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Reviewer: daydreamer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/28/2006 - 12:08 am Title: Chp 9 Betrayal

really enjoying this story. please update soon.
thanks

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2006 - 11:00 am Title: Chp 9 Betrayal

Well done :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/19/2006 - 03:04 am Title: Chp 9 Betrayal

Arabella is an idiot or she wants always more.. Div'vid really loves her deeply. ~ Good that Xander kept his mouth shut when Anya sniffled about Div'vid seemed genuinely upset and concerned about his loved one... because he is more caring than Xander.
So Arabella did go on her own will... I guess she didn't want to see Div'vid so soon. And she has a second pendant? Ah I see.. the rhyme holds the title of the story. And for the first time Spike saw Arabella for real (that she did lie to him). I wonder though if she can talk herself out of it again. ~ (Loved it)

Author's Response: So pleased you’re enjoying the story. I love writing it.

Reviewer: golddrake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/18/2006 - 10:40 pm Title: Chp 9 Betrayal

great chapter

Reviewer: shelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/18/2006 - 07:49 pm Title: Chp 9 Betrayal

yay!! Very exciting!!

Reviewer: Fran Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/18/2006 - 07:32 pm Title: Chp 9 Betrayal

Woohoo! Spike finally sees Arabella for the witch she really is. I just hope for Spike's sake that he doesn't end up having to kill his cousin. I think that would weigh on him too much.

Author's Response: You may be right there. She‘s family and childe, too. A difficult combination. Glad you’re enjoying it.

Reviewer: gotkona Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/18/2006 - 05:23 pm Title: Chp 9 Betrayal

So glad you updated and Wow what an ending.

Reviewer: Melly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/18/2006 - 04:53 pm Title: Chp 9 Betrayal

I should probably be ashamed at how blood thirsty this story has made me but I really, REALLY hope that Spike (or someone) kills Arabella. You have done a wonderful job of writing a story that has really stirred up my emotions! More soon please!!

Reviewer: Angi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/18/2006 - 04:33 pm Title: Chp 9 Betrayal

OMG!!!! Major shock and cliffhanger! Please don´t keep me waiting too long.

Author's Response: Will try and update soon. Glad you’re enjoying it.

Reviewer: Roxy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/02/2006 - 06:25 pm Title: Chp 8 A White Rabbit?

Oh wow I love this story! Loved the first one also! Man that Arabella is really a manipulating bitch, why doesn't Spike see that? I mean, he's usually so good at reading people and stuff..ooh maybe she has a spell on him or something:P
The Buffy keeps denying her feelings for Spike, even to herself, is really getting agrivating! I mean come on, in the first story it was like she was really close to admitting she loved Spike, and now it's all like, 'hm, why do I care if Spike does this or that? againl', I mean, she's gettig kinda dense here...stupid denialy-buffy...
Please update soon!!!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/29/2006 - 03:48 pm Title: Chp 8 A White Rabbit?

Mmm so the place is different for everybody but dangerous. And Arabella still has secrets. I'm glad though that Div’vid came now because I hope he'll get some sense into Arabella. And that Arabella will tell some of her secrets.

Reviewer: jt Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/28/2006 - 11:19 pm Title: Chp 8 A White Rabbit?

So glad to see an update on this story. I really do intensely dislike Arabella. Glad her husband showed up.

Reviewer: shelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/28/2006 - 09:01 pm Title: Chp 8 A White Rabbit?

Excellent! Love this!!!!

Reviewer: ChrissieLinnit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/28/2006 - 04:18 pm Title: Chp 8 A White Rabbit?

YESSSSS!!! Thank the heavens for Div'vid!

I loathed Arabella in the last book, and I'm disliking her intensely this time round.

I also want to slap Spike upside the head... preferably with the antlers of a Chaos Demon! Thick, or what?! And, where's his love for Buffy gone? Grrrr.

So pleased to see an update on this, pet. Thanks.

Reviewer: Melly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/28/2006 - 01:44 pm Title: Chp 8 A White Rabbit?

Great chapter! I hope Dav'vid's arrival means that Spike & the others will finally have their eyes opened to how evil Arabella really is. I've been wanting Buffy to take down Arabella but if she's known how to get Hope back for all this time then Hope should be the one to dust her. This story has really made me blood thirsty and vengeful! Maybe I should ask Anya for adivce on a career change!

Reviewer: gotkona Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/28/2006 - 01:40 pm Title: Chp 8 A White Rabbit?

I am so glad you updated this one. I have followed since the first series.

Reviewer: Mali Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/28/2006 - 12:06 pm Title: Chp 8 A White Rabbit?

Hell, yes! Div'vid is back, and hopefully going to tell Arabella off.

I loved this chapter, and the dimension details, you're so imaginative!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/28/2006 - 11:42 am Title: Chp 8 A White Rabbit?

Get the locket Buffy... and ha .. ha..Cousin A - Divvid is here

Been waiting for this update.

Reviewer: alexpallex Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2006 - 04:41 am Title: Chp 7 Empty

*jumps up and down on the spot* ah, I want to know what happens next! you certainly know how to make evil cliffhangers!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2006 - 03:12 pm Title: Chp 7 Empty

Grrr to Arabella. She is so playing Spike and he notice nothing. I wish he would remember that he can trust Buffy.. could it in the past. ~ Not in Kansas? Looking forward to the next part :)

Reviewer: RP Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2006 - 08:47 am Title: Chp 7 Empty

Well....way to leave a cliff hanger!!! I sure hope your muse lets you continue on with this one!

Reviewer: scaryscouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2006 - 07:19 pm Title: Chp 7 Empty

Really like these Cousin Arabella stories and this one isn't disappointing either. Please post another chapter soon

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2006 - 10:38 pm Title: Chp 7 Empty

good update

Reviewer: jt Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2006 - 07:14 pm Title: Chp 7 Empty

So glad to see an update. I love the story, but really dislike Arabella. I hope Spike wakes up to see how horrible she is. It seems her husband was spying on her. Maybe he'll help that along. Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: shelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2006 - 04:32 pm Title: Chp 7 Empty

wow! didnt see that coming!! Very exciting!

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