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Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2006 - 01:25 pm Title: Chapter Eleven

Love the chapter. Love it when Spike goes all big -brotherly on her! Please update again soon!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2006 - 05:53 am Title: Chapter Eleven

Thanks for the quick update, even two stories today. I haven't read your Dawn story yet, have to many Spuffy ones to read. Dawn forget to tell something important indeed. I wonder how Aiden and Emma will work out their relationship when the fight is over. Till the next chapter :)

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2006 - 05:41 am Title: Chapter Eleven

I'd forgotten about Dawn getting Key stuff. Thanks.

Reviewer: shelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2006 - 01:15 am Title: Chapter Eleven

lovin' it!

Reviewer: golddrake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/02/2006 - 09:52 pm Title: Chapter Eleven

great chapter

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2006 - 03:55 pm Title: Chapter Ten

Well I'm still enjoying even if I do have to go back a couple chapters to remember where it was. Glad your still working on it.
spikespet2002@yahoo.com

Reviewer: Lilly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2006 - 09:55 am Title: Chapter Ten

*throws a rock of encouragement* Addie - this is an interesting story, honestly. I totally loved the idea of the baby super power!!! This gives Buffy the possibility to fight without being too afraid to get hurt. You had to find a solution for this issue, and you did it! Don't be unhappy with this fic, it is able keep up with your other ones... :) Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: KT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2006 - 04:42 pm Title: Chapter Ten

Well, I like it, if that helps :)

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2006 - 09:20 pm Title: Chapter Ten

good update

Reviewer: galatea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2006 - 12:32 pm Title: Chapter Ten

I am so happy you have started up on this again. Great chapter - can't wait to read more!!!!!

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2006 - 12:15 pm Title: Chapter Ten

Ok AL, here's your review so now you have to keep going on this one. It's awesome (as are ALL your tales) and I love this adventure so I really need it to continue to its conclusion. Magic belly Buffy is cool and I'm glad Aiden knows that Dawn is the Key now. I wonder, will he send Dawn back now or is she stuck there until the mission is accomplished? More please - don't give up on it. Thanks for sharing your talent.

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2006 - 02:07 am Title: Chapter Ten

It's been a long wait, but well worth it for this excellent chapter. I loved it! Excellent writing. The fight with the demon was awesome.

Reviewer: Milly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2006 - 11:10 pm Title: Chapter Ten

Was great to see an update, I really enjoyed reading this before, and was hoping for more of this.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2006 - 10:30 am Title: Chapter Ten

The fight was a well choreographed and vivid action sequence. Buffy's bulletproof belly puts a new twist on this entertaining story.

Reviewer: Wolfspider Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2006 - 08:32 am Title: Chapter Ten

YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! So happy you were able to update this one. I have been enjoying your other stories too,so i just waited for the muse to come let this one come into play. I still want one Aiden to go please LOL. Ok so the secret is out about Dawn, now Buffy is harboring a prophecy child? Things could get VERY complicated from here. I loved Emma kickn ass and takn names later. Excellent chapter...hope the muse let's this one flow. It's an awesome story.

Reviewer: Manda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2006 - 06:02 am Title: Chapter Ten

I just have found this one and read it in one go. It's well written, different form others and I like the whole Emma/Aiden plot. Please continue writing it ... I can't wait for an update.

Reviewer: teasha Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2006 - 04:44 am Title: Chapter Nine

love the story and like the romance between Emma and Aiden. I think it is nice that Buffy and spike are together and sharing the story with a newer couple.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2006 - 04:23 am Title: Chapter Ten

No prob because of the updates.. I just read the last chapter again. Emma fell in love with Aiden and didn't notice yet? Maybe she'll soon. Wow.. and first everybody though Buffy needed to be more careful because she is pregnant. Seems she (the baby) is protected! Nifty :) But Dawn's cover is blown. The demon noticed she is the Key. ~ Good update :)

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2006 - 01:04 am Title: Chapter Ten

So the big secret about Dawn is out in the open and Buffy and Spike's baby is one of prophecy. Can't say as that surprises me, but to have the baby protected my magic, such as Connor is a good thing, up until the whole birthing situation at least. Hopefully we won't have to dust Buffy... but that is neither here nor there. The little bit about Emma's brothers and the turtles was a bit of sicko humor too. Who knew that kind of knowledge would ever be useful. And Emma is a pretty awesome slayer. So very happy there was an update to this story and thanks to Niamh for helping it to happen. I hope your muse is feeling better about it because it is still an awesome story. Looking forward to the next update.

Reviewer: Alyxandria Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/26/2006 - 09:58 pm Title: Chapter Ten

I was so excited to see this fic updated! Great chapter. Love the action in the scene where they were attacked.
-Alyx

Reviewer: Laura Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/26/2006 - 09:17 pm Title: Chapter Ten

Still keeping with the story, and still liking it!!! Take your time if you can't get it the way your want it...it's worth the wait! :)

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/26/2006 - 09:13 pm Title: Chapter Ten

Great update... I really enjoyed it! I like this new development about Buffy's baby. Can't wait to learn more about the prophecy.

Reviewer: McChick Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/26/2006 - 09:03 pm Title: Chapter Ten

Eek that they now know Dawn is the Key, but yay that so far the baby is safe!!
I love those little couple moments that Spike and Buffy share too!
Thanks for the update, the wait was worth it!!

-Ashley-

Reviewer: timeofchange Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/26/2006 - 07:45 pm Title: Chapter Ten

Prophecy baby! yay!

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/26/2006 - 07:33 pm Title: Chapter Ten

This was good!

Buffy and Spike's child being special doesn't surprise me...she's a Slayer and he's a daywalker/hybrid guy. Of course there's a prophecy. Yay, baby!

Dawn should have a weapon. She has had a bit of training in defending herself, and she obviously needs to remember those things in this environment. Nasty evil guy.

Please continue.

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