[Report This]Date: 02/14/2006 - 12:23 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
Okay, maybe I'm slightly more optimistic now. So glad she came for the big day.
[Report This]Date: 02/14/2006 - 12:18 am Title: Chapter Twelve
Hmmm.... wasn't expecting that. Stupid pessimist in me. Great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 02/14/2006 - 12:13 am Title: Chapter Eleven
Glad someone still thinks their situation is rediculous. William might be an optimist, but optimism doesn't make good things happen. I prefer Buffy's realistic outlook. I'll believe it when I see it... But it was a great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 02/14/2006 - 12:06 am Title: Chapter Ten
Not quite sure how Joyce's plan is going, but I guess we have to trust her. Another intriguing chapter.
[Report This]Date: 02/13/2006 - 11:59 pm Title: Chapter Nine
Not sure how the day will go for them. I wonder when they will get to hear from Joyce. I hope she hasn't forgotten them. And I wonder what Dru knows. For even in this story she seems to have a bit of the "sight."
[Report This]Date: 02/13/2006 - 11:53 pm Title: Chapter Eight
“Then my work here is done.”--Love making Hush into a scary story. I was thinking, "what tale are you going to tell?", being rediculously clueless that the whole series we almost worship is based on scary stories. Still, I love how you translated it, and cheers for thinking it up in the first place!
[Report This]Date: 02/13/2006 - 11:44 pm Title: Chapter Seven
I love how Adam is coming a bit onto their side. Sounds like they have quite the festivities set up. And William and Elizabeth, poor kids, so drawn to each other despite... well, cant wait to see what happens.
[Report This]Date: 02/13/2006 - 11:36 pm Title: Chapter Six
Oh, I hope they have their Halloween. Great chapter, despite Dru's battiness.
[Report This]Date: 02/13/2006 - 11:31 pm Title: Chapter Five
And that little bit of chemistry is starting to bubble... So interesting their situation. The poor kids missing Halloween. I wonder, if Ethan even knows about all Joyce's children... Another wonderful chapter.
[Report This]Date: 02/13/2006 - 11:21 pm Title: Chapter Four
Six months, in one room? I have to say I'm with Elizabeth on this one. Great chatpter.
[Report This]Date: 02/13/2006 - 11:15 pm Title: Chapter Three
Well, she's a bit twisted. So dark, the mood, but I really can't stop reading.
[Report This]Date: 02/13/2006 - 11:06 pm Title: Chapter Two
Well that was a boat load of forboding. Wonder what the manor will be like...
[Report This]Date: 02/13/2006 - 11:00 pm Title: Chapter One
So compelling, the two of them holding to each other so they can be strong for everyone else. Amazing.
[Report This]Date: 02/13/2006 - 09:42 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Two
Great Chapter!!!!! I am waiting with MUCH anticipation for the next one... plz post soon!!!!! I can't wait till the spuffiness starts!!! It's so funny how Will can't hide it very well...
[Report This]Date: 02/13/2006 - 09:09 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Two
Glad to see William and Elizabeth finally being able to take things into their own hands. I wonder how the newfound hope of escaping will change their relationship.
[Report This]Date: 02/13/2006 - 08:14 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Two
finally they are testin their way around..... love the update and waitinfg for more!
[Report This]Date: 02/13/2006 - 05:23 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Two
more soon please!
[Report This]Date: 02/13/2006 - 04:29 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Two
Yay! I'm so happy for the update. I love this story. Good chapter... please keep them coming.
[Report This]Date: 02/13/2006 - 03:33 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Two
love it!! you're a wonderful writer...and although i love the angst and the ust!! :P i hope there'll be no more beatings and i can't really bear that :S thanx...hope you update soon!! loooovee it!!
Author's Response: Don't worry - I like to get creative with their punishments. No more beatings though I can't say that Dru doesn't have something else in her repetoire. We'll have to see where the story takes me.
[Report This]Date: 02/13/2006 - 03:28 pm Title: Chapter One
so they're trying, huh? i do hope ( but i think you have other ideas... lol) that they could escape their prison, their grandmother and their mother too. The resemblance between joyce and dru is getting scary...
[Report This]Date: 02/13/2006 - 03:00 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Two
What a teaser chapter! lol Please write more soon!
[Report This]Date: 02/13/2006 - 02:03 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Two
Great to see an update! Hope they don't get caught.
[Report This]Date: 02/13/2006 - 12:16 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Two
Short chapter but it was good. I hope they make it out ok, if Dru catches them there will be hell to pay. She would probably beat them both or maybe take Dawn and Connor away from them....oh maybe if she takes D/C away B/S will turn to each other for comfort and provide us with some Spuffy loving! LOL great story, truly addictive, the best I have ever read!
Jennybean, when will you be posting the next chapter?
Thanks :)
Author's Response: I think I will have a Valentine's Day update for you all :)
[Report This]Date: 02/13/2006 - 10:14 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Two
Loved the chapter! Hope they'll be ok and be able to make it back inside ok!
[Report This]Date: 02/13/2006 - 09:37 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Two
O my God they are beginning to make there move.Please don't wait so long,befor you update.I need this story to pick up.But of course I will wait for you LOL.