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Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2008 - 07:11 am Title: Chapter 2

I like the start, sassy Buffy. Good that Giles will read the books first before he acts.

Reviewer: letitia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2008 - 05:05 pm Title: Chapter 2

GO Buffy for putting them all in their place. Just love this verison. Oh, I wish..

Reviewer: Bigbird Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2008 - 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 2

I love the premise of this story Buffy as the agressor for once. Be careful that you don't lose the characters in too much aggression though.
Please get yourself a beta the paragraphs are a problem, so is the grammer and missing words.
Look forward to reading more.

Reviewer: sasha Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2008 - 06:18 pm Title: Chapter 2

i don't want to discourage you or anything, but this needs a lot of work. for one thing, you need to break up your paragraphs more, a new paragraph should start whenever someone different speaks. it looks way too cluttered, just something to think about.

Author's Response: thanks for the advice I am in the process of working on this

Reviewer: Nichole Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2008 - 05:46 pm Title: Chapter 2

Pretty cool story. i would like to read a little more of it.

Author's Response: thanks so much

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