The great escape..wonder how it will go. I really fear if they get caught what will happen! I'm so glad you updated this, I love it. Please continue :)

Ahh! I'm glad I found your fic hosted here. It was one of my last tries as I know the one I usually review u at is not up for er, uploading new chapters yet. I hope to read the new chapter soon! :)

Author's Response: I'm glad you found it too! I'm not sure how long AFF is going to be down and I know everyone over there is impatient!! You've all been spoiled by the everyday updates ;)

Hmm... Joyce is definitely a contender for "Mommy Dearest" award of the year. Great chapter. I can't wait to see how long the denial will last. Please keep updating.

Well momma dearest showed,ingaged and every thing.Living high on the hog,so to speak,all because she wants to help her dear children.Yeah right.Mean while spike confronts Buffy about watching him do his errrr thing.Oh yes the hell they have been living is beginning to catch up with them.Spike spoke very candley and way up front with her,but
buffy is trying to live in the de nail,or should I say swim inthat river.You have written this well,In this scenario what else could happen,right or wrong,we are sexual creatures,and it is going to happen.Spike has no girl friend,Buffy has no boyfriend,so God help them,I find this a non judgmental situation.

Author's Response: This review makes me very happy because I didn't want to rush things with them and just make it a sex story. I really wanted people who may have been put off by the incest to see this a situation where human nature took over. I'm glad it's working.

Uh-oh! Things are getting steamy! More soon!

Great chapter! Could strangle Joyce!! She doesn't care about her kids....why bother to keep coming??

i loved it! im getting frusterated though....they always come so close to more but you keep them further apart. but i understand. that was hott though! more soon please!

Oooh boy...that was intense with Mother. You're making me want to go and get Flowers in the Attic, ya know. Not to compare/contrast, but just to see how far they actually went in the book..that does sound like compare/contrast then, doens't it? LOL. Well, it's different in a book like that, more taboo than creating a story here if you will.

What I'm trying to say is that I love this story and I get so excited when I see its been updated. The UST is KILLING me but I know that when it finally does happen, it's going to be explosive and well worth the wait. :) Great job.

Author's Response: You don't know how hard it is for me to hold back on buying the book. I haven't read it in over 15 years, but writing this has made me want to revisit. I made a promise to myself though that I would wait until I was done writing the story b/c I don't want to lift the plot too closely and since I'm going on memory now I figure it's working. But once I'm done with this - I'm so reading it again!! I would love for you to wait too b/c I'm sure the book is much better LOL!

Seems as if Buffy too is suffering under the UST. ;-) Oops.. Elisabeth got caught by William. And they are very good at pretending nothing had happened. ~ So Joyce is there again. She forgot to wish William a happy birthday... My impression? Joyce doesn't really care about her kids. Buffy is right; she would have been worried if seeing the twins. ~ Buffy and William talked now but they are still on the plane to ignore everything. Wonder where it will end. Will they be capable to flee? Would be the best.

What a great chapter. Great start with William catching Elizabeth watching him. The confrontation between Elizabeth and Joyce was just fantastic. Loved Elizabeth's rage and Joyce's 'less than sane' response. We can really see William's determination to do what has to be done to get out of the attic. Also enjoyed the last conversation. It's really interesting to see Elizabeth and William trying to deal with the growing sexual tension, especially now that they are acknowledging it to each other. Really looking forward to more.

Thanks for the update! Wow, things are getting pretty heated between the two of them. Wonder who will be the first one to crack and make a move?

I just read all thirty chapters straight through, and I'm totally hooked. Love the UST. I usually hate first person stories, but your writing is so wonderful, I didn't even notice for a long time. (that's a compliment :)