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Reviewer: BuffyRat Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/26/2005 - 01:34 am Title: Chapter 14: Unexpected encounter

Love Adam's interest in her. It makes good sense. And the fact that she's running to Spike, maybe his plan is working afterall. And to be a bit cliche, we all know to want something done right, if not at all means doing it yourself. Wonderful chapter.

Reviewer: Ashlee Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2005 - 01:50 pm Title: Chapter 14: Unexpected encounter

Very good job of writing Adam. He wasn't a very complex character in the show, but he had a lot of complex questions (if that makes sense) and you were able to capture that.

Reviewer: Slayer rock chick Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2005 - 05:37 am Title: Chapter 14: Unexpected encounter

I loved Adams bit in this story. I think you have great creative writng skills :-)

Reviewer: Franchesca Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2005 - 05:37 am Title: Chapter 14: Unexpected encounter

I wasn't expecting that twist. Right now it seems awkward in the story, bt I'm sure that will smooth out. This story is so great so far.

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