Date: 06/10/2005 - 03:44 am Title: Ch.11 Saving Grace
omg omg OMFG i cant believe that joyce is making such a big deal about thins, williams a good kid and they love each other yet shes a bitch and wont let them see each other. its crazy buffys 17 almost 18 she should just tell joyce to fuck off and leave. i would so be pissed and yell at my mom if she did that. i really hope that william some how finds her and the baby and they get together and live happily, i likely doubt that will happen soon. please update as soon as u can, i cant wait to see wat happens next woth buffy and william thanx
Author's Response: This is a Spuffy story so have no fear, but it wouldn't be angst if I didn't draw it out a little bit. I love that you're enjoying it! Thanks! Kuddos!
Date: 06/10/2005 - 03:29 am Title: Ch.11 Saving Grace
Oh, I'm going to have to bitch slap Lindsey and Faith too.....they're hyptocritics, LOL. Both of them assuming Wiliam the bad guy....and I wonder if when Lindsey looks at his Sam if he'd wonder how William or his an Buffy's baby would not like the same chance he got.......Oh, wait Faith had to runaway to give it to him.......Poor Buffy and William, no on in their corner.....and I think Buffy should kick Lindsey's ass then for getting her underage sister pregnant 5 years ago, LOL. Forget it send Buffy to my house.....and I'll call Spike and ask him to move in too......LOL.....God I wish it was so easy.......LOL....Nice chappie....I will be gone from my computer totally come Saturday morning, staying at a hotel on Friday.....just incase there's not an update before that......
Author's Response: Wow! Now that was a mouthfull! Do I really get you that worked up? LOL! My beta sent me another chapter so I will post as soon as I reply to my reviews. Kuddos!
Date: 06/09/2005 - 09:11 pm Title: Prolouge/ Ch.1 My Funny Valentine
Oh. Well nevermind then. :-) Thanks Kimber, for speaking up there. I really like your stories too, in fact I look for them to see what you're writing next. And although you do have some spelling issues too, like I said, it depends on the degree of errors, an occasional typo is fine, it's when it starts getting crowded that I can't deal with it any longer and have to say something. It's never meant as more than constructive criticism. My deal? I write very well, spell like you wouldn't believe, and even have an idea or two about plots. But I just don't have the sustained interest it would take to craft the story and put it out there. And that's where you authors have me beat. You are putting a lot of effort into your work, usually, and coming up with some wonderful scenarios that I love to read. I applaud you for that. So if the only issue is spelling, which is simply not that hard to fix either with a good beta or an intelligent use of a good spellcheck program, then I'm gonna mention it. Why would you go to all this trouble and creativity just to stumble in that one area? And if no one mentions it, then how will you know? I love you guys. I wouldn't review if I didn't. And I really do like this story, beasleysmom. I look forward to each chapter as it comes out, now that I know it's going to start coming out a little more polished in that dept. :-)
Author's Response: Thanks Mac! Kuddos!
Date: 06/09/2005 - 08:44 pm Title: Ch. 10 The Choices We Make
i'll say it again, joyce is insane ;) i hope she realizes what she's doing and tries to make things right.
poor buffy and spike.. and baby :(
keep it comin though, still lovin it!
Author's Response: Who knows what can happen! *insert cheeky grin here* Thanks for the review. Much appreciated! Kuddos!
Date: 06/09/2005 - 08:36 pm Title: Ch. 10 The Choices We Make
aww that was so sad. poor buffy and spike. this story is getting really good. cant wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review sweets! I'll post as soon as my beta returns my chapters! Kuddos!
Date: 06/09/2005 - 08:32 pm Title: Prolouge/ Ch.1 My Funny Valentine
Mac, I think she is referring to me...so I will go back and recheck my stories, for unless someone says, "Hey, it full of mistakes I haven't a clue...." Just thought I was giving supportive advice to a fellow writer......and I don't feel I should have to do that in the cloak of darkness...I'm not a professional and have just started writing really and still learning....and since I'm not looking to be published, I'm not looking for perfection. I have learned so much from the who I use as a beta, and still learning. So I apologize if I have offended anyone with my tons of mistakes or my offering a support and advice to someone else.
Author's Response: I took no offence =)! I'm in the same boat as you are as far as being a new write; tis being my first atempt at a fic, so I know I will make lots of mistakes. That's why I respect you; as the reviewers to help me fix them. Love the suppor! Kuddos!
Date: 06/09/2005 - 07:27 pm Title: Prolouge/ Ch.1 My Funny Valentine
Um, Ironic? I don't write any fics, so there really wouldn't be lots of errors in them would there? Apparently you have me confused with someone else. I do usually write people off list but if it's simple then I might not, just a judgment call there. If the only purpose of the 'review' function is to yell, 'Kewl! Write more!' then that is a sorry state of affairs. I said I loved the story, just the error were very apparent, could a beta be used or something. There is no harm in that, and if I didn't like the actual story itself I wouldn't have bothered in the first place. There are many authors on this site with problems in their stories that go beyond spelling and you may notice I'm not reviewing their stories at all. But when the problem with a good story is just multiple spelling issues, then I'll speak up. So, please don't make assumptions about other people's motives or who they might be. In this case you are dead wrong. Thanks.
As for you my dear author, I'm thrilled that you found a beta, and so quickly! I just signed on now and saw your invitation to me, and was seriously going to agree, but you've found someone else and I can't be happier. Thank you for sharing your story with us, I do appreciate your hard work on this. :-)
Author's Response: Thanks Mac! I under stood that you where trying to be helpful. I accept the fact that; by putting myself out there; I had to be willing to take constructiv crtiasism. Thanks for your support. Kuddos!
Date: 06/09/2005 - 05:40 pm Title: Ch. 10 The Choices We Make
so why doesn't buffy go to spike now? c'mon buffy! go get him!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Kuddos!
Date: 06/09/2005 - 05:34 pm Title: Ch. 10 The Choices We Make
it's funny that the person who told you that you needed a beta has TONS of mistakes in her fics!!! Apparently, even with a beta. However, I did not think that it was appropriate to POST that in any reviews of her fics. For her to do so in yours is uncalled for. She should have emailed you and mentioned it in private.
Author's Response: Thank you for your support. I think when they posted on my errors they where trying to be helpful, but it is too sweet of you to stick up for me. Kuddos!
Date: 06/09/2005 - 05:03 pm Title: Ch. 10 The Choices We Make
this has been wonderful so far i cant wait for more good job!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! You're too sweet! Kuddos!
Date: 06/09/2005 - 02:34 pm Title: Ch. 10 The Choices We Make
hey great story
you should have faith understand what buffy is going threw and should have her set up a place for buffy and spike to meet and get back together or something but don't have buffy or spike go out with any body else. PLease don't I loved the story keep writting cause your really good!!!!!!!!!
love ya story and spuffy but mostly spike!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it! I have evry intention of seeing this baby to the end. Thanks for the lovley review! Kuddos!
Date: 06/09/2005 - 11:46 am Title: Ch. 10 The Choices We Make
Love it! Cant wait for more :)
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time time to review. You're an angel! Kuddos
Date: 06/09/2005 - 10:23 am Title: Ch. 10 The Choices We Make
AWWWWW you have to update soon couse i HAVE to know what happens!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I will be updating this evening. You have no idea how good it makes me feel that you like my fic so much *warm fuzzy* Kuddos!
Author's Response: I know I said I would update this evening, but I found a beta. Yay me! She is supposed to get the next chapter to me tomorrow, so I will post as soon as she gets it to me. Kuddos! Angela
Date: 06/09/2005 - 09:50 am Title: Ch. 10 The Choices We Make
Okay, so if she leaves Joyce and goes to Faith, why is she waiting for her Prince to come.......oh, I'm so confused....she should call William now and tell him to come and get her and baby to be.....I would think Faith would be the first one to put the phone if Buffy's hand and tell her to call Mr. Hottie....I want to bitch slap both Joyce and Giles.....I mean he said Spike looked at Buffy as he did his wife, Spike's mom.....how did he feel when death took her away....did he get over her in a matter of weeks.....idiot....I need to bitch slap him twice, LOL
Author's Response: I promise; all will be revealed. It wouldn't be called angst if it was all sunshine and lollipops. Sorry your so confused, but there is a method to my madness.
Date: 06/09/2005 - 05:57 am Title: Ch.9 Mommy Dearest
Oh this is story is awesome.......I would suggest, (only because I've been where you are) find someone to beta your story for you......the typos and stuff......Oh I hate it that I'm going to be gone and miss more of this story......
Author's Response: Glad to hear you are enjoying. I will get a beta as soon as possible. Thanks for the support! Kuddos!
Date: 06/08/2005 - 11:57 pm Title: Prolouge/ Ch.1 My Funny Valentine
I really like the story, but seroiusly you must edit this to correct the huge number of spelling errors in it as it is hard to read the way it is. Spellcheck is not your friend here, as most of the errors are words spelled correctly except they are the wrong words. Please please fix this! It's a good story and deserves more attention to this aspect of the writing. Thanks.
Author's Response: So sorry! I don't have a beta, so if you like; the job is yours! Thanks for bringing this to my attention. I will be sure to go over my errors. Kuddos!
Date: 06/08/2005 - 11:10 pm Title: Ch.9 Mommy Dearest
I hope that Spike can read "code" and decyphers what's happening, especially when Joyce sends Buffy away. And Joyce? No use crying over spilt milk. Buffy's already knocked up. Not like she could do much more harm to herself by seeing Spike...(I find it hard to hate Joyce in any form!).
Author's Response: I really do like Joyce, but I wanted to see her in a different light, don't worry she wont be a total bad guy.
Date: 06/08/2005 - 09:00 pm Title: Ch.9 Mommy Dearest
i adore this fic... wow.. joyce is really kinda scary.. i understand being concerned that your daughter's life is about to change with a baby but holy hell.. let the poor child BREATHE.. doing whats best for buffy and the baby would not be to take the babys father out of their lives.. its too sad. i hope joyce learns what she's doing is INSANE.. but i'll trust whatever is to follow :)
Author's Response: I am so glad you like it so far. I was reallt nervous about putting it out there, but I think it has been well excepted. Thanks again! Kuddos!
Date: 06/08/2005 - 07:29 pm Title: Ch. 8 Harsh Reality
like it. hope to read more
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I appreciate your review. Kuddos!
Date: 06/08/2005 - 03:03 pm Title: Ch. 8 Harsh Reality
apparently you were posting as i was reading (or i was reading as you were posting) but now it just stopped. Make it continue! Now! I need more!!! Gah. I hate cliffhangers. They're evil. You don't want to be evil, do you???
Author's Response: I have been called called the "Cliff hanger Queen" once before! As far as being evil, what can I say I'm a bad bad woman LOL! Since you asked do nicley I will post one more Chapter tonight! Kuddos!
Date: 06/08/2005 - 03:00 pm Title: Ch. 8 Harsh Reality
please post soon. i love thixstory. i cannot believe joyce is acting like this. she's really not my favotie person right now. please post again soon.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! Thanx for the review! Kuddos
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