

Date: 10/27/2005 - 06:09 am Title: Four
I love your concept of making the Spuffy story based on 4 funerals and a wedding, but it would have been much better if you expanded the stories by at least twice the chapters more, like explaining how Spike and Buffy discovered their feelings towards each other, etc.
I can see briefly that Buffy had came to fall in love with Spike, but other than some "weird expressions/looks" in Spike's eyes, all I could tell was that he loves Drusilla and Drusilla only.
Still, a very good try. Hope to read more of your stories. TC

Date: 10/11/2005 - 10:46 am Title: Three
can't wait for chapter 4. I loved them movie and you are doing a good job with this story.

Date: 09/29/2005 - 09:45 pm Title: One
wow. little different. i never saw the movie. i think that's a good thing though. alot of the spuffy fics that are based on movies tend to have lines directly out of the film and it takes away from the orignality of the fic. it helps that i never saw the flm though. great job. keep up the great work. loved it.