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Date: 09/09/2007 - 10:11 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Eight

aw, the sex was sweet.

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Date: 09/09/2007 - 10:03 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Seven

ah, I know Will wants Elizabeth, and it seems like a slap in the face that she wants another man. But the stories for the twins sound good.

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Date: 09/09/2007 - 09:58 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Six

I loved this line: Damn Spike and his sinister attraction!

Though typical of a man to not take the consequences seriously! But, oh, hot sex.

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Date: 09/09/2007 - 09:48 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

I forgot how there were no dogs in the book. Oh, hot, taking her like that. I'm surprised Will was able to keep up the charade, since he should remember Spike woudn't have a reflection.

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Date: 09/09/2007 - 09:41 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

I love the line from the show about it being bent and making her scream. And I love how Buffy was thinking about how she trusts William, and knew he would be loving and caring as a first sex partner should be. The sex was hot! And William sounded like Spike, all passionate and sexy. warm seed, which is a nice touch, since Spike has cold seed. And I like the last paragraph, esp. the "he flashed a shy smile before squeezing my hand in support." That was nice, they weren't going to sweep it under the rug.

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Date: 09/09/2007 - 09:27 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Three

bad dogs. and oh, Will wanted to stop and he was crying. Nice touch.

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Date: 09/09/2007 - 09:22 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Two

sunbathing and Elizabeths boobs handing down on Will, hee.

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Date: 09/09/2007 - 09:18 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-One

Joyce shows up, and I think she has totally divorced herself from her kids. Sad.

Hmm, denial kids. But that's good that you have Elizabeth watching him masterbate, and Will finds out.

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Date: 09/09/2007 - 09:07 pm Title: Chapter Thirty

plans are good. But wow, catching him jerking the jerkin. I imagine he would be doing that a lot

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Date: 09/09/2007 - 08:55 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Nine

poor Will.

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Date: 09/09/2007 - 08:49 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight

oh, wow, that was harsh.

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Date: 09/09/2007 - 08:37 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven

Poor William, Joyce didnt show. And the massage was sexy.

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Date: 09/09/2007 - 08:29 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Six

I like the Buffy story. and oh, things are heating up for the couple.

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Date: 09/09/2007 - 08:25 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

poor kids.

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Date: 09/09/2007 - 08:21 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

oh wow, I thought he was going to be whipped. bad things happening, so sad.

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Date: 09/09/2007 - 08:17 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Three

Dawn asking what is fellatio, hee. Oh, the sex positions...so wrong but so right.

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Date: 09/09/2007 - 08:02 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

poor Will and Elizabeth

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Date: 09/09/2007 - 07:30 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One

I'm pretty sure in the first four books no one knows that the parents are ....I'll not mention what. Will Joyce know the secret, or is it like the book where only the grandfather and grandmother know?

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Date: 09/09/2007 - 07:19 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

that tummy rubbing was so sexy. I do hope the kids find out the whole story at the end.

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Date: 09/09/2007 - 06:32 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen

Maybe this guy will play with me until I go to Heaven with daddy, too.” ruh-roh, is it ironic foreshadowing?
I like William's award winning speech, hee.

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Date: 09/09/2007 - 06:25 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen

Elizabeth was kind of insane for accusing William, but yeah, she was angry and took it out on him. Poor kids. I have to say that Joyce is a really selfish woman. My parents didn't get along and had lots of fights. At times they would get along and it would spook me, since I'm used to them angry with each other. But my dad died when I was 16, and mom cried and cried and was upset for a year. Then she got a boyfriend. Actually, I'm not upset she did, 'cause I knew that even though at times she liked, maybe even loved my dad, she would move on. But Hank is suppose to be Joyce's love of her life, t he man she left her parents for. If Hank was anything like the father in the book, Hank must of spoiled Joyce. I know where the story is going, but it's sad how Joyce just abandons her kids.

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Date: 09/09/2007 - 06:14 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

I love William's explanation of the story. Poor pukey Elizabeth.

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Date: 09/09/2007 - 06:00 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

hee, yeah, that was Penthouse Forum material, but great stuff.

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Date: 09/09/2007 - 05:20 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen

I love this: “First of all, it wasn’t wine on my birthday. It was a bottle of Jack Daniels, which is much more manly. And second of all, there may have been a porn movie involved as well, with women in it before you get smart, which is so not gay.” porn and whisky, hee.
Though Pakrer treated Buffy good, I think it's good that they didnt' take the next step.

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Date: 09/09/2007 - 05:11 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

Joyce mistook the role Buffy put her in, hee.

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