

Date: 02/14/2006 - 10:12 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Three
Oh that was just perfect. The way he called her Buffy at the end there. Absolute genius. I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope you're able to update again soon!

Date: 02/14/2006 - 09:41 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Three
ahh omg! you cannnot stop there meanie! lol! you need to update really soon or i think im gonna burst!

Date: 02/14/2006 - 09:23 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Three
I was going to say the same thing. That was just plain mean to leave us like that, lol. Please update soon! SOON, please, please. Great chapter. I'm interested in the book to, but I presume it's not that similar to your story? Thanks again, it's one of the stories that I can't wait for updating.

Date: 02/14/2006 - 09:16 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Three
Whew!!!! I thought for damn sure they were going off the edge of that roof!!! Great Chapter.

Date: 02/14/2006 - 09:14 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Three
you are a cruel, cruel woman to leave it there! Argh!! I've never read the book or seen the movie, so this is all completely new and exciting for me. Update soon! Don't leave me hanging!

Date: 02/14/2006 - 03:38 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Two
They are on the roof now? When they starting to tan someone will check what they are doing :) Oh they are trying to find a way out now? I'll stay tuned for the updates :)

Date: 02/14/2006 - 02:59 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Two
Well, I've been sitting her for about 4 hours, and now I have a major problem. I'm out of chapters. I read 32 chapters straight through because it was just too good to stop, and now, there are no more. Which is probably a good thing because its about 4 am. Darn you and your amazing story keeping me up way past my bed time. And stopping on the eve of the escape run through! Well, I'll check back often. No way I'm not with this one to the end, however long that takes. Amazing story, thanks so much for sharing.

Date: 02/14/2006 - 02:51 am Title: Chapter Thirty-One
That bit with Joyce stung, but Elizabeth and Will's conversation. That was priceless, and surprisingly laugh out loud funny. Love watching them try to rationalize this whole situation. So weird, but you've got me sucked in for the long haul. This really is an awesome story.

Date: 02/14/2006 - 02:38 am Title: Chapter Thirty
Poor girl, all dressed up with no one to do... Great chapter. Love how their still plotting ways out. Wonder if we'll ever see Joyce again. Really fun chapter.

Date: 02/14/2006 - 02:31 am Title: Chapter Twenty Nine
Well, they started the talking. Always a good thing. Can never quite guess where this one is going to go. Really great chapter.

Date: 02/14/2006 - 02:24 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight
That evil woman. Poor WIlliam. Knew someone would suffer... better our strong boy than the kids, tho...

Date: 02/14/2006 - 02:17 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven
Was he pretending or not. That sure isn't playing fair. And I do wonder what our friend Joyce it up to. Another interesting development... Great chapter.

Date: 02/14/2006 - 02:08 am Title: Chapter Twenty Six
How devastating for her. For all of them. You make all the emotions so real, the progress so natural. A wonderful chapter.

Date: 02/14/2006 - 02:03 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Five
That was an un pleasant punishment. I wonder what Joyce would think of all of this. She's been gone a long time again. Still, this whole tale is so compelling. Really amazing.

Date: 02/14/2006 - 01:57 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
Knew getting wasted wasn't a good plan. And if there is an truth in Dru's rant, than my suspicions are in the right direction. But raising kids like that, well that sure doesn't lead to normalcy. Another great chapter.

Date: 02/14/2006 - 01:52 am Title: Chapter Twenty Three
Well, all I can say is, that was fun! Great chapter.

Date: 02/14/2006 - 01:33 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
Well, as dire as it seems, it stands to reason that missing Chrismas with Daddy would be a big tip off that she had a secret. But William, just a bit too optimistic. Hope things work out, but then if they do, we wouldn't have this intense suddle sparkage. Lead on, either way. Amazing chapter.

Date: 02/14/2006 - 01:25 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Maybe they should ask Adam... cause Joyce, I don't think she's telling the whole story... I did love the chapter, though.

Date: 02/14/2006 - 01:19 am Title: Chapter Twenty
They really raise quite a few good points about their parents. Wonder what really happened back in the day.

Date: 02/14/2006 - 01:14 am Title: Chapter Nineteen
Amazing how optimistic they can still be. Gotta say I admire their collective gumption. Great chapter. Wonder what Hank's big secret was...

Date: 02/14/2006 - 01:08 am Title: Chapter Eighteen
Doesn't seem like they'll be out anytime near Christmas. And I guess Joyce's great plan is to marry Wes, to get her trust fund... Well, I foresee many problems in many places with all of this. But it is so good I can't stop reading it. Amazing.

Date: 02/14/2006 - 01:01 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
So glad they didn't get in trouble this time. So difficult when one is truly that hung over. A very true to life reaction.

Date: 02/14/2006 - 12:56 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
That was quite a story our William had to tell. And those poor kids not having anywhere to go with all that alcohol and hormones running wild. Damn it would suck is Spike was your brother. A great chapter.

Date: 02/14/2006 - 12:43 am Title: Chapter Fifteen
Cordelia and Amy seducing our William! I love it! Though getting drunk with all Dru's rules, I hope Adam brings breadfast tomorrow.

Date: 02/14/2006 - 12:36 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
Another very appropriate story. Great job.