

Date: 04/20/2009 - 04:02 pm Title: discoveries and plots
Wish you wud finish this but im finkin you wont il jus av 2 imagin wat u wud av ended it

Date: 11/26/2007 - 05:01 pm Title: discoveries and plots
Oh please tell me you are going to update this soon.

Date: 11/26/2007 - 04:43 pm Title: Responsibility
well he need to go to buffy to do that.

Date: 09/23/2007 - 02:15 pm Title: discoveries and plots
I read this story & the first installment ags ago & thought that I would revisit it in the hope that you may have finished it-sadly no. I urge you to complete this story, its soo good and its not often that a story holds my attention like this, moreoften after reading a gazillion chapter I really dont care, but this is different. even if you have to make it 1 long chapter & tie it up quicker than you may have done. I know its been a while, but I can;t imagine writing something so good myself & leaving it unfinished

Date: 09/15/2006 - 09:00 pm Title: discoveries and plots
please update this story. I'm on pins and needles....

Date: 08/12/2006 - 02:54 pm Title: discoveries and plots
Please finish this story!

Date: 02/03/2006 - 02:35 pm Title: discoveries and plots
The sing -along was a sweet. It's nice that William can havea little fun with everything he has been through. Yay for Anya's tenacity. It is about time the good guys got a helping hand.
Author's Response: thanks for the review. i was trying to form some sort of connection between them

Date: 01/06/2006 - 08:45 pm Title: understandings and lessons
Thank you for the update. I am enjoying this tale.
Author's Response: thanks for the review

Date: 11/03/2005 - 08:02 am Title: awakenings
Ok...You've got me hooked, what comes next! :) Great job!
Author's Response: thanks for the review

Date: 11/02/2005 - 08:11 pm Title: awakenings
This is one of my favorites. Please keep updating! Thanks
Author's Response: Im trying, but ive been getting writers block. Ill keep trying till its done
Date: 06/03/2005 - 01:35 pm Title: Responsibility
well ive read the entire thing up to this point and i wish to read the rest so update soon plz
Author's Response: thanks for the review, please keep reading
Date: 05/16/2005 - 07:34 pm Title: Responsibility
Fan-freakin'-tastic!! Just found the first story yesterday and I'm loving the whole plotline. The only suggestions I have is maybe to get a beta. Sometimes, with the typos, I had trouble figuring out what you were trying to say. Also, I think if you would combine some of your chapters to make larger updates that you would get more reviews. It's hard to review short chapters 'cause not a lot happens. Not that I would want a delay in updates, I'll take them anyway I can get them. I love this story and can't wait to find out what happens with Spike and William. Thanks so much.
Author's Response: thanks for the review
Date: 05/13/2005 - 08:03 am Title: wrong turn
More angst, more anxiety, more agendas! I think that Joyce might have been a bit more 'in your face' with Cordelia - she seems a little too soft here. I love the bit about Darla's punishment for interceding in Connor's dreams. The choices links back to the set of questions at the beginning - looking forward to see what choices they make!
Author's Response: thanks for the review and the input
Date: 05/13/2005 - 08:00 am Title: wrong turn
This is a really interesting chapter! Introducing all of these women with their own interests and agendas is a very neat twist. The Cordelia angle works well, although it does make me want to hiss and spit - so you must have done a good job writing her. I'm glad you identified the two women from the earlier chapter in the last book, that had me confused. Of course, all you are doing with this chapter is cranking up the anxiety - good job!!
Author's Response: thanks for the review
Date: 05/13/2005 - 07:57 am Title: dreams revisited
Poor Spike, being spun like a top! I'm not sure that going to Angel rather than Buffy for help seems like the best idea, especially since Angel was not one of Spike's biggest fans. I love the idea of Spike as survivor, which makes very good sense since he's lived so long by being able to read the situation. Love his sense of responsbility for the child.
Author's Response: thanks for the review, spike will go back and forth for a while
Date: 05/13/2005 - 07:27 am Title: Prologue
I'm delighted to see the continuation of this saga. I like the set of questions at he beginning. They tell us a lot about what this story is going to be about. You paint a clear picture of the devastation left by William's kidnapping. Thanks
Author's Response: thanks for the review