[Report This]Date: 04/25/2006 - 06:17 pm Title: Making things right
wonderful update!!! ohhh so glad to see things finally clearing up for them...yay!!
[Report This]Date: 04/25/2006 - 03:21 pm Title: Making things right
Great, 'cuz a second is about all I have! lol
But really, this was a great chapter. I've enjoyed this story alot.
[Report This]Date: 04/25/2006 - 12:31 pm Title: Making things right
So, now that I've managed to almost break at tea pot and the computer, I think I should leave you a review before something does go kaboom!
I want to make sure I don't say anything about the last chapter though so I'll keep this short and just tell you: THIS IS SUCH A GREAT FIC (blame the capslock on Elena). You've done so well with this one sweetie and I've come to enjoy it even more than I thought I would when I started reading it...it's gotten better and beter. And you're closing it up so nicely, great job sweetie :-)
[Report This]Date: 04/23/2006 - 09:53 am Title: Looking to the future
this story is sooo good! it's the best spuffy fan fiction i've read so far. please finish the story soon!!!
[Report This]Date: 04/23/2006 - 09:47 am Title: Looking to the future
this story is sooo good! it's the best spuffy fan fiction i've read so far. please finish the story soon!!!
[Report This]Date: 04/20/2006 - 07:02 pm Title: Looking to the future
OMG!! im totally obsesed with your story!! It's the best fanfiction i've read...please hurry with the new chapter!!
[Report This]Date: 04/20/2006 - 03:10 am Title: Looking to the future
What a great story - only just started reading it and couldnt stop. Hope you can update soon.
[Report This]Date: 04/17/2006 - 11:45 pm Title: Looking to the future
thank you so much for getting out a new chapter but please don't leave me hanging i can only assume what the paper says. You are a great writer
[Report This]Date: 04/17/2006 - 05:06 pm Title: Looking to the future
*sings* "I know what he diii-iiid! I know what he diii-iiid!" Tra la la! Nice one! Love you and hurry up with the next chapter I'm getting withdrawal sympotms, twitching, shivering, depression, anxiety, everything! xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
[Report This]Date: 04/17/2006 - 03:29 pm Title: Looking to the future
ERRRRRR!!!! WTF!!!! i wonder wats in the newspaper and wat he had to do on his trip. i love this story so much and am sooo happy that u updated. i really hope that watever shes looking at is good an that wat spike did helped them be able to marry and that they can get together and be happy. please update as soon as u can, im dying to read the next chapter. thanx
[Report This]Date: 04/17/2006 - 03:25 pm Title: Looking to the future
hey!! wats up? how's ur baby girl? Great chapter!!! but i did notice a really big cliffhanger here... u wouldn't happen to want to update soon, would you? b/c i would really like to know the headline. lol.
[Report This]Date: 04/17/2006 - 03:25 pm Title: Looking to the future
hey!! wats up? how's ur baby girl? Great chapter!!! but i did notice a really big cliffhanger here... u wouldn't happen to want to update soon, would you? b/c i would really like to know the headline. lol.
[Report This]Date: 04/17/2006 - 12:27 pm Title: Looking to the future
Yeah an update. Did he go to London to clear her name? Hope next update won't be as long in coming. Love this story.
[Report This]Date: 04/17/2006 - 12:16 pm Title: Looking to the future
What does it say?!? What does it say?!? lol... I wonder what Spike was up to, though I think I have an idea. This chapter was so worth the wait, just hopefully we won't have to wait much more for the next one. Color me exited :)
[Report This]Date: 04/17/2006 - 09:52 am Title: Looking to the future
you do know that's an evil way to end a chapter right?? ;) Please update again soon! Want to know what that paper said.
[Report This]Date: 04/17/2006 - 08:59 am Title: Looking to the future
wonderful update!! i loved it!
[Report This]Date: 04/15/2006 - 03:46 pm Title: Loss of Innocence
Hmm I know this is going spuffy but really why would William be interested in some stupid chit who can't see through someone like Angel is beyond me. Who in their right mind would wanna go where their old man had gone before....it's almost like he would be doing it to his mother....just eeew
I can just imagine what Angel would say:
"here son have something that I took out for a test drive...not worth more than a go but hey you can have it"
I mean if Angel had been his brother maybe but now he's Williams old man.....the ick factor is just too much for me to say that I can see this having a belivable spuffy twist to it.
[Report This]Date: 04/15/2006 - 03:31 pm Title: Meeting
Hmm I don't know but I think your word program might be automaticly changing 'W' in Willow from W to w.
Is Angel married in this story? I mean how likely is it that Buffy would go falling all over him if she is 'beneath' him and he's married. Isn't this supposed to be in the 1700's or something. I have watched a lot of those British costume movies and I would say that such things are not very common. He might take her as a lover for a little romp in the sack but it would not be anything else. I don't know if it has been stated but I take it that the story takes place in England. And is Williams rough talk really belivable? I mean some of his expressions are probably not invented yet. The way he talks is not very belivable for an upper class brit of the time I would say. I think that a more William rather than Spike approach to his character would have worked better.
[Report This]Date: 03/25/2006 - 07:38 pm Title: First Touch
Very interesting so far... It's REALLY refreshing to read a story that involves both Angel and William and doesn't completely bash Angel's character, as so many fics do. I am looking forward to some Buffy/William bonding later on! Congrats on the writing.
[Report This]Date: 03/11/2006 - 12:53 am Title: Talking
AWWWWW thats so sweet and sad. i cant believe hank did that that bastard. i love this story and am so happy u updated. i really wanted her to marry him and i hope in the future that it does happen. also i really hope that even though they cant get married that they stay close and buffy and her family keeps living with them. please update as soon as u can, cant wait to read more and see wat happens in the next chapter. thanx
[Report This]Date: 03/09/2006 - 10:36 am Title: Talking
I'm trying to not say how much people are going to like the next chapter as well..because,w ell because this is a review for this chapter not that one, but people really are going to like the coming chpaters sweetie :-)
You're doing a great job and keeping everything true to the story, not sacrificing things to make things happen too quickly...you're just doing a great job with this story. hope you get lots and lots of reviews now, you really do deserve them
[Report This]Date: 03/08/2006 - 10:25 pm Title: Talking
Awww... Buffy is so noble. There has got to be some way for them to prove Buffy innocence..Seems that William is willing to marry her anyway..of course : ) But could Buffy live with the guilt of what her reputation would do to him?
Love the explanation of Buffy's problem...Great update!
[Report This]Date: 03/08/2006 - 07:48 pm Title: Talking
wonderful update, *sigh* it's all just so tragic! *weeps*
[Report This]Date: 03/08/2006 - 05:52 pm Title: Talking
How sweet and sad at the same time. Noble Sir William needs to clear her name! lol More soon please.
[Report This]Date: 03/08/2006 - 02:43 pm Title: Talking
I've been enjoying your story so far. I hope that you update soon. I do have one comment to make though and that is, there were no "wires" in those days so Buffy couldn't have had her 'wires crossed'. Just FYI.
Author's Response: Sorry thats because I was writing this at 2am when i couldn't sleep. I'll go change it now
. thank you for the review.