

Date: 03/09/2006 - 12:29 pm Title: Introductions
This is starting out great.

Date: 03/07/2006 - 12:33 pm Title: Epilogue
*hugs you* You don't owe me a single thing. Reading this over was a pleasure, and reading it again is even more so. This is the perfect epilogue to a wonderful story. I'm a sucker for happy endings, and this ending was perfect--William doing what he loves, him and Buffy and Sam all together and happy, Angel living in blessed anonymity...everything was tied together and it just leaves me with this great feeling. Wonderful job!

Date: 03/07/2006 - 12:29 pm Title: Chapter 40
And you know, you got your 600--so begging totally works. =P See? *hugs you* And this chapter is wonderful, too. I love WIlliam's proposal speech, and Sam is, as always, PERFECT.

Date: 03/07/2006 - 12:27 pm Title: Chapter 39
William is definitely the biggest sweetheart on the face of the planet. Him buying that house is the opposite of creepy. It's freaking adorkable. I really love how you write William in your fics. =)

Date: 03/07/2006 - 12:24 pm Title: Chapter 38
*holds Sam tight* She is just so, so adorable! I love her.
And yes, I'm reviewing after its done. I suck. Suck, suck, suckity suck suck. But this fic really is wonderful, sweetie.
When he didn't answer her right away, Sam continued on with her reasons, "Because you're my daddy and daddies should live with mommies and their kids. And I miss you when you're not here. So you should live here." Before he could ask or say anything, Sam remembered one other question, "Can I call you 'daddy' now?"
Sam is just too cute for words. This little speech of hers was perfect.

Date: 02/28/2006 - 08:48 am Title: Epilogue
Do you know what happens when you're all in.......LOVE????
I'm too much in love right now with LC.....review later.
No. SERIOUSLY. I really will give a coherent review (a critique's one) when I gain my vocabulary back....so stay tuned.
Btw, didja know it kinda makes me as uncomfy as you are when you think me and Elena's reading your NC-17, when I'm the one who's reading the NC-17, knowing that YOU wrote it? Weird...
Yeah. That was so totally pointless. Nonetheless....stay TUNED for MORE........

Date: 02/25/2006 - 09:10 pm Title: Epilogue
Loved this story. Very nice ending. I'm sorry to see it end but can't wait to read some of your other fics. Great job

Date: 02/25/2006 - 03:59 pm Title: Epilogue
Good story. Very touching and Spuffy. Missed the Spikeness in the story though. He and his cockiness would have played better in certain scenes. But overall, it was a good story.

Date: 02/24/2006 - 09:03 pm Title: Epilogue
Wow! This story evolved so beautifully. I'm really thankful that Angel didn't overshadow the Spuffiness. Sam's gradual accecptance rang so true.

Date: 02/24/2006 - 08:45 pm Title: Epilogue
That was an amazing story. I love how everything worked out for the two of them. Oh, and by the by. I loved the part where you talked about Angel's hair taking a long time to get ready. I love Angel to pieces, but seriously - how much gel does he use?
Thanks so much for the story and congrats on all of the nominations, you most certainly deserve them.

Date: 02/24/2006 - 05:59 am Title: Interlude: Learning
Oh, so Buffy is really into musicans, LOL......give her a bit ot sting play Will and sweep her away, get her away from stuffy Liam......Good thing Sam is a girl, or there'd be no hope for her to escape her father's overbearing control..........thank goodness the only child is a girl, LOL

Date: 02/24/2006 - 05:52 am Title: Chapter 8: School
Love Sam....she's a delight........

Date: 02/24/2006 - 03:37 am Title: Introductions
Interesting beginning......the obvious NO connection of love between Buffy and Angel is there....he really doesn't know his wife very well.....and Wiliam just might be what mother and daughter needs, LOL. A breath of English air.

Date: 02/23/2006 - 03:36 pm Title: Epilogue
Awwwe... I'm sorry to see it go but I loved the epilogue! The jumping between present and past :)

Date: 02/23/2006 - 03:10 pm Title: Epilogue
I am sad to see this end because I really enjoyed it. But I am very glad there are more stories of yours to read. Thank you for sticking with it, keep up the great work!

Date: 02/23/2006 - 07:44 am Title: Epilogue
Was wonderful!!!

Date: 02/23/2006 - 07:25 am Title: Interlude: Time
You might want to look into paragraphing, and your speeches(yes, they sound more like speeches than dialogues sometimes) and thoughts are slightly too long... Made it a little boring and tedious to read though.
The plot is interesting, a nice try at their characterisations, but that's about all the merits of your story. It's not a bad read, and if the paragraphing and grammer weren't so bad, I would most definitely enjoy the story.

Date: 02/22/2006 - 11:21 pm Title: Epilogue
I loved this fic,and what a sweet ending.They are going to have a baby..Another one.I love the way you write,and am looking forward to reading more of your stories.I am joining your site,so I can get your updates.You Rock girl.

Date: 02/22/2006 - 06:09 pm Title: Epilogue
Perfect ending. Sad to see this story go. I loved it, it was brilliant, original and wonderfully written. I will definitely read your future fics.

Date: 02/22/2006 - 05:57 pm Title: Epilogue
I was away from the computer for a bit, and just read the last three chapters. Sam was always entertaining, without being too cute or cloying. You did a good job interspersing the flashbacks in the last chapter, they never disrupted the story's flow. This was entertaining and a lot of fun.

Date: 02/22/2006 - 05:08 pm Title: Epilogue
Sniffle sniffle. sad to see it go but I have to say i love it

Date: 02/22/2006 - 04:53 pm Title: Epilogue
You did a wonderful job with this story. I've been there from the beginning and willingly followed you every step of the way. It was quite a ride! I'll be looking forward to your new stories. Good luck with them!

Date: 02/22/2006 - 03:20 pm Title: Epilogue
Awww, that was such a perfect ending. Thank you for the wonderful story you shared with us. :D

Date: 02/22/2006 - 02:55 pm Title: Epilogue
That was a really good ending. Sometimes the build up in a story is so great that the ending is just kind of...there. But I was very satisfied with that one :-) Good job!!
XOXO