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Reviewer: mariann Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2008 - 11:03 pm Title: Third

Liked the way this story is going Spike a detective perfect for him and Buffy a victim I can buy that too. Now we readers of your very well written tales are left in vertigo. Buffy's character has no background even a smidgen jus a fifteen year old runaway from where? Now please give us an update soon so Spike and the runaway can get together and solve the murder of Reilly(Angelus). Cool
See u soon.

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2008 - 10:53 pm Title: Third

Reviewer: nikki Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/01/2008 - 06:16 pm Title: Third

please finish it!!!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/16/2008 - 10:22 am Title: Third

Nikki Woods, huh? Didn't expect her to be the helper Spike was calling.
At last Spike managed to get her out; being away from prying eyes must be good.
Though that's a huge task Spike is going to do there. I hope things will go well and looking forward to read (and find out) :)

Reviewer: Lissababy4life Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2008 - 01:15 am Title: Third

Awesome story. I want more! Great job keep it up.

Reviewer: Leanne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2008 - 08:48 pm Title: Third

"In a moment they’d both laughed over later, each had tried arresting the other."

This is an example of a great sentence that shows what a good writer you are. It's just one sentence, but it builds a history of the two characters in a way that keeps our attention and paints a picture that you can see in your mind in detail.

Very well done. I'm enjoying the story immensly

Reviewer: Rose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2008 - 03:25 am Title: Third

There is something absolutely touching in the way Spike is taking care of her , being so soft and patient and thoughtful.
I 'm really curious about where you 're going to lead us , and definiely interested.:)

Reviewer: Toni Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2008 - 10:51 pm Title: Third

Sweet and caring, but with a hint of what's to come. I like.

Reviewer: ~Eris~ Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2008 - 10:48 pm Title: Third

Still very intrigued. :-) Wonderful chapter, looking forward to more.

Reviewer: fyreburned Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2008 - 07:20 pm Title: Third

You're fascinating me with this new fic! Intrigued, sucked in, I was a goner for this one as soon as I started reading (OK, there's just some draw I think for AU fics where Spike is either a cop/etc, or a criminal (usually misjudged or turning a new leaf)...does that mean he's reached archetype status?)
Thanks, and looking forward to more! I know it is being hard for you to write lately, but the end result is great! Please try to keep it coming.
~~K.~~
~~fyreburned~~

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2008 - 06:57 pm Title: Third

Another brilliant chapter. Your details are fantastic!

I can't wait for Buffy to tell a little bit about her history.

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