I swear, if someone referred to the broken penis one more time, I was going to literally die laughing. As great as penises can be, there *is* something kinda funny about them and you've really tapped into that with this story.

Spike's line about Buffy having castrated him was really spot on. I really kinda love Spike rejecting Buffy because of what she's done, and her resulting panic about it. It's the kind of reality check that I would have loved to see on the show.

As usual, you've got me hooked!