

Date: 09/24/2008 - 08:14 pm Title: The Crew Part 2
Oh please , please ,please tell me she's not married to that moron angel, yuccch. Poor spike still carrying a torch for her, and Dawn , how could she abandon Dawn. Looking forward to more, asap.

Date: 09/24/2008 - 02:24 pm Title: The Crew Part 2
Dawn, didn't expect her to become a part of it.
Giles is in for the money it seems.
Sad that Buffy is too busy to visit Dawn.

Date: 09/24/2008 - 12:55 pm Title: The Crew Part 2
Love the Dawn-Spike talk and her stubbornness, though I hope it isn't really Buffy's choice to ignore her sister. Faith is also a great pick for a player here and that Wilkins is her father and also a criminal. I get you're using Oceans Eleven as a basis for the fic, but I hope you see some possibilities in having Faith's part be a girl; you don't have to stick totally to the movie. I could just see Buffy's reaction to Spike showing up with Faith beside him... green-eyed monster, anyone? LOL
Great chapter, write more soon!