Date: 03/20/2008 - 04:10 am Title: Chapter One
Oh you definitely have a reader for this one and if no one else likes it too damn bad my one vote will count for 20 so please continue. Please? Lol I literally exclaimed what!? When he said he was married I wasn't expectin that but a really great start hope you'll continue
Date: 03/20/2008 - 04:05 am Title: Chapter One
keep going, i can't wait to see how this one plays out.
Date: 03/20/2008 - 03:37 am Title: Chapter One
Promising start! I always like my stories with a little angst!!!
Date: 03/20/2008 - 03:35 am Title: Chapter One
Wow, quite an opener.. didn't see that coming haha
I cant' wait for this to pan out
Date: 03/20/2008 - 03:33 am Title: Chapter One
Gotta love all the love at first sight, just to be doused by the absolute wall in the way. Amazing how you can fit so many emotions into a tiny chapter in a story where we've just met the characters... so to speak. I loved it and can't wait for more.
Date: 03/20/2008 - 03:13 am Title: Chapter One
Amazing start! I'm completely hooked already! I'd love more!
Date: 03/20/2008 - 03:04 am Title: Chapter One
So, Dru's on this fic... well, I hope is not all heathache, I liked it.
Date: 03/20/2008 - 03:00 am Title: Chapter One
Definitely up for it! Continue! That was shockinggg! :)
Date: 03/20/2008 - 02:48 am Title: Chapter One
Absolutely up for this one. William being married was the last thing I expected. Great start.