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Reviewer: Whitelighter354 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2006 - 03:44 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Eight

Finally! Just Kidding! I understand! Loved the chapter! please post very soon! :)

Reviewer: Irishwoman39 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2006 - 01:18 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Eight

Well that was sooooo dam hot,You have left me speechless. and thats it.

Reviewer: Samantha_78 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2006 - 12:08 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Eight

Yay for an update, finally! I hope you will start updating on a more frequent basis!

I think no matter what happens they do need to stay as brother/sister. As much as it is morally wrong, this is a story and if you want to follow in the steps of Flowers in The Attic, they need to stay blood-siblings., just like Cathy and Chris.

I've noticed you haven't brought Dru or the mom into the story lately (or even giving the twins dialogue) which is fine with me, I love how you have been focusing solely on Buffy/Spike.

That was a hot chapter, glad to see you took my advice about doing an oral scene! Thanks hon!

Reviewer: beasleysmom Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2006 - 08:23 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Eight

Well I just found this fic and have read it all the way through and i have to just say this.... I FREAKIN" LOVE IT!!!!!!! Man you have put so much into this fic that the characters feelings seem so real. I know that this is a VERY touchy subject but you have handled it quite well. I'll be here.... waiting impatiently for the next update ;). Kuddos on a job well done sweets!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you found it and like it.

Reviewer: sumshiine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2006 - 07:17 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Eight

that was amazing!!! please continue!!!

Reviewer: Amarysso Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2006 - 04:35 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Eight

Woohoo, update! Worth the wait Jen! Buffy taking control was great and her thinking was funny (should I swallow or not, best swallow if don't want to choke. LOL)

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed. I'm trying to show that they are new to this sex thing and I hope I'm pulling it off. He'll be having some "am I doing this right" moments as well in the future.

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2006 - 01:18 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Eight

Please,please, figure out a different storyline for the ending..Somehow they can't be brother and sister. These two are just to hot together to be brother and sister and not end up having a life together.

Grrrr...Their Mom is really ass. Didn't even care about those sweet little twins...

Reviewer: nikki_chinger Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2006 - 12:50 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Eight

hmmm... it seems like she is realizing more that it is Will instead of thinking of the game.. I wonder if he is doing ths same too.. she refers to him in her head and how she thinks as Will more... is he thinking the same thing or is he concentrating on the game?? I hope ther eis some way they can get together!!!! I am looking forward to, and hope that it will happen, when they finally have sex as William and Elizabeth.... but anyhow... luved the update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! but took too long!!! Update again soon!!!

Reviewer: rosie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2006 - 10:28 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Seven

im in love with this story!!
i really hope you can update soon!!

Reviewer: Steph Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2006 - 12:54 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Seven

Oh please update soon. This is such a great story and I'm really enjoying the character development. I'm so relieved that Buffy isn't pregnant though. That would definitely have been an another obstacle that might have delayed their escape. I really hope that they try to escape soon. Please keep the updates coming.

Reviewer: SusieDaSpikeSlayer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/23/2006 - 05:40 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Seven

I absolutely love this story. I wish you updated more often...I'm so anxious to see what happens next

Author's Response: Sorry for the lack of updates lately. Work has been very hectic. It seems to be slowing down lately, but it may be the calm before the storm. I'm trying to write as many chapters as I can while it's a little slow!

Reviewer: Tuesday Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2006 - 01:34 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Seven

Great chapter. And the escape is coming up! I can't wait!

Reviewer: spuffology101 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2006 - 09:54 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Seven

Wow! This story is amazing. I love your charcter development. I'm really enjoying this. Hope you update soon.

Reviewer: Anne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2006 - 11:27 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Seven

Ohhh Another excellent chapter....

I love reading this story xD

*rubs hands in anticipation* I can't wait for more =O

Reviewer: flibble Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2006 - 06:51 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Seven

This was a really nice chapter. Took us back to that sweet, tender, loving relationship between Elizabeth and William. The lines for William/Spike and Elizabeth/Buffy definitely blurred here, which you handled beautifully. I'm so glad Elizabeth isn't pregnant. They certainly have enough to deal with already. This was also the first time you've mentioned what the future might hold for them in the outside world which was interesting. We all know they won't be able to continue their realtionship once they leave the attic and that will be heartbreaking for them both. I'm interested to know how you'll handle it and dreading it at the same time.

Author's Response: It'll be different when they get out of the attic, but I may still have some tricks up my sleeve for a happy ending :)

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2006 - 04:34 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Seven

Great chapter! Loved it!

Reviewer: Bekah Leigh Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2006 - 03:53 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Seven

Awesome job on this chapter! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Whitelighter354 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2006 - 03:22 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Seven

Thank God!!! I am so happy that she isnt pregnant. I dont even want to think about if she was. It would be different if they were out of the attic. I so cant wait till they are out of there. Great Chapter! Please post Soon! Lighter :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2006 - 11:00 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Seven

So Elisabeth got her period. That's good because she isn't pregnant then. But Will seems to feel deep for her; deeper then a brother should. Because he's hurt because Elisabeth speaks about getting married, having children. And not with him. I wonder if they'll ever be able to escape ... and what will happen after that.

Reviewer: Samantha Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2006 - 08:04 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Seven

Poor Will felt bad hearing Elizabeth's dream of marrying and having children. You can tell that he wants to be that husband for her.

Please update soon.

Reviewer: M Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2006 - 07:45 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Seven

I really like the way you are building this story. I also like that you have continued to write a story and you haven't focused solely on the sex. You are doing a great job weaving the story. You have me captivated. Always looking forward to more!

Author's Response: I'm glad you are liking it. I really wanted to build to the story and their relationship before jumping into the sext. Now that they've had it though, they're going to be having it more often. They're stuck in an attic - what else are they going to do? I've still got a lot of story to tell though too (around the sex of course.)

Reviewer: katakata Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2006 - 03:25 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Seven

Ooohhh ~winces in sympathy for William~ poor thing. He's already there isn't he? In love I mean. So hard to be there alone too so they say (haven't experienced unrequited love myself but still...no one ever says it's easy). Beth loves William obviously but apparently not in exactly the same way. I'm desperate to find out how this will develop for them. Looking forward to the next instalment.

Reviewer: Amarysso Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2006 - 02:02 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Seven

Yay, update! I love this story. Having both the Spike and William character in the same person at the same time, is genius.

Reviewer: Megan/Peta Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2006 - 11:38 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Seven

I really really love your smut in this fic and I am so impressed with how you are handling this fic. It's one of my current favourites. I look forward to some more of their creative explorations.

Reviewer: McChick Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2006 - 11:30 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Seven

Oh this chapter was very nice in the way that Elizabeth was able to get some of her fears out and Will was able to help comfort her. I could feel Will's hurt though when she said she wanted to be married and have a baby cause she cant have that with him... but I guess thats the downfall of falling for your sibling. Loved this chapter, cant wait for the next one!

-Ashley-

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