[Report This]Date: 10/24/2005 - 11:15 am Title: Chapter Eleven
This is a great story, keep writing!! I like it a lot though i wish they'd talk to each other a little more, it would add to their relationship. Anyhow, great sotry, well written, continue!
[Report This]Date: 10/24/2005 - 10:45 am Title: Chapter Eleven
I do like this chapter. Hairstylist Lorne is always good and Buffy is so cute in this one. You write Buffy really well, but she's a little irritating when it comes to her emotional shut downs... with William and Willow. Hope she becomes happier soon.
[Report This]Date: 10/24/2005 - 10:28 am Title: Chapter Eleven
hey again, another chapie that im gonna tell u how well u did it! and go u 4 keeping daily updates!
[Report This]Date: 10/24/2005 - 09:49 am Title: Chapter Eleven
Lorne's "horrors of brassiness" line made me laugh. William's insecurity about his looks is charming. I loved Cecily's reaction to his makeover. This chapter showed that Buffy and William click in and out of bed. Nice job moving their relationship forward and Buffy's sidestep about William cheating was another clue to her past relationship insecurity.
[Report This]Date: 10/24/2005 - 08:22 am Title: Chapter Eleven
Fluff is good, especialy on a monday morning. . . . nice coupley scenes between the two. . . and nice to see them outside ouf a bedroom. . . .
[Report This]Date: 10/24/2005 - 08:17 am Title: Chapter Eleven
Loved your Lorne. Another great chapter. Looking for more please
[Report This]Date: 10/24/2005 - 07:36 am Title: Chapter Eleven
great job! I like these moments, it proves that their attraction isn't solely based on sex, there is some substance
[Report This]Date: 10/24/2005 - 07:34 am Title: Chapter Eleven
I actually LIKED that sexfree chapter. Maybe after dinner they can talk about non sex related stuff...
[Report This]Date: 10/24/2005 - 07:09 am Title: Chapter Eleven
Very Spuffy and very nice.
I loved the whole way to brought out the make over of William.
I hope Cecily implodes (and not in a good way).
Ha ha ha. I always wanted to see Spike get back at Cecily.
spuf
[Report This]Date: 10/24/2005 - 06:52 am Title: Chapter Eleven
Great chapter!! Loved it! Please update soon!
[Report This]Date: 10/24/2005 - 05:55 am Title: Chapter Eleven
AWESOME...MORE PLEASE
Date: 10/24/2005 - 05:47 am Title: Chapter Eleven
ooh! i knew that would be good! love this fic. thanks for update so quickly.
[Report This]Date: 10/24/2005 - 05:42 am Title: Chapter Eleven
Well the story is moving forward and I really like this, hope to read more soon I like the frequent updates.
[Report This]Date: 10/24/2005 - 04:31 am Title: Chapter Eleven
Gorgeous, gorgeous, gorgeous! You're a tricky one too aren't you? Sneaking that quite compelling plot in there when we weren't looking - I mean hey, everyone needs a little mindless smut every now and then just to take the edge of don't they? Still, while I may have come for the hotness that is Buffy and Spike I find myself sticking around to discover whether William can discover his 'inner Spike' and whether Buffy can lose her 'inner Faith' while actually learning to have some faith in her own inherent value despite whatever painful experiences she endured back in California (no doubt at the hands of Angel...can't wait for that plot line to be revealed either). Go you good thing!
[Report This]Date: 10/24/2005 - 04:28 am Title: Chapter Eleven
This is a great story, and I love that you update a lot, I look daily, and it gives me a happy to see it.
[Report This]Date: 10/24/2005 - 03:44 am Title: Chapter Eleven
That was a GREAT chapter!
[Report This]Date: 10/24/2005 - 03:20 am Title: Chapter Eleven
oh yeah!!! cecily was shot down by the both of them.... that was a good one! waiting for more!
[Report This]Date: 10/24/2005 - 02:41 am Title: Chapter Eleven
definitely loving it so far
[Report This]Date: 10/24/2005 - 02:22 am Title: Chapter Eleven
Even sex-free it was GREAT! Nice make-over (love you did the bleached tips and no the whole head). So next chapter - full of Hot-Monkey-Sex? Love the tale (even with plot points sneaking in now and again). Love Lorne! Love the smut! More please.
[Report This]Date: 10/24/2005 - 02:11 am Title: Chapter Eleven
It may have been a sex free chapter but it was brilliant...I love the fact that Cecily got her comeuppance too.
mmm..hot,sexy William...I want one too!!
[Report This]Date: 10/24/2005 - 01:37 am Title: Chapter Eleven
love plot that is creeping in..................keep it up....William does need confidence and so does Buffy. I am happy that they are giving it to each other.
[Report This]Date: 10/24/2005 - 01:35 am Title: Chapter Eleven
RL got in the way for a bit, but I enjoyed catching back up on this story. I love it to pieces. This is an amazing story. More please.
[Report This]Date: 10/24/2005 - 01:20 am Title: Chapter Eleven
Perfectly lovely and enjoyable chapter.
Thank you for delighting me in such a way !
[Report This]Date: 10/24/2005 - 01:11 am Title: Chapter Eleven
I don't usually go in for AU/Fantasy fics, but this one's grabbed me. Keep it coming!
[Report This]Date: 10/24/2005 - 12:51 am Title: Chapter Eleven
wow. awsome story. i'm sorry that i didn't start it earlier.can't wait for them both to figure out that they love each other. more soon please