Date: 11/25/2006 - 10:24 pm Title: Into the Light
wow I thought I was the only one upset about the pace
Author's Response: This comment means absolutely nothing to me...other than to say are you upset about the pace or the characters? Because there's a rather large difference.
Date: 11/25/2006 - 10:20 pm Title: Into the Light
Still got me curious as to who has taken Buffy and how soon the boys will find her. Update soon, please
Author's Response: There will be a big break very very soon. Promise!
Date: 11/25/2006 - 10:16 pm Title: Into the Light
It was kind of a wickedly delightful surprise to see Caleb-- very interesting. I can't wait to find out how much time has actually past-- obviously enough for her to lose weight, so I'm guessing at least a few days or a week. Great update! I like the way you are alternating between Buffy's experience, and then how Spike and William and reacting. I wonder why Buffy dreamed of Xander and Willow, though. More soon, please. BTW, I wholeheartedly agreee that too much of even a good thing is very, very bad-- thanks for making your feelings known. I really appreciate it. ;)
Author's Response: Well, I'll tell you it's been over a week...but not how much over! And Buffy had already gone through Spike and William and the things that happen in your brain because of sensory deprevation...lets just say it isn't pretty. Thanks for the review!
Date: 11/25/2006 - 10:16 pm Title: Into the Light
Oooookay let's just say it was not what I expected. I was hoping for William-Spike-Buffy reunion
Author's Response: You're a few chapters early ;) But it will happen.
Date: 11/25/2006 - 10:09 pm Title: Into the Light
Death to the bible thumpers? lol
Author's Response: Seriously. They give real christians a bad name.
Date: 11/25/2006 - 10:04 pm Title: Into the Light
If I were you, Spike and William would have found Buffy a long time ago...............................................................
Author's Response: Yeah, if I were actually the one writing the story, Riley never would have been in the picture, but the characters had other ideas.
Date: 11/25/2006 - 09:47 pm Title: Into the Light
SIGH i guess i will have to wait for spuffy scenes :(
Author's Response: Indeed...unless you hop over to me personal site and read a couple of the stand alone fics that are popping up as soon as i write them...you just have to look for them.
Date: 11/25/2006 - 09:45 pm Title: Into the Light
nice chapter! I liked all the religion/cuture "hints" (not sure about the english word) you mentioned.
As for the pace, well I already posted a message on your site about it. I dont agree with the pace either but you're writing the story so it's not like we can really do something about it. I always liked angst in a fic but just a little touch of angst. Still reading and still loving it though!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. And too much sugar rots the teeth; gotta mix some sour and salt in there, otherwise you get too much of a good thing. So consider this the dose of angst for the entire story, including singlets and whatever comes after this period in their lives.
Date: 11/25/2006 - 09:37 pm Title: Into the Light
Well as you said, you're the writer, you do what you think is good for your story. It doesn't mean we readers have to agree with you though. I personally think it's too slow but you're the boss.
Author's Response: Yep, I am, and I'm not going to compromise the integrity of my story because people are impatient.
Date: 11/25/2006 - 09:33 pm Title: Into the Light
oooooo new chapter. No spuffy though :(((((((((((((
Author's Response: Nope. The Spillfy is on hold ofr the time being. Sadly. I'm actually going through withdrawl myself, so I've started writing one-shot stand alones! You can find those on my personal site if you look hard enough ;)
Date: 11/25/2006 - 09:31 pm Title: Into the Light
funny that you mention the pace cause I was talking on aim with two other readers about Twinlets (GREAT fic btw) and we all agreed that the rhythm was too slow concerning Buffy's kidnapping. Angst is good... for a while but not for too long. It's up to you anyway. I just hope you won't lose too much readers cause this story is a special one! Nice chappie btw!
Author's Response: It's been three chapters. That's not long at all, especially considering how long I had them doing pretty much nothing but screwing each other's brains out. Not that lots of sex isn't a bad thing. And the reader's I'm most likely to lose are the ones who NEVER comment, so I don't know they're there in the first place...
Date: 11/25/2006 - 09:30 pm Title: Into the Light
Well, I agree with just about everything you said (in both author's notes) so I guess there's not much for me to say except that I continue to love this story, and I can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Thank you. It's amazing how authors get it and other people just don't. BTW, I'm really enjoying reading your fiction too! Blood Child seems like it's going to be a fun ride!