

Date: 01/30/2006 - 04:29 pm Title: Chapter Thirty
Great chapter. I like how the story is progressing (nice tension, possible escape, etc). Please continue with updates.

Date: 01/30/2006 - 09:25 am Title: Chapter Thirty
Very hot, loving the UST.
Your writing is so engaging, so well craftted. Can't help but wonder, thought, what Spike would do if (when?) he discovers Buffy under the same circumstances????
I am addicted -- more, please!!

Date: 01/29/2006 - 10:29 pm Title: Chapter Thirty
I guess Buffy is going to have some nice dreams tonight involving her brother.

Date: 01/29/2006 - 10:27 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Nine
Wonderful chapter as usual! It's good to see that Spike finally told Buffy of his feelings he has for her.

Date: 01/29/2006 - 09:47 am Title: Chapter Thirty
OMFG, come on! So much UST, it's all good though. I hope they find a way out soon, or the UST gets changed to the resolved type of sexual tension. Man. Great story, please update again soon!

Date: 01/29/2006 - 04:43 am Title: Chapter Thirty
Absolutely loving the build up and I am looking forward to seeing how Buffy deals with this growing problem.

Date: 01/29/2006 - 03:46 am Title: Chapter Thirty
woah agreed, love the way you write. anyway great chapter lol i think i got an idea what william was thinking of ;p well anyway please post the next chapter soon! cant wait for the update! tara

Date: 01/29/2006 - 12:21 am Title: Chapter Thirty
Hot, hot , hot! I'm with William and Elizabeth on needing to get out of that attic and away from Dru and her punishments. Gee, I wonder if William was thinking about anyone while he was jerking off....lol.

Date: 01/28/2006 - 10:52 pm Title: Chapter Thirty
I want to see them get out of there.Poor boy having to go through that hell.And Buffy cought in the spin of Spikes orgasm.These kids have got to get out of this hell.

Date: 01/28/2006 - 08:08 pm Title: Chapter Thirty
I am really happy that they are going to try and escape the attic. I love the way you write. I wish I could write this good. You describe things so well and you make the readers feel what they are feeling in each chapter. I wonder what is going to happen when they try to leave. I mean, if they succeed then I guess they will runaway and try to get their life in order. Or they might just caught. I so hope they dont get caught. There is no telling what their grandmother will do to them. I womder how Joyce would take ift if they succeded. Well, anyways! I liked the chapter and I really cant wait till you post again. I wonder what is going to happen! ;) Please post soon! I love it! Lighter

Date: 01/28/2006 - 05:02 pm Title: Chapter Thirty
Great chapter!

Date: 01/28/2006 - 04:49 pm Title: Chapter Thirty
Uhoh! They've reached the point of no return! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Date: 01/28/2006 - 04:11 pm Title: Chapter Thirty
William is now officially freaked out. hehe. Really enjoyed this chapter. Definitely eager to know what is going to happen next.

Date: 01/28/2006 - 03:57 pm Title: Chapter Thirty
Damn..IT's about time they came up with a plan to get out of there.
Very sensual orgasm scene.. : D
Great update!!

Date: 01/28/2006 - 03:38 pm Title: Chapter Thirty
Good that William thinks very hard of ways to get out of the attic now. And William working out some of this tension ;-)

Date: 01/28/2006 - 03:33 pm Title: Chapter Thirty
wow...just wow... excellent chapter!! keep'em coming **lol** pun intended** thanx so much! ;)

Date: 01/28/2006 - 03:33 pm Title: Chapter Thirty
that was quite sensual!
and i like the idea that they are looking for a way to escape. Is their mother going to visit them again? i surely don't miss her...

Date: 01/26/2006 - 03:34 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Nine
Thanks for the update! I'm glad Spike is feeling a bit better now.

Date: 01/25/2006 - 08:50 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Nine
Hey Jennybean!
Okay.. it makes me so happy when you update because I love this fic so much! :) I am glad that he has come out of denial! I mean, I still want spuffyness! I just figured that he would think that it is wrong. I hope that their mother comes soon because I want a confrontation! I want one more than they do! LOL! I hope that things will get better for them! But I know that it is only gonna get worse before it gets better! :) Please post soon!
Lighter

Date: 01/25/2006 - 05:14 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Nine
You are an amazing writer. I'm just gushing with excitement for this story. You can do tender, frightening, suspense, sexy, happy... anything. Great addition to an excellent story!

Date: 01/25/2006 - 04:12 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Nine
Wonderful chapter! I felt so bad for William.

Date: 01/25/2006 - 11:30 am Title: Chapter Twenty Nine
Awwwwwwww.....my heart breaks for him. And Elizabeth. I love this story so much, more please!

Date: 01/25/2006 - 10:25 am Title: Chapter Twenty Nine
God this is so pitiful.Talk about strange.I feel so sorry for the two of them.Yeah the witch from hell.there grandmother.And what about there grandfather,where in the hell is he hiding?Please let this begin to get better.So far it just go's from bad to worse.and your chapters are short.Please let this story move on.you are driving me around the bend.Give us more info.Please.

Date: 01/24/2006 - 11:15 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Nine
This was a particularly well-written chapter. William's admission was beautifully done, as was Elizabeth's explanation of her take on the situation. As the very wise Victor Frankl once said, "An abnormal reaction to an abnormal situation is normal behaviour." Kudos to you jennybean.

Date: 01/24/2006 - 11:08 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Nine
Poor Will..Not only is he in physical pain..he is in mental pain too. You did a really great job of describing the wounds and pain that he was in. Very touching moment with Elizabeth taking care of him..
Looking forward to more : )