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Reviewer: jennybear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/05/2004 - 08:21 am Title: Ch. 14: Doors Opening

Well, I both liked and disliked it. I am caught up in this. But I agree with another reviewer. I don't know how yoou get over the fact that he was with her mother. I think she could be mature enough to understand and accept that it wasn't Spike or her mom's fault. But it doesn't change the fact that she's always going to have that vision popping in her head now, and it's heartbreaking and sick and relentless. It will never just be the two of them now, there will always be three in the bed. Is he touching her the same way he touched her mother, kissing her in the same places, it's just natural to feel these things. I was loving your story, but now I don't see how it can realistically be resolved. It reads like they are just going to skim right past it, that Buffy's mature enough and no longer angry so everything will just fall into place for them. To me, that's not realistic. If the tables were turned and it was Buffy who lost her virginity to William's father, how would he deal with that? It's just too much. You're writing is great though. I'll look to see what else you've done. I don't think I can stay with you on this one. Please don't take this the wrong way. I love your writing. I just can't reconcile where this is going. : )

Reviewer: Angela Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2004 - 11:59 am Title: Ch. 13: Approaching Normalcy

excellent story i hope that this isnt the ending and i hope that buffy and spike meet again and give it another chance. keep it coming along

Reviewer: kms Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/16/2004 - 10:32 pm Title: Ch. 12: Mother-Daughter Talks

Ohhh too sad! I cant' even imagine having to go through that kind of sorrow. O.k., well I DID just imagine it & I quickly thought of something else! Poor Buffy & Dawn. Please update soon! I want Buffy to at least be comforted by Spike!

Reviewer: shippy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2004 - 03:29 am Title: Ch. 11: City Counsel

As much as I hated the Joyce/ Spike ick factor I believe that you're turning this fic around very positively. I love it. More please.

Reviewer: Sassy392003 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2004 - 11:03 pm Title: Ch. 10: Old, Wounding Confessions

Now that is sad.I hate to say this but somethings are best unsaid. I mean this!! All it did was tear up Buffy,and lets face itTear them apart as well. Honesty is not always the best poleicy. This just hurts,and nothing can change that,Not your owne Mother!!!!!! that is just one pill that is so hard to swallow.Now what,update please.!!!********

Reviewer: shippy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2004 - 11:10 pm Title: Ch. 10: Old, Wounding Confessions

Buffy's reaction is understandable, If I were her, and although I am spuffy mad, I don't think I could get over the ick factor.

Reviewer: Magan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/01/2004 - 12:34 am Title: Ch. 10: Old, Wounding Confessions

Her response was as I thought it would be. Poor Spikey! That's a lot to handle. He shouldn't said the name. She would have never known, but you gotta have some rough patches. Please update soon. I hope they can work out this problem.

Reviewer: vamptasticA Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2003 - 07:13 pm Title: Ch. 10: Old, Wounding Confessions

You did that on purpose didn't you? Got us all tied up in knots with the hot smoochies and then bam....typical man calling, one typical man. Boy, if I didn't love your stories so much...Oh well, I loved this chapter to so I'll shut up now. Update soon please?

Reviewer: vamptasticA Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/30/2003 - 04:22 pm Title: Ch. 9: Spanking New Confessions

OH MY GOD!!! Um...william this is reality calling, YOU DO NOT CONFESS while having sex!!!! Fauvist you made my day! It was sooooooooooo hot and then I giggled uncontrallbly!!!! More woman MOre!!!!

Reviewer: Magan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/30/2003 - 03:07 am Title: Ch. 9: Spanking New Confessions

Oh poor William's got a big mouth. LOL! I hope that things will be worked out.

Reviewer: Laura Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/22/2003 - 12:41 am Title: Ch. 8: Seaspray

This totally makes up for the Joyce parts! More, more!

Reviewer: Cara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/15/2003 - 10:33 pm Title: Ch. 8: Seaspray

I am loving this! A little wigged by Joyce but I'm over it. This is too good!!

Reviewer: Magan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/15/2003 - 01:39 am Title: Ch. 8: Seaspray

Aside from the ick Joyce and Spike parts, I'm rally enjoying this. I don't mind a little angst, cause you gotta shake it up once and awhile. I know Buffy and Spike will be together in the end. Thats the only thing that matters.

Reviewer: shippy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/14/2003 - 01:38 pm Title: Ch. 8: Seaspray

Spike and Buffy together you do very well. Great stuff, except that I'm sorry but I can't get away from the major Joyce Spike ick factor. I honestly wish you hadn't included that... I don't think I can really enjoy the story because of that not to mention that I can't see how it wouldn't be icky for Buffy either, not to mention feeling betrayed by her mother to make things worse.

Reviewer: Karbear57 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/14/2003 - 01:02 pm Title: Ch. 8: Seaspray

Nice chapter! When Spike dumped Buffy in teh cold surf, I almost spit out my soda! Very cute

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/14/2003 - 12:27 pm Title: Ch. 8: Seaspray

finally!!! been waiting ages for this update and it was sooo worth it. Thanks!

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/03/2003 - 10:38 am Title: Ch. 7: Working Off Memories

Please update...need to know what's going to happen next!

Reviewer: Lorna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/28/2003 - 03:26 am Title: Ch. 7: Working Off Memories

PLEASE UPDATE! I love this story....I hope buffy finds out about spike and joyce...that will be a major challenge in the relationship. Drama is always good!

Reviewer: shippy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2003 - 12:18 pm Title: Ch. 6: Matter over Mind

Why did you have to go and do that? I loved your fic, now it's just eeeww... Sorry

Reviewer: Bugg Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2003 - 03:39 am Title: Ch. 6: Matter over Mind

NO!! Don't stop there, please I begg of you. More please. Please!

Reviewer: MaRee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2003 - 12:03 pm Title: Ch. 5: Steel Memories

HAHAHAHA....God great story so far!!! Funny andweird with the Spike and Joyce thing lol. Keep up the great work

Reviewer: Lorna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/07/2003 - 11:42 pm Title: Ch. 5: Steel Memories

I am loving this story!!! This is absolutely great...my jaw hit the floor when Spike saw Joyce!! What the hell is Buffy going to do now?! Please keep writing...I can't wait!

Reviewer: hannah Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2003 - 04:21 pm Title: Ch. 1: A Photo Subject

I love this story so far!!! Please Continue, thanks for writing!

Reviewer: PaganBaby Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/20/2003 - 12:00 am Title: Ch. 1: A Photo Subject

Wowie-Wow-Wow-Wow! : D Your first posted fic and you hit it out of the park! I absolutely loved the first two chapters. I hope there's more than 2 chapters, it was wonderful. I could easily put myself in Buffy's place and see what she was seeing (and I LOVED what I saw lol). You did a fantastic job, keep up the great work! I can't wait to see more from you.

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