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Reviewer: dulcinea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/08/2006 - 02:40 pm Title: New Beginnings

Entertaining story, my one piece of constructive criticism would be to watch the modern language. You've set this up as a period piece, which is fine, but the mood is often ruined with the very modern way of speaking.

Reviewer: Beffy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/08/2006 - 01:37 pm Title: Talking

That's it!?!??!! embracing?!?!?!?!? Sleeping? what are you on, girl?!?!?! they wouldn;t just fall asleep for God's sake!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AAAAAAAAAAh i see what you're doing.....you're building up the suspense are you, so the great event is so much more spectatcular.....I won't tell anyone *conspirators wink*.....ooops.... anyways i love you, keep writing, and for god's sake keep updating!!!!!!!!!!! xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Reviewer: melissa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2006 - 01:23 pm Title: Getting There

lioving this fic

Reviewer: Raspy_Luv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2006 - 12:16 am Title: Getting There

:) Yay, and update. Love it!

Reviewer: spuffygurl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2006 - 11:40 pm Title: Getting There

more, more, more. please, please, please. this the best old fashioned story thus far that i have read.

Reviewer: Opal Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2006 - 10:42 pm Title: Getting There

More please!:) Great update.

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2006 - 10:15 pm Title: Getting There

OMG I CANT BELIEVE U LEFT IT WITH ANOTHER CLIFFHANGER EERRR!!!1 i LOVE this story so much and am so happy that u updated. i was really glad that she was talking about telling riley that they cant get married and that she loves william. i cant believe that she thinks william is married how can she not tell that he loves her jsut by the way he acts toward her. i really hope that they talk things through and get together. please updateb as soon as u can, i cant wiat to read the next chapter and see wat happens between them. thanx

Reviewer: Karyn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2006 - 06:02 pm Title: Getting There

yay! was so glad to see an update! i just love this story, *bites nails* for the 'talk' lol

Reviewer: spuffette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2006 - 03:05 pm Title: Getting There

Very sweet.

I just hope these two get together and marry!

spuf

Reviewer: spuffette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2006 - 03:05 pm Title: Getting There

Very sweet.

I just hope these two get together and marry!

spuf

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2006 - 02:53 pm Title: Getting There

Whew...You got me there with the last chapter...and the " Riley...Riley..." So glad that William didn't walk out before Buffy could have her little one sided chat.

I hope that William intends to ask Elizabeth to marry him now..Also hope that she can see that it would be fine.....Love how protective William is over her.

Looking forward to the next update : D

Reviewer: Suzee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2006 - 01:53 pm Title: Getting There

Well you know I like the chapter ;-) Since I just otld you and all....but I'll tell you here too so that everyone else can see that I do and the go and read it for themselves and like it too ;-) yeah, I'll shut up now.....really do like it though

Reviewer: Beffy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2006 - 01:53 pm Title: Getting There

I wouldn't mind being a prisoner or a guest of ole William here...teehee....what's she got to complaing about eh? update soon PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Reviewer: spuffygurl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/14/2006 - 09:56 am Title: Waking up

I'm loving your story and I want more more more. Please just don't leave me hanging like this. I have many stories on the go right now and this is one of my favourites.

Reviewer: Emily Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/10/2006 - 11:04 am Title: Waking up

omg!!!!!!!! please hurry with the next chapter this is brilliant

Reviewer: melissa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/10/2006 - 09:05 am Title: Waking up

this story is soooooooooooo gooood i cant wait for more :)

Reviewer: Karyn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2006 - 11:23 pm Title: Waking up

"Riley?" ugh! whimpers ...you've got to be kidding! lol

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2006 - 10:55 pm Title: Waking up

OMG!!!!!!!! WTF!!!!! WHY DID SHE SAY RILEYS NAME!!!!! oh i bet william is so hurt, i wonder wat hes going to do. hes been by her side the whole time and wanted her to wake up so bad, i hope that he doesnt react badly to wat she sid. i LOVE this story so much and am SOOOOO happy that u updated. i reaqlly hope that she doesnt still want to be withj riley, i know she loves william and once she hears that he satyed with her the whole time she'll understand how much he loves her. i really hope that eveything works out. please updated as soon as u can, im DYING to read more and see wat happens next. thanx

Reviewer: daisy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2006 - 06:09 pm Title: Waking up

please don't let that mean she's going to go back to that pig. i can't wiat for more. i hope everything gets worked out.

Reviewer: Rikka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2006 - 04:19 pm Title: Waking up

"Riley?" Is that a typo? Shouldn't it be William or Spike? lol.
Great chapter I can't wait to see how she reacts when she realizes where she's at and who she's with.

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2006 - 01:51 pm Title: Waking up

Riley?! Riley!!!!??? Ummmm...that would be ...William..sweetie..lol
Thanks for the great update!!

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2006 - 12:26 pm Title: Waking up

Okay, why is she asking about him right away.? She didn't want anything to do with him.

Reviewer: jt Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2006 - 12:21 pm Title: Waking up

So glad to see an update again. Love this story. Glad Buffy woke up.

Reviewer: Nicki Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2006 - 12:11 pm Title: Waking up

YIKES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Tuesday Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2006 - 11:29 am Title: Waking up

She's awake!! Yay! More soon!

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