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Reviewer: MAGGIE Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2005 - 10:51 am Title: The Gray Parts In Between

LOVE THIS STORY CHECK EVERY DAU FOR A NEW CHAPTER. I HOPE YOU UPDATE VERY SOON WITH A NICE LONG CHAPTER,AND LET BUFFY TELL SPIKE ABOUT THEM PLOTTING AGAINST HIM ..THANK YOU MAGGZ314@YAHOO.COM....IF YOU CAN PLEASE LET ME KNOW WHEN YOU UPDATE

Author's Response: thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2005 - 02:36 pm Title: The Gray Parts In Between

Well, looks like subconcious Spike came out to play. So sweet! This chap had a tons of stuff - scary threats, great (sweaty) fight scene (dance) hot sex and secrets! You sure are making the best of your out of country internet time! LOVE IT MUCHLY and want more (but I'll wait as long as it takes for a PJ update!).

Author's Response: You're so sweet :D

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2005 - 01:44 am Title: The Gray Parts In Between

wtf wat does he give her? ne ways god wen will he learn that sex is not the way to her liking him. also why didnt she tell him about the plans if i were in her situation i would be happy that i wasnt with angel that would suck more but i can understand hes being a bunhole. i love this story and am so happy that u updated. p[lease update as soon as u can, cant wait to read more and see wat hapens next thanx

Author's Response: sorry, i delayed the "present." I don't think you'll like ch 10, but patience is a virtue :) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Laine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/12/2005 - 08:33 pm Title: The Gray Parts In Between

Wonderful chapter. Excited for the next chapter. Hope it's a good gift. lol. Good thing Spike saved her in time. Can't have any more people rape Buffy. Poor her though. She's really suffering. But I'm really dying to know where you're taking this.

Author's Response: I don't think you'll like ch 10, but hopefully you'll see the tiny bright side. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: ~Eris~ Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/11/2005 - 02:59 pm Title: The Gray Parts In Between

Oh, and I am so one of those people that checks for updates daily!! :-)

Author's Response: wow thanks for the dedication ;)

Reviewer: ~Eris~ Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/11/2005 - 02:52 pm Title: The Gray Parts In Between

I like how Buffy is really trying and learning in her training. I can't wait to see her kick some ass!! :-D Now that Buffy learned a little something about Spike (Dru chose Angelus over him), maybe she can use that to her advantage somehow. And I just know that Riley and Lindsay's plans are going to come and bite her in the ass since she didn't tell Spike about them.... Spike's perusal of her body (to check for injuries?) was so sweet. Poor Buffy didn't know what it was. And the sex scene at the end was both hot and... confusing... It was nice that he was gentle and cuddly with her in his sleep, and that spot Buffy has on her neck really is her downfall isn't it? (Mine too!!) Buffy seemed to like it that he wasn't in control for once. He should let her be in control more often if he wants her to come around. And I wonder what she does when she runs off into the bathroom. Is she upset (crying?), angry at herself, disgusted, just cleaning up, etc? Spike should follow her one of these times so he could see, maybe he'll feel guilty and be a little nicer. Or not. It's still fun to read either way. ;-) And she gets a 'present' in the next chapter you say? Well now I'm even more eager to read it!!!!

Author's Response: Sorry to bail out on the "present" factor (check ch 10, its up), but I hope you keep reading anyway!

Reviewer: ~Eris~ Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/11/2005 - 02:25 pm Title: Cruel Fate

Another powerful chapter... We can see Spike coming around in the beginning (the "gap" after sex that he can't explain). And he's mindful of her bruises.... And I'm still enjoying the flashbacks. They really help us to identify with Buffy. I can't wait to see what happened back then. And the Harmony rape was disturbing, especially since Spike knew it would happen. Should be interesting to see if he feels guilt for that later on. And Buffy's reaction to seeing the rape, and relief at seeing Spike. I wonder if Spike will bring it up to Buffy later, or if he will ever learn anything about Buffy's past that may change how he sees/treats her...

Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/11/2005 - 01:56 am Title: The Gray Parts In Between

This is really a very interesting, and different story and I am enjoying it more and more each chapter. Trust certainly isn't in the cards yet, but hopefully her self preservation will kick in. Please, update soon as you can/

Author's Response: thanks for following!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/11/2005 - 01:40 am Title: Cruel Fate

Painful, but necessary, and Buffy, well, it sucks but I guess it's giving her reason to fight. As we should all well know, this world is a very dark one.

Author's Response: yes it is, and hopefully ours never gets as dark as this fic, lol!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/11/2005 - 01:27 am Title: Playing with Fire

Spike just does that to people. Those two just can't help falling into an all consuming fiery passion. Brilliant!

Author's Response: thank you so much!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/11/2005 - 01:13 am Title: The Dark Light at the End of the Tunnel

I enjoy this little hind at the Buffy and Faith rivalry that you've got going here. Not to mention the stab at a past involving Faith and Spike. Guess everyone's got a story.

Author's Response: yep, and i hope to reveal some :)

Reviewer: BuffyRat Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/11/2005 - 01:01 am Title: Saving Face

I love all the little tiny ways Spike just seems entranced by her. And though there is always a history between Angelus and Spike, I would really love to know what way Dru probably got between them. And this Buffy, she's one feisty cookie!

Author's Response: im glad you think shes feisty!

Reviewer: MAGGIE Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/11/2005 - 12:50 am Title: The Gray Parts In Between

SO LOVING THIS STORY CAN T HARDLY WAIT FOR THE NEXT NICE LONG CHAPTER....THANK YOU FOR THE GOOD READ...MAGGZ314@YAHOO.COMPLEASE LET ME KNOW WHEN YOU UPDATE

Author's Response: I don't have an updates list, but I'll consider making one - thanks for the support!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/11/2005 - 12:45 am Title: Never Defeated

You've got everybody in here. I may need a family tree to keep track of who's on who's side. But that just makes it more fun.

Author's Response: I think I have a few recaps of who is on whose side, and ill be doing that occasionally - even i tend to forget!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/11/2005 - 12:30 am Title: And the Winner Is...

Have to say, once you've laid out the situation, I gets really interesting. Though I'm not sure I see this Buffy as an effective gang member. But, at this point, who really knows? Though you probably do...

Author's Response: Did I tell you I love the fact you review for every ch even if you read them all at once?

Reviewer: BuffyRat Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/11/2005 - 12:16 am Title: A Harsh Reality

This is an interesting set up you've got going. I hope Spike kicks Angel's ass. And Harm... always charmingly annoying.

Author's Response: Hope you enjoy the rest!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/11/2005 - 12:07 am Title: Losing Innocence

Well, it was a bit sad, but I'm eager to see what happens next...

Author's Response: thanks for the review!

Reviewer: B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/10/2005 - 01:45 am Title: The Gray Parts In Between

Please update soon it's really great

Author's Response: thanks!

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2005 - 08:15 pm Title: The Gray Parts In Between

great update and cant wait for more spuffyness to come

Author's Response: thank you!

Reviewer: Aurora Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2005 - 07:33 pm Title: The Gray Parts In Between

Great chap. I wonder if Buffy will ever tell Spike about what Riley and Lindsay are up to? It might actually help her out in the long run. She could use it to gain his trust but I'm not sure she'd even want it. I like how you got Buffy fighting herself with her feelings for Spike. I also like how Spike's true feelings for Buffy are coming through his brutal treatment of her. She means more to him than what he lets on. I can't wait to see how Buffy's hate will eventually grow into love. Plz update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks for the insightfulness - makes me feel like i wasnt crazy in being subtle at times :)

Reviewer: FuNkY Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2005 - 03:46 pm Title: The Gray Parts In Between

Love it - update son?

Author's Response: thanks, and sure, go check now :)

Reviewer: lynn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2005 - 02:05 pm Title: The Gray Parts In Between

Quite interesting. At first I thought it was gonna be a story where Buffy puts up token resistence and after little coercion she gives in to Spike and they magically realize they are meant to be. But you fooled me. It's not your run of the mill, poorly thought out tale. Thank you for that. You've maintained my interest and I'm glad that Buffy, and Spike for that matter, are struggling internally and for completely plausible reasons. I'm also enjoying the training room sequences and supporting characters. I'm excitied to read more.

Author's Response: I'm glad I fooled you, lol. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: spufette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2005 - 12:10 pm Title: The Gray Parts In Between

Great chapter. I really wish Buffy would rat out Riley and Lindsey though. Can't stand either one of them and now that they've made it clear they are out to rape and kill Buffy? Buffy needs to make a decision as to where her loyalty lies (even if it's not her fault she's in this mess!) Anyway, I'm one of the readers that look for this story everyday for updates! spuf

Author's Response: Thanks spuf!

Reviewer: Kelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2005 - 12:06 pm Title: The Gray Parts In Between

YAY! the plot thickens

Author's Response: :D thanks!

Reviewer: Ashlee Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2005 - 12:06 pm Title: The Gray Parts In Between

I definitely needed this chapter today :-) Riley and Lindsey were beyond creepy and I'm glad she was able to get away from them. And the Spuffyness at the end was perfect. I love how they are both subtly changing and they seem to be on a level playing field right now. Of course, I have a feeling the playing field is going to be reversed sometime soon ;-) Excellent chapter- can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Stop spoiling my secrets, lol. Just kidding, it should be pretty obvious by now. I think there will be like 5 people who actually like ch 10 though, you and alli included...

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