They are so perfect together, except for the whole bit of incest and being trapped in an attic and all. It's been a good long while since we've heard from mom. Wonder what she's up to. Looking forward to another update.

Lord i feel so sorry for those 2.This is so sad,dark and yes sexy.This tryest is going to ruin both for the rest of there lives.Because it is for dam sure they love each other,and not in a good way.Just laced with gilt.Dam Joyce,and Dure.My god what they have done to them.I hate Joyce more then most.What a dam excuse for a mother.I can't see this story ending happy.

Gahhhh, *drools* Upping the hotness factor is NEVER the wrong thing to do. Great to see the chapter.

Wee! They can leave their room now! I'm happy for them, but I hope you won't stay to close to the book , I didn't like the trips in the mansion, they were so naive in the book. (Hopefully that was unstandable.)

William can be so sweet, this chapter really shows us that his love for her is way beyond family, but that of true love.

I guess I'm a bit to tired to review right know, really can't find my words, so I'll stop after saying this:"really enjoyed reading this like always!"

Author's Response: Honestly, I don't remember what the heck they did on their trips out of the room in the book so hopefully, it will be very different. I have a feeling it will be. I hope it's to your liking.

I was so worried that the damn molds wouldn't work! Wheww...Buffy seems to be discovering her power in being a woman..she managed to convince Will pretty well..lol

BTW...Bathroom scene...HOT! ; D Wonder if they will manage to get out and explore in the next chapter..Can't wait to read more!

Please continue, it be very cool if you continued! I REALLY wanna see what happens......teheh. GOOD LUCK FINDING A JOB!! I bet youll find a kickass one so dont give up :)!!
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Ppffft...*if* we're still interested? Jenny, you gotta know there's no "if" about it lol... Check for an update every day, I do. :D

Loved this chapter, and the expression of the trust to 'Spike and Buffy'... they had it with 'William and Beth,' but it sort of goes along with the connecting of the two different relationships in that Spike still needed reassurance from Buffy, even though he knew he had it from Beth. And the same for Buffy. It's really a great thing to add to the plot, even if you didn't mean to do it :P.

Great job! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you for reassuring me that I still have some readers! I hate having to take that much time off in between chapters. Hopefully, I can start updating quicker again.

At some point Buffy has to get pregnant. While incest is plausible albeit frowned upon, having that much unprotected sex without conception occurring is not. I hope you come up with a solution or explanation for this if she doesn't end up getting preggers sometime soon.

Barring that, I have no other complaints about this fic. I was skeptical at first but I think you've done a good job with the taboo premise. You were careful not to rush things and when you did get to the sex, you made it understandble how this could happen, not to mention it was totally hot! *g*



Author's Response: Although I understand that pulling out is not the greatest method of birth control, I just can't bring myself to make her pregnant. They have enough on their plates without that extra worry. And I wanted a lot of sex in this story because I thought there should have been more in the book -LOL. I will touch some more on the birth control and pregnancy issues throughout the story. Hopefully it's enough to ease your mind.

That was worth waiting for :)

Yet another HOT chapter..you are very good at writting sex..lol That was a brave thing for William to ask Buffy. Especially in lew of their situation. When William talks about thier experimenting..he is trying to convince himself that is all this is between them. Experimenting..something he may try to later label and stowe away one day as " just two young kids experimenting together" What they are doing is way beyond that and will have conseqences mentaly if not physically..Elizabeth is being way more realistic about it it seems to me.. Thanks for the great update!

Wow -that was a hot chapter! It was worth the wait for the update :)

loved this chapter!! I can't wait till you come back and give us some more!!! Please update w/ lots of chaps when you come back!!!

Well, that was just plain hot. lol. Good song choice for this chapter, too. And it seems that the perfect cover-up of Spike and Buffy is fading... I always got the feeling that Elizabeth would be the first one to forget.

And it was smart, that last sentence in the paragraph. "He kissed me before I could say his name as I came." It leaves us wondering, was she shocked? hurt? thankful?

Then the last sentence of the chapter: "I was definitely ready to move on the the next part of the evening." It adds on to the wonder of the other sentence. Was she needing to forget she'd almost said his name? or was she just horny as hell? lol

A great chapter, and I can't wait until the next!