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Reviewer: Amanda Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2005 - 01:32 pm Title: Plan A...Plan B

Wow, very good,and did you by any chance see the movie Closer, part of this chapter reminded me of the movie but I like this story a lot better than the movie. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Yes, I saw Closer, but I saw it about a week ago, after this was already written :-) I saw the similarities to that scene, too- which was a little freaky...but then again, the movie was a little freaky. Thanks for reviewing :-)

Reviewer: Rana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2005 - 01:08 pm Title: Plan A...Plan B

Wow. Hot, sexy, innocence, fear, and orgasms all in one chapter! This story just gets better and better. I can't wait to see if Spike chooses to pursue her. Wonderful chapter!

Reviewer: Caatje Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2005 - 12:33 pm Title: Plan A...Plan B

I remeber reading the first chapters yes when it was still the other author writing it. Glad it's picked up again! :)

Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2005 - 11:53 am Title: Plan A...Plan B

I read "You're My Temptation" and I can already tell how different this one is gonna be. Can't wait to see what you have in store for this=)

Reviewer: Stephanie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2005 - 11:31 am Title: Plan A...Plan B

HOLY CRAP! I need a cigarette after that! Aslee, honey, that was amazing. I can not wait for more, honestly. Update soon, please

Reviewer: PK Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2005 - 11:09 am Title: Plan A...Plan B

hotness to the max, who says sex with cloths on isnt hot...great chappy, keep 'em comin

Reviewer: Renee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2005 - 01:05 am Title: Just Survive

Started reading this back when it was "Your My Temptation" but forgot about it until now. I'm loving what your doing with it. Keep up the good work and like always, update soon.

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2005 - 09:46 pm Title: Just Survive

great so far cant wait for more

Reviewer: Rana Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2005 - 07:07 pm Title: Just Survive

What a great beginning Ashlee! My heart is just breaking for Buffy. I love the little snippets of her previous foster homes that you let us see. It really gives us a sense of how much horror she has been through. I'm really, really excited to read more of this and hope you update soon. I love stories where Buffy is a survivor. This one looks to be very promising.

Reviewer: pj Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2005 - 06:13 pm Title: Just Survive

The idea is definitely intriguing and the whole rape situation is disturbing and sad (in an I-want-to-read-more way). I'm gonna tune in and see what you have in store for this because the first chapter sort of threw me off since the writing style seems to be a mix of yours and darla's? Well, I always have faith in you, so I'll be patient! :)

Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2005 - 04:55 pm Title: Just Survive

another story on the hop .... this one looks good, cant wait for more

Reviewer: Nic (Smitten) Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2005 - 04:14 pm Title: Just Survive

Poor Poor Buffy! I sure hope things get better for her really soon This is going to be another one of your must reads!

Reviewer: Celestria Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2005 - 03:47 pm Title: Just Survive

Awwwww sad sad sad awwwwsad sad awwww more more

Reviewer: Amanda Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2005 - 03:45 pm Title: Just Survive

Wow, I can't wait for more this seems like its going to be a really good story.

Reviewer: phantomwriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2005 - 03:32 pm Title: Just Survive

I want more!!

Reviewer: Alicia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2005 - 03:21 pm Title: Just Survive

Interesting plot...Looking forward to the next chapter :)

Reviewer: PK Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2005 - 12:30 pm Title: Just Survive

rough lot. can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Caitie Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2005 - 11:39 am Title: Just Survive

I was really excited to see that you're rewriting Darla's part, and I can't wait to see what you change. I read the orriginal too, but I still wanna read this one! Please update soon!

Reviewer: Franchesca Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2005 - 11:04 am Title: Just Survive

I really like the start to this story, but I read the beginning that Darla wrote and I always thought the bankcard idea was a little fishy. The account couldn't be secret - it would have gone through probate. That and the remaider of Joyce's belongings would have ended up settled, but I just can't fathom that the bankcard would work 6 years later. Sorry to be picky about this. Love your work so much. Maybe you can find a way to make that detail work.

Author's Response: Thanks for letting me know! I left the bank card in the original version that Allison beta'd and then decided to take it out when I began rewriting chapter 2, because I realized that it didn't fit at all. I didn't know I missed it at the end of the chapter, so I took it out now. Thanks so much for telling me!

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