

Date: 11/19/2005 - 12:48 pm Title: In the Trying
Great chapter! I mean, really, REALLY awesome. The end almost had me in tears. I loved it, and you are an excellent writer!

Date: 11/19/2005 - 02:20 am Title: In the Trying
Really good stuff! Keep going, I love it.

Date: 11/19/2005 - 12:29 am Title: In the Trying
again....wow...I could feel the lump in my throat and the tears coming to my eyes. This is just a beautiful story that makes one feel so much while reading it.
Post again soon.

Date: 11/18/2005 - 09:35 pm Title: In the Trying
I love this story. What a beautiful chapter.

Date: 11/18/2005 - 08:54 pm Title: In the Trying
Nicely done. This is my favorite story and I look forward to your updates.

Date: 11/18/2005 - 08:28 am Title: Defining Justice
I hope that Dawn won't disown Spike in his time of need. Why doesn't anyone ever remember that Xander tried to rape Buffy when he was possessed by a Hyena. What is the difference. I am really sick of Xander's holier than though attitude. Please update soon. Great chapter.

Date: 11/18/2005 - 04:32 am Title: Defining Justice
I so wouldn't want to be Buffy right now, I wonder how Dawn will handle the news? Poor Spike. Great chapter, so very well written, and easy to read,
Love it!!

Date: 11/18/2005 - 02:05 am Title: Defining Justice
all i can say is wow....i love it. The amount of emotion that i feel while reading it....wow

Date: 11/18/2005 - 12:56 am Title: Defining Justice
Great chapter! I can't wait for the next one!

Date: 11/17/2005 - 09:33 am Title: Through Another's Eyes
Another great chapter. I really don't care for Xander in this story. He never sees the big picture. It is heartbreaking to read the description of Spike's injuries and his reactions to Buffy.

Date: 11/17/2005 - 05:32 am Title: Laying the Blame
Bingo! She figured out what she did to Spike.

Date: 11/17/2005 - 02:50 am Title: Through Another's Eyes
Oh, this was PAINFUL. I adore your ability to convey Buffy's confusion and frustration, Spike's inability to believe that Buffy does in fact care for him, and Xander's completely utter lack of understanding Buffy or her anger. I am enjoying this immensely and cannot wait to see what else is in store. And you are seriously becoming one of my favorite authors!

Date: 11/16/2005 - 10:28 pm Title: Through Another's Eyes
Great chapter, I feel so sorry for Spike.

Date: 11/16/2005 - 08:11 am Title: The Mercy Seat
What a heartbreaking chapter. This was very well written. Please update when able.

Date: 11/16/2005 - 04:30 am Title: The Mercy Seat
Great chapter.

Date: 11/16/2005 - 12:31 am Title: The Mercy Seat
Oh! God, you made me cry. Good to cry, crying good. Means good writing. Keep it up!

Date: 11/16/2005 - 12:10 am Title: The Mercy Seat
wow...wow....wow...i just don't know what to say. I could feel my own heart breaking for spike and for what buffy must have been feeling. It was just,,,,wow....

Date: 11/15/2005 - 10:10 pm Title: The Mercy Seat
Aww. poor Spike, recovery period now huh?

Date: 11/15/2005 - 09:35 am Title: Deliverance
Great chapter. I hope that is the last we hear from Warren. You did a really great job of describing Spike's reactions to everything and everyone. Please update soon.

Date: 11/15/2005 - 06:07 am Title: Deliverance
WOW that was amazing - i can't wait to see what will happen next. This is an amazing story.

Date: 11/15/2005 - 04:45 am Title: Deliverance
Extremely good job here! Really great!
Thanks

Date: 11/15/2005 - 01:45 am Title: Deliverance
Oh my god, thank you so much for getting him out. I wish Buffy would have killed the bastard, especially after learning that the doors really weren't rigged. Nice to think of him being someone's bitch in prosin though. Can't wait for the next chapter and bringing Spike home.

Date: 11/15/2005 - 12:48 am Title: No Going Back
Glad he's finally out. Go Dawn with the beat down, even if it was only one kick. Really curious to see how Spike adjusts to his freedom. Also curious to see what sort of interactions occur now that Spike's back with the Scoobies. Thanks for not such a gut wrenching cliffhanger again. Great update. Can't wait for more.

Date: 11/14/2005 - 11:39 pm Title: Deliverance
Reviewing here, since the BSV is down--Love this story! It is so very awesome...but wondering what Xander will do now that his dream of being with Buffy is shattered....great update....

Date: 11/14/2005 - 03:59 pm Title: Out of Control
I am glad that Buffy found Spike. I cannot believe how awful these chapters were. (I mean how demented Warren's behavior was toward Spike) I hope there will be a reprieve in the punishment toward Spike. You can't let Warren take Spike or harm Buffy. Please update soon.