

Date: 07/14/2006 - 08:15 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
Wow...I didn't expect that! Update soon please!

Date: 07/14/2006 - 08:10 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
Hey! It's great to see an update on this fic. I really like Emma and Aiden. The attacks are just scary enough. I guess I'm jaded because I always know they'll figure out a way to defeat anything that comes their way. Green glowy Dawn is way cool!

Date: 07/14/2006 - 07:29 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
great chapter

Date: 07/14/2006 - 06:54 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
awesome!

Date: 06/19/2006 - 07:57 am Title: Chapter Twelve
Oh heavens...This was hard. I'm totally with Emma. We all know how disgusting violence and violence against women is, so I don't need to state my point of view (moreover, there was the Calling which did its thing and so on). I understand her completely, and I'm glad that meanwhile Buffy doesn't regard her as a threat anymore. Personally, I'd love to read a story basing on Emma. She's an interesting character in this post-Buffyverse, and she really fits in. And I like her. :)
I'm looking forward to more! Thanks for the update. :)

Date: 06/19/2006 - 07:37 am Title: Chapter Eleven
See? You can write it, and you can write it well. :)
For two reasons I liked this chapter very much - firstly, I'm addicted to dramatic meetings, and you fed my needs by letting Spike become so angry with Dawn...*g* Again, these details are so awesome (which is my second reason) - for example when Dawn noticed Spike's anger by him not calling her Dawnie or Nibblet. Or the news we learned about Emma; her claustrophobia. The whole dialogue about the revelation of Dawn being the Key was fun reading as well. Great stuff! ;)

Date: 06/18/2006 - 08:44 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
awwwh! that's sweet! sorry i'm reviewing so late. it took me FOREVER to have time to read this chapter! update soon!

Date: 06/12/2006 - 01:13 am Title: Chapter Twelve
A little back story is always a good thing, and a whole back story would be wonderful. There's a reason why little Emma was locked in a closet, and those are seldom happy memories. Pretty nifty that you brought back the guardian of the scythe, too. I liked her when she was around the first time, even if she spole in riddles. And Emma and Buffy finally being able to share, can only be good for both of them. Great chapter.

Date: 06/11/2006 - 05:56 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
Excellent writing. I felt Buffy's strength throughout & felt how little by little she was sharing it with Emma, even before they clasped hands. Loved it. I might be interested in a story mostly about Emma after this one culminates. She's turning into a strong character..

Date: 06/11/2006 - 03:58 am Title: Chapter Twelve
I like how Buffy's Slayer dream moved the plot forward. Loved the Emma/Buffy interaction. Emma is such a strong character, i'm sure a story with her in the lead would be really interesting. Great chapter!

Date: 06/10/2006 - 11:36 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
always love your updates!!!

Date: 06/10/2006 - 10:15 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
Frankly, I 'm not sure about a story with Emma as the main character. But I would definitely give a go if you write it. This chapter moved things to a whole new level. I'm intrigued that Buffy has grown so much that she can see past what Emma did to Bobby.

Date: 06/10/2006 - 07:57 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
Ohhhh that was a nice chapter to get to some knowledge that is helping with the story line!! Great chapter!!
-Ashley-

Date: 06/10/2006 - 06:12 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
Oh the guardian..I liked her in the show. Ahhhh always consequences to magicks always. You did fabulous with the showing of emotions here. Having Buffy share how she has faced things in her past. Helping Emma come to terms with hers and start the healing. This was awesome. UMMM A billizon votes from me on Emma's story. so get writing LOL.....I am so hooked on this whole post chosen series you have going. It is all SO pliable and you keep the characters in check. You keep them as they were in the show and yet you bring them forward to show that they have grown. That they did go on. Ok so everyone needs to read Both Sides Now on your website...all of you go forth and READ IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Date: 06/10/2006 - 06:04 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
I'm glad you brought up something like this, for there had to be consequences of Buffy and Willow doing that spell. Every girl out there would be completely clueless to what was going on.

Date: 06/10/2006 - 04:43 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
Wow, I'm glad Buffy's helping Emma. Update soon please!

Date: 06/10/2006 - 04:24 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
Mmm Slayer dream and the guardian is back. I wonder if it is important who the child was. Yep, it was; it was Emma. She has indeed a lot to bear. But think too she didn't knew what she did because she had at once so much power. Loved the interaction between Buffy and Emma, how Buffy tried to help her. ~ About a story with Emma? I would be interested, but I don't have so much time to read other stories too so I would wait till I would find that time (*points to your Dawn/Andrew story. It's the same problem here*) ~ Loved the chapter, looking forward to the next one :)

Date: 06/10/2006 - 04:04 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
Great chapter. I'd like to read a story about Emma, it could be really interesting.

Date: 06/06/2006 - 12:52 am Title: Chapter Eleven
Always a delight to see this story updated. Love Dawn accepting mystical powers in her sleep and telling no one but Andrew, and Spike's reaction, so very him and priceless at the same time. I hope Emma can deal with her claustrophobia. Thats never any fun. Great chapter. Please, update soon!

Date: 06/05/2006 - 08:23 am Title: Chapter Eleven
Well, I'll have to read "Both Sides Now" because the key-power plotline will probably come up again here. I liked Spike and Buffy calling Dawn on withholding vital information. The idea that they're leading her right into the lion's den makes her omission even dumber.

Date: 06/04/2006 - 10:58 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
Great update! I am reading Both Sides Now as well, and love the way you are weaving everything together!

Date: 06/04/2006 - 07:58 am Title: Chapter Eleven
oh oh oh oh this was good. Dawn's secret is out and things could and I am sure will get very interesting. Buffy worried over her child, Aiden worrying about having Emma around for awhile....fantastic update now more more more

Date: 06/03/2006 - 10:24 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
LOL. . . I performed a that-ectomy? Do I get physician's wages for said service? (I almost wrote the bad word there). . .
Nice update sweetie.

Date: 06/03/2006 - 10:10 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
Great job Addie, it seems like the fates have much in store for all, and I must say I am quite interested in what prophecy this baby is about that so much power is going to be bestowed upon it. As always I look forward to the next chapter and thanks

Date: 06/03/2006 - 09:41 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
Great update! I really enjoyed it.