

Date: 10/09/2006 - 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 23 ~ Deliverance
Great post TV story line. Really good character development of all the players. I look foward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Next one coming up soon.

Date: 10/07/2006 - 01:07 am Title: Chapter 23 ~ Deliverance
I'm really enjoying the "take charge" Xan-man.
Author's Response: RandiGiles,
Xander was never my favorite character in Buffyverse, but I gained new respect for him in [b]Zeppo.[/b] After that, I believed that he could be more than he seemed. Of course, by season 7 , he reverted to the self-rightous SOB he always was. Thanks for the comment.

Date: 10/04/2006 - 04:02 pm Title: Chapter 23 ~ Deliverance
Very good chapter Aamah, poor Spike talk about having him by the short and curlies. That was love about and beyond the call of duty. I really enjoyed it, it was true to form for Giles to think Spike had gone bad, but I like how you don't make Giles and Xander the completely intolerant characters they are in a lot of otherwise good stories.
Chrissie
Author's Response: Thanks Chrissie,
It's time for them to grow up! Yes?
Glad you're still enjoying and thanks for the comment.