

Date: 11/26/2005 - 09:02 pm Title: Consequences
A Spike-shaped Xander? I can't wait to see what happens! I also wonder how well Tara's spell will work. Good chapter.

Date: 11/26/2005 - 04:24 pm Title: Beyond Repair
Good chapters. I am glad that Xander was caught.
I am also glad that Buffy told Spike that she loved him.
You did a great job of showing Buffyt's epiphany regarding her feelings for Spike. I can't wait to read what Anya is going to show Xander.

Date: 11/26/2005 - 03:51 pm Title: Beyond Repair
Show him what? I need to know!

Date: 11/26/2005 - 11:03 am Title: Beyond Repair
Great new chapters.I'm glad Buffy finally knows,and I hope Xander realizes how wrong he was.

Date: 11/26/2005 - 03:38 am Title: Beyond Repair
Oh dear, oh dear... just what is Anya going to show Xander now? For a moment there, I thought he was going to find Warren in his appartment!
I got a little confused about the terrible thing(s) done to Spike by Warren that Spike was so ashamed of... but I think that's more to do with a lot of other fics I've read where Spike's (had)done practically everything that there's nothing I could imagine that terrible. In this story's circumstance, ambiguity, leaving the detail to the readers own imagination is a clever solution...
So glad though that they've gotten over that hurdle. Now we sit back and see the effects of the vengeance wish - does the wish include Warren?

Date: 11/26/2005 - 12:16 am Title: Beyond Repair
wow...i loved this chapter....very powerful...i loved how buffy handled the "secret". It was so perfect....i can't wait for more

Date: 11/25/2005 - 12:36 am Title: Losing It
I loved it!!! It was such sweet caring moment between Buffy and Spike! I can't wait for the next update

Date: 11/25/2005 - 12:32 am Title: Losing It
YEA!!!! Awwwww. Bad Xander. But, hey, happy chappie ending!!! Keep 'em coming!

Date: 11/24/2005 - 11:53 pm Title: Losing It
I was actually yelling "Dawn come home!" at my monitor. What a bullying rat bastard Xander was! At least Buffy was able to see the real him I hope that one day Anya doesn't let him shame her anymore too. Great chapter!

Date: 11/24/2005 - 11:24 pm Title: Losing It
Despite Xander's asshole-ish-ness, that was so very beautiful. I'm in tears. I hope Buffy or Dawn kick Xander's butt. What a way to perk up my terrible day. Looking forward to more.

Date: 11/24/2005 - 06:43 pm Title: Losing It
I love it, that's all I can say.

Date: 11/24/2005 - 02:38 am Title: Conversations
Oh dear... I'm really, really not liking where I think this is going. I feel like this is about to veer away from what I call 'light' angst into something much more dark and cruel, a place I don't like going to very often and somewhere I try to avoid.
I think you did such a great job in early chapters helping the reader to visualise the horrors inflicted upon Spike, it's almost too scary to feel that you're about to take us back there through the actions of a Scoobie. I'm torn... should I read the next chapter(s) or should I skip a few? I might wait and see what the next chapter reviewers are saying... scardy cat that I am.
Great writing... got me spooked *shivvers*
Author's Response: don't worry...its bad but not as bad as you're thinking really...and this next chapter is actually quite important...you might not want to actually skip :)

Date: 11/23/2005 - 07:39 pm Title: Conversations
That bastard. Xander Harris is ugly inside.

Date: 11/22/2005 - 09:03 pm Title: The Power of Choice
Nicely done.

Date: 11/22/2005 - 03:06 pm Title: Retribution
I love this story,especially traumatized Spike.Is Buffy going to find out what happened to him?Please update soon.

Date: 11/21/2005 - 06:59 pm Title: Retribution
I hope she wishes for Spikes chip to be put in Warrens head!

Date: 11/21/2005 - 06:21 pm Title: Retribution
Great update. Will Spike ever get back to his own self?
Author's Response: We'll see as the story progresses... remember that although it's taken like 6 chapters, it's only like the day after he got out....

Date: 11/21/2005 - 05:59 pm Title: Retribution
LOVE THE VENGEANCE! CAN I HELP? CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT DAWN HAS IN MIND

Date: 11/21/2005 - 05:47 pm Title: Retribution
I knew it! Dawn's a very determined and passionte ex-key, isn't she? Poor, poor Spike. So broken, so ashamed of himself, so doesn't need the burden of a vengeance wish... whether wished by him or Dawn... I see only bad things ahead.
Feeling sad but loving this update. Thank you again, pet.

Date: 11/20/2005 - 11:13 pm Title: Opportunity
I started reading this story last night and was pleasantly surprised to find another chapter today. It did not disappoint! I will anxiously await the next installment - can't wait to find out where you go next! Keep up the great work!

Date: 11/20/2005 - 04:05 pm Title: Opportunity
Oh my gosh... right up until the end I thought it was going to be Dawn! It never entered my head that Spike would have, even subconsiously, yearn for vengeance...
The way you write Spikes broken state, the way the scene slows right down to keep pace with his halting movements is very clever. As Dawn held him and helped him downstairs I felt myself bend with them.
Great chapter, pet.

Date: 11/20/2005 - 04:00 pm Title: Opportunity
I hope that nothing will happen that will further injure Spike's psyche.

Date: 11/20/2005 - 03:51 pm Title: Opportunity
love it that little bastard deserves everything he gets. Thais is turning into a very emotional story. Love it though

Date: 11/20/2005 - 02:51 pm Title: Facing Demons
The story just keeps getting better and better. This chapter was very sweet. I really cannot stand self righteous Xander. He needs to be brought down a peg or two.

Date: 11/20/2005 - 03:36 am Title: Facing Demons
great update I love this story! it is so captivating!