly knows the kid and he's tampering with her. I thought he was supposed to be one of the good guys. I so hope Buffy and Spike come down on him like a ton of bricks.
Author's Response: Well we'll see what happens in the next couple of chapters!