Hehe.. William thought of raiding Joyce's supply :) Hot chapter.
So they found some letters (so Joyce wasn't lying) and some cash. That's even better.
Ethan? I hope he's too out to notice them. Would be very bad I guess (I don't think Ethan turns out to be a good guy.

EEP! Evil cliffy! ;)

eep, my bday is two weeks after Halloween too, lol... in fact... it's today, lol

Author's Response: Happy Birthday!

Uh oh. Elizabeth found the Grandfather. Great chapter!

i'm so glad you updated! i love this story so much

cant wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!!! :D

Dun dun dun...and the plot thickens!

Great to see a new chapter here. Loved the confrontation with Joyce. She is soooo delusional.

*sigh* Now I'm dying to get the book and read it. It's awesome! :)

I wish they would just call the police when they sneak out again; Foster homes will be much better than this, isn't it? Or that when Wesley and Joyce finally marry, Wes will discover the kids and dump Joyce on her ass after rescuing the kid.

Ahh.. What angst. Lmao. Please update again soon!


Jen

The nerve of that woman. It amazes me that she can compare her suffereing to theirs. She may now be the young socialite her father always wanted, but she's lost some level of humanity. So glad they can cling to each other. Going to have to watch out for those darn perceptive twins, though. They're going to figure some things out sooner rather than later. Great chapter, always ready for more!

They've already got an evil grandmother, for balance and variety I think it'd be better to keep Joyce gray area. And um don't hate me, but I think Will's crying has gone way overboard. As the male lead of the fic it's not very attractive for him to seem like such a sissy. These are just minor complaints, overall I'm still enjoying this fic immensely -- I wouldn't have stuck with it as long as I have if I felt otherwise.

Author's Response: I can't make any promises about Joyce, but the crying for WIlliam is going to subside a bit. I think he just had to get over this last hump of giving up on his mom. Will was the last one to believe in her and I see him letting go of that belief as being very hard on him, hence the crying. Thanks for the review!

Go William! I'm wondering what will happen when one day, hopefully, they are released from the attic and thrust into the real world again...will thier bond be the same, their love? Love it.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you are interested in this b/c I can't wait to explore it in the sequel. I have all these great scenes in my head that I'm so excited to put onto paper.

Excellent Chapters. I was a little woried when you made Will a little more violent that usual (see Chris in 'Flowers in the attic') but then it turned out alright. :) I can't wait for your next chapter!

Author's Response: I wish I could remember the book better because I have no idea what you are talking about with Chris. I read it so long ago that I don't remember much but the general plotline and some specific scenes. Then someone writes something in a review (like yours) and I feel like I should know what you are talking about. A lot of times I do things thinking they are my own little idea and it turns out it was in the book a bit differenty. My subconcious must remember more than I think!