

Date: 03/13/2006 - 09:37 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
yeahhhh diet coke my kind of girl. Gods she was so close to being able to just get past things. ugh Spike's gotta do what Spike's gotta do. I mean there could be a way for her shut that part out for awhile riight? some good sheilding techniques??? Poor Girl thinking that she has to end it,,,gods the ramifications here are going to be out of control. You are big meanie head. But fantastic chapter. I want more now,but the emotions that are gong to be there are going to be so raw. I am big girl I can take it so post more like now. pwetttyyyy please.

Date: 03/13/2006 - 09:24 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
Holy crap you left it there????
I cant wait to see Spike reaction when he finds her

Date: 03/13/2006 - 08:56 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
I feel so sorry for Buffy. She is so torn and sad, now that she knows she can't escape the claim (and Spike). But I don't think so knows that. So she didn't knew that Spike knows how sad she feels. So Spike thinks Buffy came around quickly? Men.. She is trying to block out what he does because it hurts her. Oh yeah.. that is the only option for Buffy; but Spike would have another one. I wonder how long it will take him to 'feel' what Buffy did; and if he will be back in time. And when he is back in time... will he see now that he can't continue feeding like he does or she'll try it again, to kill herself? (At last I hope you won't Buffy be killed by herself??)

Date: 03/13/2006 - 07:45 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
I said that the last chapter was your best yet, but I think this one runs a very close second. The way you're treating the effects of the Claim is unique, I think, in all of the Spuffy fanfic I've read, and I've read a lot.
Buffy's inability to reconcile her Mate's demon lust for the kill is an important factor that many writers alter to make the Spuffy relationship 'work'. Here, you've taken on the challenge of writing a fic where the couple have to work through the unacceptable aspects of mating. I do hope that they find a way before too much damage is done.
Really enjoying this, pet. Thank you.

Date: 03/13/2006 - 07:35 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
I think that was the best chapter yet. Very powerful, passionate and compelling.

Date: 03/13/2006 - 06:42 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
Aah. Possibilities for what will happen are running through my head at five hundred times the speed of a freight train. That, that was an evil cliffhanger XD.

Date: 03/13/2006 - 02:38 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
ooooooh, evil you! Please update again soon! Great chaper!

Date: 03/13/2006 - 01:51 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
good update cant wait for more to come

Date: 03/13/2006 - 01:36 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
I started reading this story and I am really enjoying it. If this review helps to bring on a chapter quicker, then I hope it worked. Oh evil cliff hanger author!

Date: 03/13/2006 - 01:32 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
I've been waiting for her to try that for a while now. I figured it was probably the only way she'd ever get through to him just what his feeding was doing to her, when she made it his turn to experience the pain and the terror that she's been going through.

Date: 03/13/2006 - 12:42 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
Aaahhhh! *chews nails* I have an inkling where this is going and it ain't gonna be pretty. Evil evil evil Spike! Feel like smacking him on the head now. *LOL*
Thank you so much for the great update, and don't leave us hanging for too long! Love this story! ;)

Date: 03/12/2006 - 11:11 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
Yes you are evil to leave things there but I'm sure I'll find it in my heart to forgive you if you update soon ~smiles in what she hopes is a becoming manner~ LOL. It does seem the only option open to Buffy and how horrible to think it's her only means of escape. This ought to open Spike's eyes up ~crosses her fingers~.

Date: 03/12/2006 - 11:10 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
i really hope that spike gets to her in time and please update soon? this cliffhanger is going to kill me! i can't wait to read what happens next!!! love your story and the writing is excellent!!!!

Date: 03/12/2006 - 10:51 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
Well, that was a BIG cliffhanger. Spike has to know now what happened to her. He'll be back. Poor little girl, rigid vampire. A wonderful chapter. Love her trying to come to terms and realizing that she never could. Too bad it had to come to this. Really looking forward to the next update. Still quite a few ways this one can end. Loved it!

Date: 03/12/2006 - 10:38 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
Even though your Buffy isn't the slayer, her spirit totally is. I knew that she wouldn't be able to handle it for much longer. But I didn't think that she would resort to suicide. I just thought she would ignore it and stay true to character. Loved the chapter. Please update again soon.

Date: 03/12/2006 - 10:33 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
OMFG!!!!! WTF!!!!!!!! i cant believe that shes going to kill herself. i wonder wat spikes going to do wen he finds her and sees wat shes done. i really hope that spike saves her and that he sees wat his feeding is doing to her and stops. i love this story and am SOOO happy that u updated. i really hope that everything works out and that buffy and spike stay together and become closer. also i want them to realize that they love each toher and that they admit it to one another. please update as so as u can, im dying to read wat happens in the next chapter. thanx

Date: 03/12/2006 - 10:30 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
Wow...I'm not trying to be a know it all...but it's kind of cool when I am able to guess what's going to happen next! I just KNEW she was going to resort to killing herself. In that situation, what is her other choice? ( at least from her POV) Even though Buffy is not the slayer in this story, you have done a great job with staying true to her signature character traits. Buffy is just to much of a white hat to be able to condone or live with Spike's killing. Oh Spike....Can't ya feed without killing!?
I am really looking forward to what Spike's reaction is going to be to Buffy's suicide....attempt? I hope she can't go through with it...or he can get to her in time. Great update : D

Date: 03/12/2006 - 10:23 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
OMG how could you just leave it like that. I'm going to be in complete suspense until you post again. That chapter was really great.. Can't wait for more. Please post soon!

Date: 03/12/2006 - 10:23 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
That was quite the cliffhanger. I am anxious to see what Spike plans to do about this current turn of events. Good chapter.

Date: 03/12/2006 - 10:03 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
Well I knew something like this was invevitable. She couldn't possibly live with feeling Spike killing every night. Now we'll see whether Spike can adapt. Can't wait!!

Date: 03/12/2006 - 09:58 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
But- is he killing now or just feeding? I mean, he can feed and let them live, right? Right?? Holy cow, i wonder what Spike is going to do when he finds her. He'll feel the pain through the claim and come straight back after her- but then what will he do?

Date: 03/12/2006 - 09:25 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
You're a big meanie!!!!! *g*

Date: 03/12/2006 - 09:02 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
i knew it! i knew this would be the next step. i can't wait for spike to feel her dispair and save her! please update soon. i really like this story.

Date: 03/12/2006 - 08:48 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
you have got to be kidding me!!!! I don't know why i'm so surprised i kinda figured it would come to this. spike was forcing her to accept what he was and didn't even consider that she was human and how much of an adjustment this would be for her. yep, he's been an insensitive prick for a good four or five chapters of this fic. it was bound to come to this. will she succeed? will spike finally realize that he's gonna have to make some major changes if he wants buffy to stay with him happily? post soon. loved it so much. maybe this will wake spike up from this delusion that he's been living in. I mean, how could he possibly think that buffy (of all people) was just gonna accept that he was killing people. COME ON!!!! loved it

Date: 03/12/2006 - 08:28 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
omgd spikes going to freak......... cant wait for the next update......