Date: 04/16/2005 - 12:03 pm Title: I'm pregnant. Can you pass the turnips?
Oh Nia... SQUEE SQUEE SQUEE SQUEE just doesn't even cover it. Yummy nurturing protective sweet William.. (and still GAH! with the mental picture of suited-up teacher hotness in my head every time I read his name) and poor Buffy. Riley's an ass... big surprise there... but I always thought this would've been his reaction had she even gotten pregnant on the show. If it doesn't fit with his plans... This is just shaping up to be absolutely awesome... go teacher kink! But you're getting all of the emotions and weight of circumstances involved, too, which makes what could be just fun into something wonderful and addictive. Great work... more soon? Please? *bats eyelashes*
Date: 04/16/2005 - 11:54 am Title: I'm pregnant. Can you pass the turnips?
Loved it. =)
Date: 04/09/2005 - 07:32 pm Title: Walking after midnight
damn! I love it! Keep it coming please lol, and I'm off to read origins...
Date: 04/08/2005 - 11:19 pm Title: Walking after midnight
Fantastic! I LOVE this story and I'm looking forward to reading more. I like the dogs' descriptions and names too- funny. Please update soon
Date: 04/08/2005 - 10:08 am Title: Walking after midnight
I really like this story; and i don't usually bother reading "everybody's human" stories. I love your origins stories though, figured I'd take a chance...
Date: 04/08/2005 - 06:05 am Title: There's my path
So, lemme see if I got this... ou don't want me to tell you I like it so far? O.K. I won't..And I won't even mention that it sounds like a good story comuing up. In fact, I won't review it at all. *giggle*
Date: 04/07/2005 - 03:18 pm Title: Walking after midnight
it was very very good...i like yor approach...poor buffy...she's in for trouble huh? not just with joyce but i think with riley as well...anyhow ...i love it...keep it up and thanx!! hope you update soon ;)
Date: 04/07/2005 - 02:44 pm Title: Walking after midnight
And I am a spastic little chickie who forgot to tell you that your poem was really just awesome... very evocative.
Date: 04/07/2005 - 02:42 pm Title: Walking after midnight
I want a high school teacher that looks like Will and writes poetry and recites it with the voice and the glasses and the wardrobe changes and the hair and the ... dammit! Why oh why do I have to be not in high school with a hot teacher. It's not bloody fair! Lovely chap, sweetie! Great way to get them together outside of class and have them start to develop the sparks a bit more. Can't wait for the next chap! Feed my kink, please? *bats eyelashes fetchingly*
Date: 04/06/2005 - 08:35 am Title: Walking after midnight
oh i just loved that poem.......Will is.....*sighs* i can't believe how buffys mother treated her and the things she said....OMG that was aweful. poor buffy.....update soon....we need more of sexy Will..............
Date: 04/06/2005 - 06:38 am Title: Walking after midnight
I like the way this fic is going. I can't wait to see how it all plays out.
Date: 04/05/2005 - 09:38 pm Title: There's my path
Well, I may have to rethink my hatred of human, highschool, and pregnancy fics. Sighs.
Date: 04/05/2005 - 09:20 pm Title: Walking after midnight
this is my first review so i'm not sure exactly what you want to hear... you already have me hooked after two chapters, and i hope you let the tension build between buffywill before anything happens between them. also, as a personal favor, could you have "mr. stevenson" beat the hell out of riley at somepoint? :) maybe after riley comes down hard on buffy... keep it up, and btw, Origins is absolutely great and i can't wait to see what you do with it
Date: 04/05/2005 - 08:59 pm Title: Walking after midnight
hmmmm, this is an interesting journey for them both. I like it that you are moving slowly of sorts.....and I like it that Will is being supportive, I just hope it's for the right reasons......
Date: 04/05/2005 - 08:54 pm Title: Walking after midnight
I am going to leave you hanging cuz i am a bitch like that *laughs* Typical parental reaction of lecturing instead of trying to listen to her daughter. Oh yeah a nice stiff drink will make it all better for mom..NOT. Will you naughty man thinking dirty thougts and having things grow to some "attention". YIKES this could be total trouble. But hey Will in a cemetary and i am feeling all like shit, Come here baby let's just make it all go away for a few hours or more *throws head back in laughter*. Poem was excellent, deep, Will have a darkness to him that he bringing out in his poetry? Hmmmmm what what is come? Oh Nia i am liking this, very much.
Date: 04/05/2005 - 08:29 pm Title: Walking after midnight
Very lovely chapter Nia. Joyce's reaction this chapter was pretty typical for a parent (and for Joyce). I thought it was very in keeping with her character. The cemetary scene between Buffy and Will was adorable. Buffy's initial reaction at seeing Will in his casual clothes and hair was precious! LoL. You have perfectly captured her 17 year old reactions and speech. Just pitch perfect. The budding attraction between them is very believable as well. I love reading Will's reactions to Buffy. The line about her being his type because she was "tiny, petite and . . . well, female" was hilarious. I can't wait to see Buffy break the news to Riley. And I can't wait to see how you write Riley. Should be very, very interesting. Thanks for another funny, engaging, wonderful chapter sweetie!
Date: 04/05/2005 - 08:17 pm Title: Walking after midnight
Oh, they are in sooo much trouble. They've already crossed that first name basis line. And him reciting poetry to her in that voice of his while dressing all sexy-like... I'm smelling serious trouble coming up the horizon for these two. Great chapter. :)
Date: 04/05/2005 - 06:35 pm Title: There's my path
mmm...teacher spike...nothing better
Date: 04/05/2005 - 12:06 am Title: There's my path
i liked it a lot!!! though i'm not all up for riley being the father...but it's your story and you're doing great so far..it's so sweet and cute...though i think there's a rough way ahead ;) thanx so much hope you update soon
Date: 04/03/2005 - 10:52 am Title: There's my path
Sounds pretty interesting waiting to see hwat else u have there for this story.
Date: 04/03/2005 - 07:46 am Title: There's my path
Sounds good so far... too bad the baby is Rileys... the big oaf. The lifesavers was a nice touch! Hehe. Anyway, looking forward to more! Update soon!
Date: 04/03/2005 - 04:43 am Title: There's my path
i love this, need more to see where its gonna go but im really intrigued.....good job!!!
Date: 04/03/2005 - 03:13 am Title: There's my path
You sneaky bugger! Putting this up with nary a note that you'd done it! This is really a very good start, sweetie... you've got me deeply hooked already, and I want more. I have a schoolteacher kink... feed my needs! Great job so far! :D
Date: 04/03/2005 - 12:48 am Title: There's my path
cool story keep it up I can't wait to see what happens next. I have fav. writers and your comeing up on the ladder. SO KEEP THOSE CHAPPIES COMING AND KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK
Date: 04/03/2005 - 12:47 am Title: There's my path
Hmmm, interesting start, hmmmmm. Wonder how you will make this Buffy.......can Will come to love her enough to raise another man's baby........her being so young.......lets see what you can do
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