Oh I also wanted to add, when is Will going to go down on Elizabeth? They have been sleeping together for several months now and he still hasn't? Doesn't make sense to me.

Author's Response: Funny you should ask. Without giving anything away, I think you'll like the next chapter :)

Great and amazing chapter I can't wait for the next one please update soon

This just keeps getting better! What a cliffhanger!

Glad you took a break from the smut to write a more plot-driven chapter. I think the story and W/E was in need of a breather from that.

Um, was Elizabeth about to let Will use their mom's vibrator on her, without even washing it first? Even for me, that's a little too pervy for my tastes. LOL.

Author's Response: I love seeing your reviews -- you crack me up. The problem with the smutless chapters is I don't get as many reviews. Obviously, all of my readers are perverts - LOL! As for the vibrator, I don't think Will was going to actually use it on her - just a little above the clothes teasing, though I'm assuming Joyce would have washed it before she put it back in the drawer?

Great chapter!!!

I loved the part with the vibrator lol and I'm excited that she took some condoms....will Joyce notice that 3 are missing? Hmmmm.

Please update soon Jenny.

Oh man... this chapter was intense!! I couldn't imagine being that room after knowing your mother and kinda abandoned you!! Can't wait to see who the voices are coming from and what is gonna happen next!

-Ashley-

We can always trust you to keep it hot! LOL Lovely update. I liked their idea of making a second key, in your story they are less naive as in the original, I like your views better. I was wondering how you would make this scene go because in the original this is where they discover a kama sutra book, which happened already in your version. Love that you kept it naughty. Please update quickly I'm very curious about the next chapter, are they going to see Joyce and Wesley have sex?

Don't worry about not chosing me as a beta, I can't compete with Megan and Andrea. You're lucky to have them beta'ing your story.

Author's Response: The great thing about not remembering a lot about the book is I know the major plotlines, but I don't necessarily remember the details as to how they get to those points so I can make it up as I go along. At least, I think I am - I didn't remember them finding a kama sutra book in the book, but I guess it must have been hidden in my subconcious. And thank you for volunteering as a beta - I got such a great response that I wanted everyone who volunteered to be my beta, but I thought that was going overboard. It was hard to choose who to have do it, which is why I ended up with two as it was!

Ah! Cliffhanger!! She is a conservative thing only taking 3, I wonder if they will try to wash them out. It is a good thing Will is a fast thinker or they would be done for! Good chapter.

Wow, I really like the way the story progressed! The speed is slowly but building like I've mentioned before, and I'm so excited to see that they've actually not role-played this time 'round!

Your writing style is so clear cut that we can imagine every single scene vividly but not get confused and bored. It absolutely marvellous, and I find that quite a rare talent. I do hope that when you finish this fic, we'll get to read more 1st class Spuffy fics of yours :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the compliment. I am totally insecure about my writing so it's nice to get a review like this. Thanks for reading!

wonder if they're able to get to joyce's room when they're out and about exploring..... love the update and waiting for more!

Glad the key works! Great chapter!

Excellent chapter! Very hot sex scene ;)

I'm still loving this story. Very hot chapter, and I can't wait till they can start exploring the house.